Submitted to: Contest #299

A Note to Rebecca

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of a child or teenager."

Funny Happy Kids

Rebecca you are here to witnes me giving you the BEST reson to give me back my favorite Maliboo Barbie. Lisen i know you like it and its the perfect match for your Ken doll but Maliboo Barbie is the only one that fits in the Barbie Jeep so i need her. Plus you always make Maliboo Barbie do gros stuff with Ken like kiss. Dont you know boys have cooties? I hope i never kiss a boy. I need her for our adventurs together. I promised her we wood go to the top of Candy Mountin evry single day. I cant not do it. You cant break a promis to a Maliboo Barbie. And it was a pinkee one to. Have you ever been to the top of Candy Mountin? Its so magikal Rebecca! You can come with us if you want to. We can ride on my friend Pegasis because he can fly and he can fly us all the way to the top of Candy Mountin and over Gumdrop Rainbow and we can eat gumdrops for six strait hours! And if you dont like those we can fly to Soda Pop Lake and it will change into whatever flavor you want! Isnt that great Rebecca? See this is why i need Maliboo Barbie. I cant go to Soda Pop Lake with out her. Cherry is her favorite. And you dont even no if Barbie wants to kiss Ken. She cood be scared of cooties. Maliboo Barbie needs to see the gummy teddy bears today. There as big as a real life bear! And today is the only day we can see them cause hiburnashun and they hide and sleep for sooooo long. So you see why i need her. I need her for our trips to Bubblebath Waterfall becuz she drives the boat. I need her for when we run across Gummy Worm Jungle cuz im scared of worms. I need her for the game we play called Catch the Leeves and thats when we go outside and we catch the leeves that fall down. Shes the best at it so i need her. I need her for when we go to skool cuz all the Barbies there are gros and none of them have hair. I need her cuz she is my BEST friend Rebecca! Can you see now? Ill let you play with my super cool bike if you want to. Its pink with sparkle stars on it but it has 4 weels so you wont fall off. And you can even use my smelly markers for your color book cuz i no you like those. Rebecca i love you soooo much from the botum of my heart so thats why im asking nice so youll give Maliboo Barbie back to me. Oh you can even use my Cup of Gold. You know that prety cup i always use? You can use it for one hole week! I just needed to say this cuz i really love Maliboo Barbie but i didnt want to hurt your feelings so i thunk if i said how much i need her you wood let me have her bak. Pleese be nice and give her bak to me cuz i dont no what i wood do with out her. Rebecca i love you so pleese dont make me tell Mommy. Thank you.

PS you no Mommy told us that shes tired of fixing all our problems and we need to lern how to fix it ourselfs so thats why i wrote you this leter. Shes gonna be super mad if i hav to tell on you and shes gonna make us vacum our rooms again wich i dont wanna do cuz its sooo heavy and last time i sucked up ALOT of my favorite sparkle ponytails wich i am still sad about.

PS PS oh no! what if i have to tell on you and she takes Maliboo Barbie away! Sara told me at skool that her mom took her dollhouse away cuz she coodnt get along with her sister. if Mommy takes Maliboo Barbie then she cant kiss Ken OR go to Candy Mountin or Soda Pop Lake! See this is why you have to give her back to me. I dont want her just staring at the inside of Mommys closet or somthing. That wood make her cry and make me cry.

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Dear Rebecca

It has been 2 hours since you said you wood give Maliboo Barbie back. I no you said its only been 20 minuts but it has been 2 hours i no it. PLEES give Maliboo Barbie bak to me! If she is not bak in my room in 5 minuts i will have to go tell Mommy wich we both DONT WANT. Thank you.

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Can i just come play in your room with you? I can bring my sticker book the one with the cupcakes and icecreams you like. We can play with Maliboo Barbie at the same time and i can bring the Jeep and we can drive her and Ken around. Woodnt it be so fun to drive them on your bed?! We can preten there on a adventur and have them discovr gold and we can use your bead neklace you got for your birthday for the gold! Wat do you think of that? Let me no yes or no.

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Dear Rebecca

Thank you for leting me play with you yesterday i had soooo much fun! Maliboo Barbie told me that she wants to have more adventurs with Ken so let me no when Ken is reddy for another one. You had a reely good idea to take them to Pop Rock Desert mayb next time we can use real Pop Rocks! We just may have to sneek them cuz Mommy said no more food in our room after that one time i sneeked spageti in my bed.

PS i left my sticker book under this leter. I left some pages for you to play with. i love you.

Posted Apr 24, 2025
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