Submitted to: Contest #295

Thomas, Oakhaven, 1950

Written in response to: "Write a story about a coincidence that seems too good to be true."

Adventure Fiction Mystery

The salt spray kissed Amelia’s face as she leaned against the railing of the ferry, the churning water a mesmerising turquoise beneath a sky the colour of faded denim. She was on her way to Oakhaven Island, a tiny speck of land off the coast of Maine, a place her grandmother had always spoken of with a wistful sigh and a faraway look in her eyes. Amelia had inherited her grandmother’s cottage, a charmingly dilapidated structure perched on the edge of a cliff overlooking the endless expanse of the Atlantic.

She needed an escape. An escape from the relentless demands of her high-powered job as a lawyer in New York, from the suffocating weight of a broken engagement, from the feeling that she was slowly drowning in the concrete jungle. Oakhaven, with its promise of solitude and sea air, was her lifeline.

As the ferry docked, the island revealed itself to be a picture postcard come to life. Quaint clapboard houses lined the harbour, their windows glinting in the afternoon sun. Lobster traps were stacked high on the docks, and the air was thick with the briny scent of the sea and the faintest hint of woodsmoke.

Amelia found the cottage with surprising ease, the dirt road winding through a tangle of wildflowers and whispering pines. It was just as her grandmother had described: weathered shingles, a porch swing creaking in the breeze, and a garden overgrown with rambling roses.

Over the next few days, Amelia settled into a comfortable routine. She spent her mornings exploring the island’s rocky coastline, collecting seashells, and breathing in the invigorating air. In the afternoons, she tackled the cottage's neglected garden, pulling weeds and coaxing life back into the soil. Evenings were spent curled up with a book in front of the crackling fireplace, the sound of the waves a constant lullaby.

She met a few of the islanders, friendly and welcoming souls who seemed to exist on a different plane of existence than the harried city dwellers she was used to. There was Mrs. Gable, who ran the general store and always had a kind word and a freshly baked cookie for her. There was old Mr. Silas, the retired fishermen, who regaled her with tales of legendary sea creatures and daring rescues. And then there was Liam.

Liam owned the local bookshop, a tiny haven filled with the comforting scent of old paper and the hushed whispers of turning pages. Amelia had wandered in on her second day, drawn by the promise of a new read. Liam, with his kind eyes, sandy hair, and easy smile, had recommended a collection of local folklore, and they had struck up a conversation that flowed as easily as the tide.

Over the next week, their encounters became more frequent. They shared coffee at the island’s only cafe, explored hidden coves along the coastline, and spent hours discussing their favourite books in Liam’s bookshop. Amelia found herself inexplicably drawn to him, his quiet strength and gentle humour a balm to her wounded soul.

One evening, after a particularly long day of gardening, Liam offered to cook her dinner. He arrived at the cottage with a basket overflowing with fresh seafood, vegetables, and a bottle of crisp white wine. As they prepared the meal together, laughing and teasing each other, Amelia felt a sense of contentment she hadn’t experienced in years.

Later, as they sat on the porch swing, the Milky Way a glittering tapestry above them, Liam told her about his life on the island. He had grown up here, surrounded by the sea and the stories of his ancestors. He had left for a while, to study and to see the world, but he had always been drawn back to Oakhaven, to the peace and simplicity of island life.

Amelia, in turn, told him about her life in New York, her demanding job, and her failed engagement. She spoke of her grandmother, of her love for the cottage, and of her desire to find a different kind of happiness.

As she finished speaking, Liam gently took her hand. “Maybe you’ve already found it,” he said, his voice soft in the night air.

They sat in comfortable silence for a while, listening to the waves crashing against the shore. Then Liam leaned in and kissed her. It was a tender, tentative kiss, but it sent a jolt of electricity through Amelia. It felt right, natural, like coming home.

The next day, Amelia decided to explore the attic. It was filled with dusty furniture, forgotten trinkets, and boxes overflowing with her grandmother’s belongings. As she sifted through the mementos, a faded photograph caught her eye. It was a picture of her grandmother as a young woman, standing next to a handsome man on the Oakhaven docks.

Intrigued, Amelia turned the photograph over. On the back, in her grandmother's elegant script, was written: "Thomas, Oakhaven, 1950."

A strange feeling washed over Amelia, a mixture of curiosity and unease. She had never heard her grandmother mention Thomas. When she had spoken of Oakhaven, it was always with a sense of bittersweet nostalgia, but never with the specific mention of a romantic entanglement.

Later that day, Amelia showed the photograph to Mrs. Gable at the general store. Mrs. Gable peered at the picture over her spectacles, her eyes widening in surprise.

