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Creative Nonfiction Drama Inspirational

Fishing is not about catching fish, nor is it about the fishing equipment used, nor the type of sharp hooks, weapons and bait used to trick fish or the thick and strong fishing line used for fishing. However, this is something that must be done in order to fulfill the lives of fishing fishermen. For whatever reason, the target fish and their friends are found in all waters, both fresh water and sea water, where they are used.


It is clear that the inhabitants of fish and ponds in the ocean are very happy if they are fished with conscience and patience, especially for anglers and fishermen in tricking the fish. Fish will always be sincere and happy towards every human who hooks them even though they are unknowingly being tricked slowly instead of being hurt by changing the color, sense of creativity and intention of the water where they live.


Fishermen rely on ropes, hooks and nets to get their catch, they rely on the tides of sea water to anchor at night while fishermen find it difficult to anchor their boats and cannot get to land. They often work at night because it is the biggest wave in their lives which is an ideal outcome for their family life


Tides and night determine the place where the two celestial bodies collide and are witnessed by the Sun on the other side of the world. The sun could only peek at the event. Poets and fishermen become actors who embody God's creation.


There is hope in the sketch of the fishermen's skill in catching fish, even though their lives are increasingly marginalized from civilization and are starting to be marginalized because they do not have education or stability, nature always looks uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent. Similar to the desires of fishermen who always experience ups and downs in earning a living


The engine on the boat can no longer be used because it has expired from what his father left behind. There is hope in the causal sketch of a qualified fisherman. Nature always seems to be uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent, similar to the desires of fishermen who always go up and down in search of a living, the engine on the boat can no longer be used because it is already very old.


Fishing nets remain loyal even though they are sometimes torn due to age or being carried on coral rocks, but this does not reduce the feeling of continuing to fish for the survival of him and his family. The boat he rowed never complained, fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of their lives and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and sincere because they knew their function.


The calm blue sea is as calm as the feelings of a child who wants to dedicate himself to his late father and mother and his surviving siblings who always support his family. A steady soul is used to facing storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature, in harmony with the towering mountains in the range of hundreds of islands presented in nature, the same way to the depth of the trough like a fisherman's dream.


For example, Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature has made him strong and humble, abundant catches and the difficulty of getting fuel for fishing have become his daily life. The waves crashing, the wind and the storm that hit him were as if he had passed through his old age.


His father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have health insurance or insurance, either government or private. Bagas was forged by his father armed with excellent maritime knowledge. Their family are real fishermen


Fishing nets remain faithful even though frequent tornadoes occur. The boat he rowed never complained when the engine couldn't be used because it often broke down. Fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of themselves and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and willing because they knew their function.


Fish and deep sea inhabitants are always silent and moving, unlike marine mammal inhabitants who are always joking and humming happily as if there is never a problem. That's how whales and dolphins always sing happily with their distinctive shrill voices and always cheerful demeanor. Likewise, the waves are angry with the sea dwellers which always cheat on the coral. Right now he does not even have the heart to slap the waves or curse them with his venomous chatter because the fact is that He never laments his fate, no matter how hard life at sea hits him, he still exists and lives with gratitude.


He had to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. Harapan Island in the Thousand Islands, Jakarta is his transit home and the sea is his main home. His mother was forced to let him go because of the bond between his little children who were supposed to be Bagas' younger siblings. He was forced to give in for the success of his younger siblings' education


The island is 28 nautical miles from the center of the country's capital "Jakarta" which will no longer be used for environmental, political or whatever reasons that the fishermen clearly never care about. Even though the remains of colonialism are still visible, it can be seen that this is the outermost island close to the capital of this country.


"Harapan" or “hope” in English Word is being the name of this island is a hiding place for the nation's warriors to escape in the past from the pursuit of my nation's invaders in the past and is truly a hope for the fishermen who inhabit it.


The sea is blue and calm, as calm as the feelings of a small child who always supports his mother and younger siblings. A steady spirit is used to being hit by storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature. In sync with the towering mountains on the edge of the island which are clearly visible when the weather is good, in sync with the depth of the trough like the invisible dream of fishermen.


This island is indeed a tourist destination for both local and foreign tourists. It looks very exotic and the island's residents look well-established from the outside, but not the Bagas family. His family was hit by waves and abrasion of material until it became small white sand that dotted the vast waters of Jakarta. It's sad, but that's the life that must be lived.


April 24, 2024 02:21

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Dea Nkt
00:50 Apr 30, 2024

the story is a story description, telling the story of a child named Bagaskara who has a profession as a fisherman. His father leave him forever because disease. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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Suci Oktavianggi
00:50 Apr 30, 2024

I like the story, it's good and cool

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Mia Agustin
00:49 Apr 30, 2024

I think this story is very interesting and inspires everyone to always fight. I really like the lives of the fishermen in the story. Where he struggles to earn a living for his family. This story contains a lot of moral messages, namely, no matter how difficult the problem that befalls you, you must continue to exist and live with gratitude.

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Sarah Septiyani
00:49 Apr 30, 2024

This story really teaches us to continue to be grateful, because this story is about a 15 year old teenager who gave up his education to support his family. This story teaches us to always be grateful whatever the circumstances, of course it is very motivating for readers and very good for teenage readers to read.

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00:44 Apr 30, 2024

I am very interested in this story, I think this short story is very good, it tells the story of a fisherman who works hard not just for fun but so he can provide for his family.

