Neptune’s trailer smelled like burnt sugar and the last page of a library book. She was elbow-deep in cosmic frosting, dyed eclipse-blue and glittering with edible stardust, spinning cupcakes like small planets for someone else’s big moment. Outside, the 29 Palms sky simmered in pink and rust, the sun leaking over rusted car parts and prayer flags, casting long shadows that twitched like they had secrets.
The desert had been whispering all morning. Neptune heard it in the hum of the generator, in the way the wind kept flipping her tarot deck to the same card. Something was coming. Someone was coming. And even though this party wasn’t for her, she couldn’t shake the feeling that everything: every sprinkle, every celestial playlist, every mismatched lawn chair, was a breadcrumb leading to whatever she’d been waiting for since the last time her heart cracked open under a Joshua tree.
She licked blue icing off her finger, stuck a sparkler in the center cupcake, and muttered, “You better show up this time.”
The oven hissed like a serpent with secrets. Neptune wiped her brow with the hem of her tank top, eyes fixed on the glowing cupcakes as they rose like tiny omens.
She didn’t know why she was baking — only that she had to. The dream had come a week ago, threaded with static and starlight. A voice without a face had whispered, “She’s coming. Prep something sweet. You’ll need it when she brings the second sun.”
That had been enough.
So now here she was, at golden hour, in a trailer half-swallowed by sand, frosting cupcakes with trembling hands while the desert outside went silent. Not just quiet. Silent. As if the entire Mojave was holding its breath.
She paused at the window. The horizon glowed in an impossible gradient — rose gold to blood orange to a shade of silver she’d only seen in lunar photographs. And then, like a mirage she couldn’t blink away, there she was.
A girl in a silver space suit.
Walking across the dirt road like it was a runway, dust swirling around her in reverence. The helmet was under her arm. Her hair was matted and full of stars. Neptune whispered to herself, “29 Palms is the only place God and Area 51 would ever agree to meet.”
She stepped outside, barefoot, the desert still warm from the day’s fire. Cupcake in hand, heart in her throat. The girl reached her, breathless but calm, as if she’d only just walked home.
“I have news,” the girl said. “And I think the sun is splitting.”
They stood there a moment longer—just two strangers and a sugared offering—while the sky behind them bent in a way it wasn’t meant to. The girl took the cupcake like it was sacred. “Vanilla,” she murmured, peeling the paper slowly. “You remembered.”
Neptune didn’t say anything. She hadn’t remembered. She didn’t know this girl. Not consciously. But somewhere in the magic folds of her brain, there’d been something. Like a song she hadn’t heard since childhood. Or a name she used to whisper in her sleep.
“You said you’d wait for me,” the girl said, licking frosting off her thumb. “But I guess I was late. About a hundred and three timelines late.”
Neptune blinked. “I’m sorry… do we know each other?”
“We did. We do.” The girl’s voice was strange and soft, like an echo in reverse. “It’s hard to explain. I’ve been skipping realities like scratched records. One of them cracked. This one was… warm. It called me back.”
“And the second sun?”
The girl’s smile curved like a sickle moon. “It’s in my chest now. It’s what brought me here.” She tapped the silver suit, just over her heart. It glowed, faintly, the way the desert sometimes hums after midnight.
Neptune staggered back a step, overcome by the kind of dizzy you get when your dream starts narrating the present. Her trailer behind her, full of postcards from places she’d never been and glitter-streaked art projects she’d made in fugue states, suddenly felt too real.
“So what happens now?” she asked.
The girl reached into her pocket. Pulled out a cassette tape. The label read: For Neptune—Play When the Sky Breaks.
“We start over,” she said. “We rerun the timeline. But this time, you don’t forget me when you wake up.”
A distant thunder cracked—no clouds in sight—and the air shimmered like cellophane. The mountains turned lavender. The Joshua trees bent toward them. And far off in the distance, Paramore started playing.
Inside the trailer, everything buzzed—faint, electrical, like something forgotten was trying to remember itself. The turquoise mini fridge clicked off. The ceiling fan spun just a little too slowly. The beads in the doorway shivered for no reason at all.
