The Faceless God collected souls in glass. Not as trophies, understand, but as necessities—the way a carpenter collects tools, a scribe collects inks. Every vessel was a different shape, each soul a different hue. Some pulsed with vibrant colors; others glowed with subdued light. Together, they lined the endless shelves of the Hollow City, illuminating its obsidian walls with their spectral radiance.
Vex was the God's most loyal servant—his Hand, his Voice, his Shadow.
And she had just shattered her first vessel.
The sound of breaking glass had cut through the sepulchral silence of the collection chamber, followed by a soft whoosh as the imprisoned soul escaped its confines. Vex stood frozen, staring at the crystalline shards on the black stone floor, her scarred hand still extended from where the vessel had slipped through her fingers.
"Seven hells," she whispered, dropping to her knees to gather the fragments. But it was too late. The soul—a shimmering thing that had once belonged to a battle priest from the Southern Kingdoms—was already dissipating, mingling with the stale air of the chamber.
The God would know. He always knew when a soul was lost.
And Vex knew what happened to those who failed him.
"You seem troubled, little shadow."
The Faceless God had no eyes, yet Vex felt his attention like a physical weight pressing down on her shoulders. They stood in his private sanctum, a circular chamber whose walls were not walls at all but endless depths of darkness. The only light came from the three souls cupped in his hands—recent acquisitions from a village near the Spine Mountains.
"My lord," Vex began, forcing her voice to remain steady. "There was an... incident in the eastern collection chamber."
The God tilted his featureless head. Where a face should have been was only smooth, pale flesh—blank as an unwritten page. Yet somehow, she felt his amusement.
"The battle priest," he said, his voice like stones grinding together. "A pity. He had such interesting memories."
Of course he knew. Vex lowered her head, the dark curls of her hair falling forward to hide her expression. "I will accept whatever punishment you deem appropriate."
The God was silent for so long that Vex risked glancing up. He had set the soul vessels down and was extending one long-fingered hand toward her. Despite years in his service, she still had to suppress a shudder at his touch—cold as winter stone, dry as ancient bone.
"Do you know why I chose you, Vex?" he asked, his fingertip tracing the scar that ran from her temple to her jaw. "Out of all the desperate, dying creatures who washed up on my shores?"
She knew the story by heart. How she'd been found half-drowned on the obsidian beach where the Void Sea met the borders of the Hollow City. How she'd been the sole survivor of a ship lost to the Hungering Maelstrom. How the God had offered her life and purpose when death had seemed certain.
"You said I had something you valued," she answered.
"Yes." The God's finger moved to her forehead, pressing lightly. "Fear. Pure, perfect fear. Not just for yourself, but for what you might become. What you might do. It shapes you, defines you, makes you... useful."
Vex remained perfectly still under his touch, though her heart hammered against her ribs. There was something different in the God's manner today—something that made the fine hairs on her arms rise.
"Your punishment," he continued, "will be to face that fear. To look upon what you dread most."
Relief washed through her. This was a familiar sentence. Over the years, the God had often subjected her to visions of her deepest fears—drowning again in the Void Sea, being consumed by the creatures that lurked in the depths of the Hollow City, dying alone and forgotten. They were terrifying, yes, but they were only visions. She would endure, as she always had.
"Thank you for your mercy, my lord."
The God's hand withdrew. "Oh, little shadow," he said, and for the first time in their long association, Vex heard true pleasure in his voice. "This time will be different. This time, you will not merely witness your fear."
He gestured, and a doorway appeared in the darkness—a perfect arch of dimly glowing light.
"This time, you will live it."
The corridor beyond the arch was unlike any Vex had seen in the Hollow City. Where the God's domain was all smooth obsidian and cold grandeur, this passage was rough-hewn from some pale stone, its floor uneven beneath her boots. The air felt different too—warmer, heavier with moisture, carrying unfamiliar scents of earth and growing things.
She advanced cautiously, one hand on the dagger at her hip. The passage twisted and turned, sloping gradually upward. After what felt like hours of walking, she saw a change ahead—a brightening, an opening. Daylight.
Vex hesitated. She hadn't stood beneath an open sky since the day she washed up on the obsidian shore. The thought of such vastness above her made her stomach clench with anxiety.
"Face your fear," she murmured, echoing the God's command, and forced herself forward.
The passage ended abruptly in a ragged opening. Beyond it stretched a view so vast, so vibrant, that Vex had to shield her eyes. A valley spread out below, carpeted in forests of deep green. A river wound through it like a silver thread, widening into a lake that gleamed in the afternoon sun. And on the far shore of that lake stood a walled city—not the black spires of the Hollow City, but a place of white stone and red rooftops.
Ardenfel. The city of her birth.
The city she had fled, thirteen years ago, with blood on her hands and a price on her head.
"No," Vex whispered, backing away from the opening. "No, this isn't possible."
But even as she retreated, the rock face behind her melted away like mist, leaving her standing on a hillside path that wound down toward the valley floor. The Hollow City, the passage, the God himself—all gone, as if they had never existed.
