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Adventure Fiction Inspirational

"Hey You, Come here", Someone from the back called me.

"Yes sir", in a serving voice I answered.

It was cold and chilly wind blowing and I with my 3 friends Rohan Rima and Vijay were in the hotel room waiting for the client to come.

The client came and the meeting started.

"If you want me to sign the deal then you have to do something that I will say, there may be a chance of losing life", the client said.

"But sir how is this possible for us we are here for professional purpose and this is not the deal", Rima said.

"You can decide if you want then I shall continue or not", client said his final words.

After the discussion of 20 minutes we decided that we will do the work because if this deal is cancelled then we all may be fired.

"Ok sir, we will be doing your work but instead we need the double the money then before", I said.

He was convinced and then one of his assistant took out keys, one page in which some mantras was written and one bottle of blood from the bag and then they started explaining about the work.

The client said," From hear if you go straight for exact 2hrs then you will see a big bungalow which has been closed for more than 10000 years. These keys will help you to open the door. In that bungalow you have to go up from stairs and from right second room open the door and you will see a big red stone in front of you. I need that stone but you will not get it so easily until you don't give some blood. This is the bottle of blood you are going to give. But after this the dead souls present there will be wanting a soul and these mantras will help you to keep them away from you. As you start speaking the mantras the other dead souls will come to you to take the stone away but you have to run and don't see back. If you see then one of you are surely going to die. Then when you come back you have to sit in car come back. I will be waiting for you hear."

Everyone got scared and looked into each other's eyes. But had had to do it so they took the things and went to do the work.

They stopped the car in front of bungalow and it was looking very dangerous.

"Do you guys really want to do it?", Vijay asked.

"Yes now we can't step back and we have to do and we can do". I said.

We all unlocked the gate and went inside the bungalow and went to the room. As we opened the door the rays came out and we all closed the eyes then slowly we opened the eyes and it was a rare big diamond. I took it inside my bag and Rima kept the bottle of blood in that place and everyone came out but Rima was still standing there and I pulled Rima towards me and then we are going toward the car. But suddenly someone pulled my legs and ragged me and I shouted and Rohan and Vijay was trying to pulled me. Rima ran to the car and sat inside. However I Rohan and Vijay also ran to the car but while running I got a cut and some blood dropped on the floor. We sat in the car and Rohan ran the car to the hotel. Since I was bleeding Vijay was doing a first aid but the whole seat was full of blood.

We went inside the hotel and gave the diamond and took the payment and deal and came to to our home. We four lived together in a flat in a room share. Rima was totally silent and didn't said anything. We all went to sleep and Rima was sitting in the hall.

We woke up and saw Rima. She was normal now and was also talking to us but something was wrong and this was felt. It was a off day so Rohan said that the will take the car for washing and so he went down with the keys.

As he opened the door it was most shocking, the blood on the seat was fully cleaned and the car was looking totally new. We were thinking about it and I felt little pain in my hand and saw the wound. It was also clean like never the blood came out of it. Everything was weird but some days passed.

One day at home Rohan got a cut in his hand while cutting the vegetables and Rima was near him. Rima didn't went to bring the first aid and Rohan went inside the room to dofirst aid. There was some drops of blood on the table. Rohan also bought a cloth to clean it but it was already cleaned and there was a little blood on Rima's mouth. Rohan understood that something is wrong. He told everything to Vijay and me and then I mad a plan with Rohan and Vijay and accordingly we worked.

I went near Rima and started cutting fruits and purposely cut my finger and felt few drops of blood on table and then went inside the room and secretly kept an eye on Rima.

Rima literally licked the blood on table. We all were shocked and confused that now what to do. This is all because Rima was the one to keep the bottle on blood in place of diamond. The next day we saw a advertisement on the paper about the person who does black magic and have knowledge about it so without wasting time we all went to him and said everything.

The person said,"It was all because Rima had saw a soul from her own eyes and if we want to make her normal then we have to take her both the eyes off." We all got scared and then decied to save her life we have to do it.

But again the person said," This will not be easy because the soul keeps and eye on you all and infact she knows what you all the planning. So first you all have to drink this holy water so that she can't hear you all and now you have to make Rima drink this water and by this she will become unconscious and then take her to hospital and get operated".

We all came back home and I again cut the hand and in the few drops of blood we mixed the water and left and Rima drank it. Within minutes she was unconscious and was taken to hospital and got operated.

Rima can't see and her career also faded. I said everything to Rima and since she had no one except me Rohan and Vijay. Rima at first became very angry but then she understood that it was important.

Rima said, "Its ok the things happened was every bad but now at least we all will stay happy".

Rima was sad but we all supported her constantly.

One day I saw Rima shouted, "Rohan Vijay come fast, see what is happening to Rima come fast".

They ran and came and saw Rima. She was walking on her own and could see little things. It was a magic and then we four went to the person who gave the solution of eyes getting off. We told him everything and he asked, "how did you gave the water to Rima?".

I replied," That by mixing in my blood i gave her."

The person said by pointing to me, "As you mixed your blood she se feel you and see through you. We do magic so that we can help but this is fully a magical thing that happened. Rima will be able to see but it might take time. suggest to you that now you can go to doctor and get her treatment for the eyes".

The same day we went to the doctor but there was no eye donor. We requested the doctor so much but he was unable to arrange anything.

One day when I went to the hospital to inquire about the donor I found a lady crying as his daughter died at a less age. I went near her and said," can you donate your daughter's eyes to my friend?"

The lady got angry and said, "My daughter just died and you are thinking about yourself". Then I said," I am sorry but you might feel bad what I say now but its important, Your daughter is already dead but she can save my friend life and you know she lost her parents at every young age and has only her 3 friends with her. Now its up to you that you want to help or not". and after saying I left.

The lady called me and said,"She is ready to donate but instead she want to meet the girl". I then only called Rima and the lady met her.

"From now you are my daughter". The lady said with tears.

Then Rima got operated and money for operation was given by the lady and she not only became the mother of Rima but also for us. Rima after months saw the world and was most happy.

It took few months for Rima to properly see but finally Rima could see throught other person's eyes literally.

August 01, 2021 09:06

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Danielle Cole
22:25 Aug 11, 2021

An interesting and cool story. I would suggest some editing for proper tenses of words and watch out for those goofy words that sound the same but are spelled differently and mean different things like: here or hear.

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