“That’s Thomas,” she said, her voice hushed with reverence. “He was a wonderful man. He disappeared at sea many years ago. A terrible tragedy.”

Amelia’s heart skipped a beat. “Did you know him well?” she asked.

“Everyone on the island knew Thomas,” Mrs. Gable replied. “He was a kind and generous soul. He was engaged to be married, you know. To a lovely young woman from the mainland.”

Amelia’s breath caught in her throat. “Do you know her name?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper.

Mrs. Gable thought for a moment, her brow furrowed in concentration. “I believe it was... Eleanor. Eleanor… something.”

Amelia felt a wave of dizziness wash over her. Eleanor was her grandmother’s name.

Later that evening, as she sat on the porch swing with Liam, Amelia couldn’t shake the feeling that something was amiss. She told him about the photograph, about Thomas, and about her grandmother’s connection to him.

Liam listened intently, his brow furrowed in thought. When she finished speaking, he took her hand and squeezed it gently.

“This is quite a story,” he said. “But what does it mean?”

Amelia shook her head, her mind whirling with possibilities. “I don’t know,” she said. “It’s just a strange coincidence.”

But it was more than a strange coincidence. Over the next few days, as Amelia dug deeper into the story, she uncovered a series of revelations that turned her world upside down.

She discovered that Thomas had left behind a son, a son who had grown up on Oakhaven, a son who had inherited his father’s kind eyes, sandy hair, and easy smile.

Liam.

Amelia felt a wave of nausea wash over her. It couldn’t be true. It was too much, too unbelievable. But the evidence was undeniable. The resemblance was uncanny. The timing was too perfect.

Liam was the son of the man her grandmother had loved and lost. And she, Amelia, was falling in love with him.

The coincidence was too good to be true. It felt like a cruel joke, a cosmic prank designed to test the limits of her sanity.

She confronted Liam with her discovery, her voice trembling with emotion. He listened in stunned silence, his face pale with shock.

When she finished speaking, he stared at her for a long moment, his eyes filled with disbelief. Then, he reached out and took her hand.

“I… I don’t know what to say,” he stammered. “I never knew... my father never spoke of her.”

They spent the rest of the night talking, piecing together the fragments of their shared history. They learnt that Thomas had never forgotten Eleanor and that he had carried her memory in his heart until the day he died. They learnt that Eleanor had never stopped loving Thomas and that she had named her granddaughter Amelia, a name that had been Thomas’s mother's name.

As the sun began to rise, painting the sky with hues of pink and gold, they sat in silence, grappling with the enormity of their situation.

“What does this mean for us?” Amelia asked, her voice barely a whisper.

Liam looked at her, his eyes filled with love and confusion. “I don’t know,” he said. “But I know that I care about you. Deeply. And I don’t want to lose you.”

Amelia looked at him, at the man who had brought so much joy back into her life, at the man who was inextricably linked to her past.

The coincidence was staggering, almost impossible. But as she looked into Liam’s eyes, she realised that sometimes, the most improbable coincidences can lead to the most extraordinary connections.

They decided to take things slowly, to navigate the complexities of their shared history with honesty and compassion. They spent the rest of the summer on Oakhaven, exploring their connection, learning about their families, and falling deeper in love.

As the days grew shorter and the leaves began to turn, Amelia knew that she had to make a decision. She couldn’t stay on Oakhaven forever. But she couldn’t imagine going back to her old life in New York.

One evening, as they sat on the porch swing, watching the sunset paint the sky with vibrant colours, Amelia turned to Liam and took his hand.

“I’ve made a decision,” she said, her voice filled with conviction. “I’m staying.”

Liam’s face lit up with joy. He pulled her close and kissed her, a kiss that sealed their fate, a kiss that promised a future filled with love, laughter, and the enduring magic of Oakhaven Island.

The coincidence that had seemed too good to be true had, in the end, brought them together, bound them by a love that transcended time and circumstance. And as Amelia looked out at the endless expanse of the sea, she knew that she had finally found her home, her happiness, and her destiny.

Posted Mar 25, 2025
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Iris Silverman
05:41 Apr 04, 2025

I enjoyed the fact that this story was set in Maine. I don't know why, but I've had this unusual fascination with coastal Maine as of late. I could feel Amelia undergoing a healing process throughout this story even amidst the turmoil.
I appreciated how you wrote about such a complex and taboo topic in a poetic way that made me think "I want Amelia and Liam to be together!"

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Tricia Shulist
04:28 Apr 01, 2025

Nice ending to the story! Serendipity is a nice way to find the links between the two characters’ lives. I also like the gentle voice of the story. Thanks for sharing.

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