14th part of Home. Doesn't follow prompt.
โOh my god.โ Daniel whispers, staggering back, out of sight. โT-TJ, thatโs-โ
TJ grabs his hands, and says in a hushed voice, โItโs okay. He doesnโt know Angel.โ
He leans against the wall, closing his eyes. โOh my god.โ
I canโt breathe. I canโt breathe. I canโt-
โDanny, calm down, itโs okay.โ
TJ keeps hold of his hand as he looks into the living room. Angel seems to have realized who this is.
โSorry, I donโt think your son is here.โ She says. She tries to close the door, but he sticks his foot in the way. She steps away as he pushes it open.
โThis is where Catherine Maybel lives. My son is here.โ
โWhoโs your son?โ Angel asks, trying to play dumb.
โDaniel Young.โ Blake says, his eyes scanning the room. He sees TJ, and his lips curl into a scowl. โYou. Youโre the boy that made my son gay.โ
TJ swallows, and Daniel can see his hands shaking. โSorry, Iโm not sure who-โ
โDonโt play dumb!โ Blake yells. โTell me where he is!โ
Daniel moves farther down the hallway, behind the big blue bookcase. He wanted to be far away from his father.
Blake moves towards TJ, pointing a finger at him. โWhere. Is. My. Son.โ
โI-I donโt k-know.โ TJ says. Heโs a terrible liar.
โTell me where he is.โ Blake growls, coming closer.
Angel looks like she doesnโt know whether she should stay out of it, or call the police.ย
TJ seems to realize heโs backing into the hallway that Danielโs in, so he stops. Daniel moves farther away. He doesnโt want TJ or Angel to get hurt, but he doesnโt want his dad to see him either.
TJ tries to stand in front of Blake, but Blakeโs stronger and taller. Daniel moves farther, but trips over a flower pot, which hits the floor loudly.
โThere you are.โ Blake snarls. Daniel shrinks back. โCome on, weโre going home.โ
Blake steps towards him, but TJ moves in front. โLeave him alone.โ
โTJ,โ Daniel starts.ย
Blake scowls at him. โStay out of this.โ
โLeave him alone.โ He repeats, looking ready to fight.
โTJ-โ
Blake shoves him out of the way, and TJ hits the bookshelf, hard, then crumbles to the ground. The shelf teeters, and books fall. Daniel pushes it back against the wall, but several heavy books hit TJโs temple.
โTJ!โ He screams, scrambling towards him.ย
TJ lays limp on the ground, blood trickling from deep cuts. Angel runs over as Daniel drops to his knees beside him.ย
โWe need to stop the blood.โ Angel says, rushing down the hallway.
Daniel feels a hand on his shoulder, and he jerks away.
โLetโs go, son.โ Blake says sternly.
Daniel scowls. โNo. You leave. Iโm staying here.โ
โYou canโt-โ
โJust go!โ He shouts. โI donโt want to see you ever again!โ
Angel runs back over with a wet washcloth, and she presses it to TJโs forehead. Her phone is ringing in her other hand, and he realizes she called the hospital.ย
He holds the washcloth to TJโs head, trying to stay calm. Heโs still breathing, but only barely. Please, please, please be okay.ย
Heโs barely listening as Angel talks on the phone. He notices at some point that Blake is gone. He realizes heโs being extremely unhelpful, and looks up.ย
โW-what do I do?โ He asks her.ย
Sheโs typing on her phone. โI called the hospital, and an ambulance should be here soon. They said to try to stop the bleeding, and make sure heโs breathing.โ
โWho are you calling?โย
โMom.โ
Daniel nods, then reaches into TJโs jacket for his phone to call TJโs parents. He keeps one hand on the washcloth, and watches TJ nervously. Heโs breathing, but not much.
Please, please, please be okay, TJ.
โTJ?โ His mothers voice comes over the phone.
Daniel swallows, the phone shaking in his hands. โItโs Daniel.โ
โOh, hey, sweetie. Everything okay?โ
He takes a breath, trying to hold back tears. โNo.โ
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Well, it wasn't much of a cliffhanger. Anyone else wishing the bookshelf fell on top of Blake instead? I rushed over here as soon as I saw your comment. This should win anyway.
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:) Thank you!
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Of course!
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New part, no cliffhanger this time.
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YESSSSSSS!
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I do
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Hehe :D
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I. Love. This. Collection. So. Fricken. Much!!
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=)
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OUCH!!!! Tj :( ( please let him be ok)
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:( Don't worry.
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when r u gonna post the next part? I WANNA MAKE SURE IF TJ IS OK OR NOT!
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Today or tomorrow, I'm working on it.
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Oks, Waiting...... :(
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New part.
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I like the concept of the 14th part of this. Great job.
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Thanks!
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Of course.
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New part!
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XD Sorry!
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OHOHOHOHOHONONONONONOONOONONO PLEASE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TJ NONONNONONONOONNOO AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i ded XD
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XD sorry!
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Ehehehhwh XD
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New part!
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XD
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