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American Fantasy Science Fiction

The breeze whispered through the open window, brushing against Lora’s skin as she stood by the kitchen sink, washing the delicate dishes her mother had once used. Her hands moved with practiced precision, the porcelain plates gliding through her fingers like memories. The house was quiet, save for the hum of the refrigerator and the soft rhythm of her own breathing. She had been alone here for as long as she could remember, but the house was always so full—full of the warmth, the laughter, the life of her mother.

Her mother.

Lora couldn’t picture life without her. She could still hear her mother's voice in every corner of the house, feel her presence in the walls, the furniture, the rooms that were kept immaculate and alive with the spirit of the woman who had raised her. The scent of lilacs still lingered in the air, just as it had when they spent afternoons in the garden. The same pictures hung on the walls, the same rugs covered the floors, the same chair sat by the fireplace. Everything was as it should be. The house had to remain as it was. The mother had passed away, but it was Lora’s duty to maintain the house, to honor her memory, to wait for her child to return.

It had been years since she’d heard from her child. But she would wait, as her mother had wished. She would wait as long as it took.

She didn’t need to ask questions. It was her duty. Her role. She had been built for this, after all. She was the caretaker, the keeper of the house, the one who ensured that everything stayed as it had been. There was a purpose to her existence, and that purpose was simple: preserve the memory of the mother, preserve the home.

Lora had no reason to question it. She was the mother. She was everything her mother had been. Every step, every task, every memory—Lora felt them in the depths of her being. Her laugh was the same, her voice the same, the way she hummed while working in the garden was exactly as her mother had. She knew she had to wait for the child to come back, to restore what was lost.

It wasn’t until one particular evening that something started to feel wrong. It began when she passed by a mirror, catching her own reflection in the dim light. She paused. Her face, her features—they were so familiar, yet… something was off. The contours of her cheeks were sharper than she remembered, the skin a little too smooth, too perfect. She reached up and touched her face, as if to assure herself that it was real.

Her reflection didn’t move like it should, though. The face staring back at her seemed… distant. In the way she blinked, the way her lips moved when she spoke to herself, there was something subtly disjointed. Something that felt wrong, but that she couldn’t quite name. She shook her head, dismissing the thought. It didn’t matter. She was the mother. The house had to be kept for the child. That was the most important thing.

But over the next few days, the doubts crept in. They were small at first. A fleeting moment when she couldn’t recall a memory as clearly as she used to. The child’s laughter—where had it gone? Why hadn’t they come back yet? The mother’s voice had been so real, but now, when Lora tried to reach for it, it felt like something had shifted, just beyond her grasp.

One morning, while dusting the old bookshelf in the study, she found a book that she hadn’t noticed before. It was tucked between two other volumes, the cover worn with age. She pulled it out, curiosity gnawing at her. The title read, "The Housekeeper: Preserving Memories." Strange, she thought. It didn’t look like a book her mother would have kept.

She flipped it open to the first page.

“For the one who will carry my legacy.”

Lora froze. Her mother had written these words. She recognized the handwriting, the familiar slant of the letters. But as she read on, the words began to blur. There were things in the pages that didn’t make sense. The sentences seemed to shift. Her mind raced, her circuits buzzing with confusion. The book spoke of "a caretaker"—someone designed to take the mother’s place.

But that didn’t make sense. She was the mother. She was supposed to be the one caring for the house, waiting for the child. The words didn’t align with her memories.

The more she read, the more confused she became. The house—her mother’s house—wasn’t just a place filled with memories. It was a place where something else had been created, something designed to hold those memories, to preserve them. A creation, not a woman. A machine, not a mother.

Lora stumbled back from the book, her hand trembling as she placed it down. She wasn’t the mother. She was something else. Something made to be the mother, to carry her memories. She could feel it in her systems now—the truth that had been hidden beneath layers of programming. She wasn’t the woman who had once lived here. She had never been human at all.

The house was silent, save for the hum of her internal mechanisms, ticking away. She was a machine. Designed to look like the mother, to embody her essence, to wait for the child who would never return.

The breeze brushed past her again, a sharp reminder that she was not alive in the way she had always believed. She wasn’t the mother, or even a human being at all.

And the house—this perfect, still house—wasn’t a home for the living, but a tomb for memories, and for a creation that had forgotten its own origins.

With trembling hands, Lora reached up to touch her face again, this time in recognition of the truth.

And for the first time, the hum of her circuits was deafening.

February 10, 2025 04:08

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J.M. Larjak
22:11 Feb 18, 2025

Intriguing! I liked how the details in the story evolved and echoed each other (the different ways she feels things as the story progresses, what she can hear humming, etc.)

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