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Florida ,2020
Living so far from Family and having Job since over 10 years and only about 4 communications in a years. That's the lifestyle. Almost forgotten what is A Smile ! and became a serious nature person ,Even Neighbors never saw the smile on my face .Job to room and room to job . One day got a call from Mom to inform about younger sister's marriage and asked to attend .as usual replied a serous note "Will see" in only 11 seconds call duration.
at the end of the day in the bed before sleep checked in cell phone ,messages ,emails statuses etc........but lastly All day calls. All in these eyes locked in Mom's 11 seconds call and the moment was life changer. A STORM of questions came in Mind and one question changed the life "Is this life what you are living without family with having Family?
At 2:00 am booked flight to native and next morning surprised All by knocked door. Believe me I saw the most Happy Mom with lots of tears and joy in eyes .Lots of HUGS much cried ,
said "I don't want that job what made me far from Love.
Florida ,2020
Living so far from Family and having Job since over 10 years and only about 4 communications in a years. That's the lifestyle. Almost forgotten what is A Smile ! and became a serious nature person ,Even Neighbors never saw the smile on my face .Job to room and room to job . One day got a call from Mom to inform about younger sister's marriage and asked to attend .as usual replied a serous note "Will see" in only 11 seconds call duration.
at the end of the day in the bed before sleep checked in cell phone ,messages ,emails statuses etc........but lastly All day calls. All in these eyes locked in Mom's 11 seconds call and the moment was life changer. A STORM of questions came in Mind and one question changed the life "Is this life what you are living without family with having Family?
At 2:00 am booked flight to native and next morning surprised All by knocked door. Believe me I saw the most Happy Mom with lots of tears and joy in eyes .Lots of HUGS much cried ,
said "I don't want that job what made me far from Love.
Florida ,2020
Living so far from Family and having Job since over 10 years and only about 4 communications in a years. That's the lifestyle. Almost forgotten what is A Smile ! and became a serious nature person ,Even Neighbors never saw the smile on my face .Job to room and room to job . One day got a call from Mom to inform about younger sister's marriage and asked to attend .as usual replied a serous note "Will see" in only 11 seconds call duration.
at the end of the day in the bed before sleep checked in cell phone ,messages ,emails statuses etc........but lastly All day calls. All in these eyes locked in Mom's 11 seconds call and the moment was life changer. A STORM of questions came in Mind and one question changed the life "Is this life what you are living without family with having Family?
At 2:00 am booked flight to native and next morning surprised All by knocked door. Believe me I saw the most Happy Mom with lots of tears and joy in eyes .Lots of HUGS much cried ,
said "I don't want that job what made me far from Love.
Florida ,2020
Living so far from Family and having Job since over 10 years and only about 4 communications in a years. That's the lifestyle. Almost forgotten what is A Smile ! and became a serious nature person ,Even Neighbors never saw the smile on my face .Job to room and room to job . One day got a call from Mom to inform about younger sister's marriage and asked to attend .as usual replied a serous note "Will see" in only 11 seconds call duration.
at the end of the day in the bed before sleep checked in cell phone ,messages ,emails statuses etc........but lastly All day calls. All in these eyes locked in Mom's 11 seconds call and the moment was life changer. A STORM of questions came in Mind and one question changed the life "Is this life what you are living without family with having Family?
At 2:00 am booked flight to native and next morning surprised All by knocked door. Believe me I saw the most Happy Mom with lots of tears and joy in eyes .Lots of HUGS much cried ,
said "I don't want that job what made me far from Love.
Florida ,2020
Living so far from Family and having Job since over 10 years and only about 4 communications in a years. That's the lifestyle. Almost forgotten what is A Smile ! and became a serious nature person ,Even Neighbors never saw the smile on my face .Job to room and room to job . One day got a call from Mom to inform about younger sister's marriage and asked to attend .as usual replied a serous note "Will see" in only 11 seconds call duration.
at the end of the day in the bed before sleep checked in cell phone ,messages ,emails statuses etc........but lastly All day calls. All in these eyes locked in Mom's 11 seconds call and the moment was life changer. A STORM of questions came in Mind and one question changed the life "Is this life what you are living without family with having Family?
At 2:00 am booked flight to native and next morning surprised All by knocked door. Believe me I saw the most Happy Mom with lots of tears and joy in eyes .Lots of HUGS much cried ,
said "I don't want that job what made me far from Love.
Florida ,2020
Living so far from Family and having Job since over 10 years and only about 4 communications in a years. That's the lifestyle. Almost forgotten what is A Smile ! and became a serious nature person ,Even Neighbors never saw the smile on my face .Job to room and room to job . One day got a call from Mom to inform about younger sister's marriage and asked to attend .as usual replied a serous note "Will see" in only 11 seconds call duration.
at the end of the day in the bed before sleep checked in cell phone ,messages ,emails statuses etc........but lastly All day calls. All in these eyes locked in Mom's 11 seconds call and the moment was life changer. A STORM of questions came in Mind and one question changed the life "Is this life what you are living without family with having Family?
At 2:00 am booked flight to native and next morning surprised All by knocked door. Believe me I saw the most Happy Mom with lots of tears and joy in eyes .Lots of HUGS much cried ,
said "I don't want that job what made me far from Love.
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There were numerous grammatical errors: you miss out pronouns like I and my, which affects the clarity of the story. Also capitalizing after full stop is an issue. Careful re-reading of one's writing and self editing is crucial. Once that is done, it would wonders to your work if you let a third party read your work. I wish I had seen your work before the story was approved, I could have been of aide then. PS: You have repeated the story twice.
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