The girl—Neptune still didn’t know her name—moved with impossible calm. Like someone who’d rehearsed this scene in dreams, lives ago. She set the cassette down next to a crystal ashtray shaped like a cowboy boot. The boot belonged to no one. It had always been there.
“Your record player,” the girl said, “is a portal. Sort of.”
“It’s from Goodwill,” Neptune replied, deadpan.
“Exactly.”
She picked up the pink Crosley, unplugged nothing, twisted a dial that hadn’t existed before, and slid the tape into a slot that definitely hadn’t been there five seconds ago. The tape clicked. Static.
Then a voice—Neptune’s voice—but distant, younger. “If you’re hearing this, it means the loop broke. It means she came back.”
Neptune froze. The cupcake tray tilted in her hands.
The voice continued: “You have to remember who she is. You have to forgive her. You promised—remember? Before they split the sky?”
The cassette whirred, then stopped. The second sun flickered, just a little.
Neptune turned toward the girl, her mouth dry. “Okay, seriously. Who are you?”
The girl grinned, hair catching the gold of the dying sun. “They used to call me Satellite. You called me something else, but I liked that one. It made me feel tethered.”
Neptune sat down hard on the turquoise diner chair with the cracked seat. The pink record player purred like a cat with secrets.
Satellite—if that was real—wandered over to the record collection and flipped through it with both familiarity and awe. “Oh, good. You kept the Mars Volta one. That was the key last time. In case the cassette didn’t work.”
Neptune pinched herself. Hard. Nope. Still here. Outside, the sky began changing colors like it was unsure which version of sunset to run. A Joshua tree caught fire, silently, beautifully—and then reassembled itself in reverse.
“We don’t have much time,” Satellite said. “I brought you the second sun. But you’ve got to remember what we buried under the first one.”
Neptune looked at Satellite like she was staring into a mirror from a life she hadn’t lived yet. The second sun throbbed gently beneath Satellite’s collarbone, casting soft, gold light on the trailer walls. It pulsed in rhythm with something—maybe the wind, maybe the past, maybe Neptune’s own breath as she tried to believe this was real.
She whispered, “If this is a dream, don’t wake me.”
Satellite smiled. “This isn’t a dream. It’s just a softer apocalypse.”
Then she reached for Neptune’s hand. It was covered in frosting and trembling like a leaf on Jupiter. Satellite didn’t mind. She laced their fingers together like she’d done it a thousand times before.
The second sun began to hum. A low, velvety sound—half lullaby, half memory. The kind of sound that slips into your bones and plants a garden.
Outside, the desert flickered again. The Joshua trees bent like they were bowing. The mountains blinked. Something vast cracked open in the sky, and for a moment—just a moment—Neptune could see it all:
Every version of herself. Every loop. Every cupcake baked in hope. Every girl she’d ever waited for beneath the same sun. And in every version, Satellite was walking toward her.
“I think I’m ready to remember,” Neptune said.
Satellite leaned in, lips grazing her temple like the ghost of a promise. “Good. Because this time, we make it stick.”
The cassette rewound itself. The second sun pulsed brighter.
And just as the sky split open one last time, the trailer filled with the sound of Paramore screaming something sacred: “That’s what you get when you let your heart win.”
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I love this, simply brilliant! I was enraptured the entire time. It reminds me of a book called ‘This is How You Lose the Time War’ a little, because your prose and characters are stunning.
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Definitely agree with the comments of imagery and description! Absolutely love the Paramore reference. One of my fav. bands growing up, saw them in concert several times.
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Your story is fascinating. I was glued to it the whole time. Very creative and a great use of imagery. Thanks for writing it.
Best,
George
P.S.
Thanks for liking “Through the Eyes of Love.”
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Beautiful story. Id swear its the backstory to a psychedelic music video for some profound song
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Welcome to Reedsy. You may have a winner here.
Thanks for liking 'Way Back Machine'
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Wow! I don't think I stopped for breath. I love your story and the sensory, almost overload. Enthralling and innovative well done indeed. 👏👏👏
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