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Salsa Bilasafira
00:43 Apr 30, 2024

I really like this text description, because it has a good story. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude..

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Nadia Natasya
00:43 Apr 30, 2024

I think your story is very interesting because there's a lesson to be learned from your story. Bagaskara, a child who is willing to lose his education to earn a living so that he can fulfill his daily needs, has to work for his mother and sister, even though he has to work at a young age, he is still sincere in taking the test of his life. This story teaches us to remain devoted to our parents even though we are no longer in this story also teaches us to be human beings who can be grateful for the life we're living in.

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Lovely Melodia
00:38 Apr 30, 2024

Your writing effectively portrays the life of a fisherman named Bagaskara and the difficulties he encounters. It communicates the struggles, resilience, and the significance of family within a fishing community in a clear and relatable manner. The imagery and emotions in your writing help readers empathize with Bagaskara's journey, highlighting themes of hope and gratitude despite the challenges he faces. Well done!

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Revi Revi
00:38 Apr 30, 2024

This story is very inspiring, the synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who was forced to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. He was 15 years old but his father died of a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he didn't have insurance even though he had to feel the fatigue of being a fisherman, which he shouldn't have done at his age, but he never gave up and he remained grateful and accepted the reality.

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Naila Ghina
00:37 Apr 30, 2024

This story is a narrative story, which tells the story of a child named Bagaskara who is 15 years old. Who had to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family, because his father had abandoned them. His story is a reminder and motivation for us to always be grateful for what we have, to fight as hard as we can to achieve our goals.

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Ahmad Ar Rifai
00:37 Apr 30, 2024

This story describes the life of a fisherman who lives on Harapan Island in the Thousand Islands, Jakarta. Even though it was a hiding place for past warriors, this island is now a residence for fishermen who hope for a decent life. The island is 28 million seas from Jakarta and has become a transit home for many people. Despite being an exotic tourist destination, the Bagas family's life is not easy, especially because it is affected by waves and abrasion material which turns parts of the island into white sand. Despite this, the family's s...

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Alfaro Putra
00:36 Apr 30, 2024

This story is interesting because it presents a complex picture of life on Harapan Island, from the cheerful marine life to the struggle of the Bagas family who were forced to give up education for the sake of survival. The contrast between the cheerful lives of marine mammals and the harsh reality of humans on the island adds an interesting dimension to the story. Overall, this story presents a strong picture of human life and nature on Harapan Island, and provides a reflection on the meaning of hope and courage in facing life's challenges.

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00:36 Apr 30, 2024

I like this story, I think this short story is very good and very inspiring because it tells the story of a fisherman who works not just for fun but so he can support his family. From this short story there are also many lessons that we can take away.

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Alma Kesya Aulia
00:35 Apr 30, 2024

The text above is a narrative description. This story is intriguing because it provides a deep insight into the lives of fishermen and the complex relationship between humans and nature. Through a narrative filled with attention to detail, I can feel the difficulties, resilience, and gratitude that are integral parts of the lives of fishermen like Bagaskara and his family. The depiction of how they rely on nature to make a living, as well as their struggles with economic challenges and daily life, offers a valuable perspective on human coura...

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00:34 Apr 30, 2024

The story depicts the struggles and resilience of the Bagas family, who make a living through fishing despite facing numerous challenges. Set against the backdrop of a serene island, the narrative explores themes of perseverance, sacrifice, and the enduring bond between family members. Despite the harsh realities they face, the family finds solace and strength in their deep connection to the sea and their unwavering determination to survive. The story offers a poignant reflection on the human condition and the importance of hope in the face ...

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00:33 Apr 30, 2024

I am very interested in this story, I think this short story is very good, it tells the story of a fisherman who works not just for fun but so he can support his family. by providing lots of life values, and being smart about being grateful because there are many other people out there who are still economically disadvantaged

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Najwah Salsabila
00:28 Apr 30, 2024

This story is description the life of a young man named Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman, who must face challenges and difficulties in providing for his family. Despite living amidst the harshness of nature and the uncertain life of the sea, Bagaskara remains resilient and humble. In the life of fishermen, catching fish is not the primary goal but rather a part of the process they must undergo to sustain their lives. Despite sometimes facing difficulties such as a broken boat engine or torn fishing nets, the spirit and desire to continue ...

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Febila Zahra
00:28 Apr 30, 2024

The text is a narrative that describes the lives of fishermen and their relationship with the sea and the surrounding environment. This story contains elements of description, character depiction, and conveying a moral message. This story highlights the daily life of fishermen, the challenges they face, and the courage and perseverance they show in the face of all obstacles. In addition, this story also emphasizes the importance of taking care of nature and being grateful for the sustenance given. My comment is that this story provides an ...

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Mia Agustin
00:26 Apr 30, 2024

I think this story is very interesting and inspires everyone to always fight. I really like the lives of the fishermen in the story. Where he struggles to earn a living for his family. This story contains a lot of moral messages, namely, no matter how difficult the problem that befalls you, you must continue to exist and live with gratitude.

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Evelyn Aywan
00:26 Apr 30, 2024

The synopsis of this story is a child named Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who was forced to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. He was 15 years old but his father died due to a disease for which there is no cure. This story really inspires people to always fight even when hit by a serious disaster and continue to try to earn a living and fight for their family. This story is also a very impressive story.

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