In their place was the world she had abandoned. The world that had made her. The world she had feared to face again more than death itself.
"Clever punishment, my lord," she said to the empty air, her voice bitter. "Very clever indeed."
Vex avoided the main roads, keeping to game trails and shepherds' paths as she made her way down to the valley. This was no vision, no mere illusion. The mud that squelched beneath her boots, the briars that tore at her clothing, the insects that buzzed in the humid air—all were too detailed, too consistent to be anything but reality.
Or a perfect facsimile of it.
By nightfall, she had reached the forest's edge. Through the trees, she could see the distant glow of Ardenfel's walls. She made camp in a small clearing, using skills long dormant but apparently not forgotten. As she sat beside her modest fire, she considered her options.
The God wanted her to face her fear. Very well. But what precisely did that mean? To return to Ardenfel, where she was surely still remembered as a murderer? To confront whatever remained of her past?
Or was there something else? Some deeper fear that even she had not fully recognized?
A twig snapped in the darkness beyond her fire's light. Vex was on her feet instantly, dagger drawn, her body falling into a familiar fighting stance.
"Show yourself," she commanded.
A figure emerged from the trees—a man, tall and broad-shouldered, dressed in the leathers of a forester. His beard was shot through with gray, his face weathered by sun and wind. And his eyes—gods, his eyes were the same deep blue she remembered from childhood.
"Hello, Vexana," said Thorne Blackwood, Master Hunter of Ardenfel. "It's been a long time."
"Father," Vex whispered, the dagger nearly slipping from her suddenly numb fingers.
Thorne's gaze traveled over her, taking in the changes thirteen years had wrought—the scars, the hard muscle, the shadows in her eyes. "You look... different."
"I am different." She did not lower her weapon, though her hand had begun to tremble. "How did you find me?"
"I've been tracking you since you entered the valley," he said, staying prudently beyond the reach of her blade. "No one moves through my forest without my knowledge."
"Your forest," Vex echoed with a humorless laugh. "Still claiming dominion over what can never truly be owned?"
Something flickered across Thorne's face—pain, perhaps, or anger quickly suppressed. "May I sit? We have much to discuss."
Vex hesitated, then gestured sharply with her free hand. Thorne settled himself on a fallen log at the edge of the firelight, his movements deliberate, unthreatening.
"They still tell stories about you in Ardenfel," he said, watching her carefully. "About the night of the Red Moon. About what you did to the Magister's son."
Vex sheathed her dagger and sat back down, though her muscles remained coiled, ready to spring. "I imagine they do."
"They say you cut out his heart."
"They're wrong." She met his gaze steadily. "I cut out his tongue first. For what he said. Then his eyes, for what they had looked upon. His heart was last, and by then, he was grateful for the release."
Thorne's expression didn't change, but she saw his hands tighten where they rested on his knees. "And the others? The servants? The guards?"
"Collateral damage," Vex said flatly, though the words tasted like ashes in her mouth. "They stood between me and my prey."
"Seven innocent lives, Vexana. Seven souls sent to the Dark Beyond."
"There are no innocents," she spat. "Not in the Magister's household. Not in Ardenfel. Perhaps not anywhere."
Thorne was silent for a long moment, the fire's light casting deep shadows across his features. When he spoke again, his voice was softer. "I searched for you. After. For years."
"To bring me to justice?" Vex asked, a new tension coiling in her gut.
"To bring you home."
The simple words struck her like physical blows. She stood abruptly, turning away to hide the emotions warring on her face. "I have no home. Not anymore."
"That's not true," Thorne said, rising as well. "Whatever you've done, whatever you've become—you are still my daughter."
Vex spun back to face him, her hand going to her dagger's hilt. "Your daughter died the night of the Red Moon. What returned from the Void Sea is something else entirely."
"I don't believe that."
"Then you're a fool." She drew the dagger in one fluid motion, its blade catching the firelight. "I serve the Faceless God now. I harvest souls for his collection. I have killed more people than I can count."
Thorne didn't flinch from her blade or her words. "And yet, here you are. Back where it all began."
"Not by choice," Vex said, but even to her own ears, the words lacked conviction.
Her father took a step toward her—just one, cautious but deliberate. "Come back to Ardenfel with me," he said. "Face what happened. Make amends. It's not too late."
For a heartbeat, Vex allowed herself to imagine it. Walking through Ardenfel's gates at her father's side. Facing the Magister, the families of those she had killed. Accepting whatever punishment they deemed fit. Perhaps finding, if not forgiveness, then at least an end to running.
But then she remembered the Faceless God's words: This time, you will live it. This wasn't about redemption. It was about facing her deepest fear.
And suddenly, she understood what that fear truly was.
Not death. Not judgment. Not even returning to Ardenfel.
Her greatest fear was that she might be forgiven. That she might rejoin the world of the living, with all its messy connections and obligations and possibilities for both joy and pain. That she might have to feel again, to care again, to be human again.
"No," she said, her voice steadier now. "I can't."
Disappointment shadowed Thorne's face, but he nodded as if he had expected nothing less. "Then I have no choice."
He raised his hand, and the forest around them erupted with movement. Figures emerged from the darkness—a dozen, two dozen, more. Men and women in the livery of Ardenfel's city guard, bows drawn, swords gleaming in the firelight.
And at their center, a tall figure in robes of midnight blue, his white hair bound back from a face as cold and implacable as winter. The Magister himself.
"Vexana Blackwood," he intoned, his voice carrying the weight of official judgment. "You are charged with eight counts of murder, heresy against the Nine Divines, and desertion from the city of your birth. How do you plead?"
Vex looked from the Magister to her father, understanding blooming like poison in her chest. "You led them to me."
Thorne met her gaze, unflinching. "I did what was necessary. For Ardenfel. For justice."
"For yourself," she snarled. "To cleanse the stain I left on your precious reputation."
"Enough," the Magister snapped. "Your crimes demand an answer, girl. How do you plead?"
Vex looked around the clearing at the ring of weapons pointed at her heart. There would be no escape, not this time. This was the God's punishment—to be captured, tried, executed in the city she had fled. To have her soul trapped not in one of his glass vessels but in the cold judgment of those she had wronged.
To die knowing her father had betrayed her.
She straightened her shoulders, drawing the dagger across her own palm, letting the blood drip into the dirt at her feet. "I plead nothing," she said. "I regret nothing. What I did to your son, Magister, I would do again a thousand times. He deserved worse than the death I gave him."
The Magister's face contorted with fury. "Take her," he commanded.
The guards moved forward, weapons ready. Vex shifted her grip on the dagger, preparing for a hopeless last stand.
But before the first guard could reach her, the ground beneath their feet began to tremble. The fire suddenly flared impossibly bright, its flames turning from orange to a cold, unnatural blue. The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of something ancient and dead.
"What sorcery is this?" the Magister demanded, looking wildly about.
Vex felt it before she saw it—a presence at her back, cold and vast and familiar. She turned slowly to find a tear opening in the very fabric of reality, a vertical slash of absolute darkness. From within that darkness emerged a pale hand, fingers impossibly long, reaching toward her.
"My lord," she whispered.
"I AM DISAPPOINTED, LITTLE SHADOW."
The Faceless God's voice rolled across the clearing like thunder, though only Vex seemed able to hear it. The guards and the Magister were backing away, their faces masks of terror as they beheld what was emerging from the rift.
"You said to face my fear," Vex said. "I did."
"NOT YOUR FEAR OF CAPTURE. NOT YOUR FEAR OF JUDGMENT." The God's hand gestured toward Thorne, who stood transfixed, unable to flee. "YOUR FEAR OF FORGIVENESS. YOUR FEAR OF CONNECTION. YOUR FEAR OF RETURNING TO THE LIGHT."
Vex felt something wet on her cheeks. Tears. How long since she had last cried? "I can't," she said again, the words barely audible.
"THEN YOU WILL REMAIN MY SHADOW," the God said, and there was something almost like compassion in his terrible voice. "BUT FIRST, A CHOICE."
The rift widened, revealing the God's featureless face. "COME BACK TO ME NOW, LITTLE SHADOW, AND I WILL LEAVE THIS PLACE UNTOUCHED. STAY, SEEK YOUR REDEMPTION, AND I WILL TAKE EVERYTHING."
Vex looked back at her father, at the Magister, at the guards who stood between her and justice. Between her and atonement. Between her and humanity.
She thought of the Hollow City, of the endless dark corridors and the souls in glass. Of the cold certainty of the God's service, where she would never have to question, never have to feel, never have to hope.
She thought of Ardenfel, of the possibility—however faint—of a life reclaimed. Of pain and judgment, yes, but also of sky and earth and the messy, brutal beauty of the living world.
Her fingers closed around the dagger's hilt, blood still wet on her palm.
And she made her choice.
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Nice! I love the ambiguous ending, but I think you wove a good story around it to guide your readers to the decision Vex likely made. Nice work. I really think you could take the core of this story and turn it into a novel - there's so much you can work with here, and so many opportunities to explore humanity and agency in the face of fear. Also, there was so much atmosphere that made my imagination run wild - I could see this as a graphic novel, too - it would be stunning.
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Thank you so much, Amanda! That means a lot. I really appreciate your thoughts on the ending and the atmosphere—those were key things I was hoping to land. I love that the story sparked your imagination, and the idea of expanding it into a novel or even a graphic novel is incredibly exciting. You've definitely given me something to think about!
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Loved it! Such a powerful depiction of the messiness of human life on Earth, the fear of the power we own and what is possible if we use it. Thank you!
"... brutal beauty of the living world!"
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Thank you so much, Sangeeta! That really means a lot to me. You picked up on one of the core themes I was trying to explore—that tension between fear and agency, and the difficult beauty that comes with choosing to live fully, even when it's messy or painful. I'm so glad it resonated with you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
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So well done!
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Thank you, Sandra!
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