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  It was years ago , when it happened in a golden ray of light , the sun melting down upon

 The world as Sophie Eden , a philosophical historian was in line with her new hidden treasure.

 Hidden inside the tomb , of ancient Egypt she travelled afar to see if she could find it , hidden underneath the layers of hidden sand there was a secret , a secret that was so pure it could not be opened for many years the secret meant love and sacrifice .

Sophie in her brownish hat and light from a telescopic torch 

Searched high and low for the secret , the secret was hard to find 

As it was sealed within these very walls of golden treasure that lay so openly under her feet .

There was traps hidden under the walls , and floors of the tall yellow pyramid. But Sophie was clever , she studied in the arts of Egyptian law , she felt the earth crack as she held it close to her heart the jewel she had in her hand was precious it belonged to her late husband Nick Eden who had suddenly died from a raptured earthquake in these very walls of the desert , he was out looking for the secret when he died , but they never recovered the body of Nick.

Sophie was continuing her husbands legacy , to try and find the secret ,

Sophie and nick had studied for years the art of these Egyptians how they walk like pharaohs

there beautiful , gleaming jewels and carved perfected hairstyles.

But they had never come across the secret , the sacred secret is blinded 

By the Egyptian gods .

But Sophie never gave up , she was back to find that secret , the booby traps , that follow her 

Dangerous predators long the walls of these constant tombs , as Sophie try to find one clue 

That led to another clue , the clue was in the hanging portrait .

Of the latest Egyptian bluesy, as Sophie touched the portrait of bluesy 

The doors swung open , the air swooshed in its presence and out came the Egyptian himself 

Bluesy was very tall in person , his opaque light blinds against the reflection of Sophie’s jewel 

He smiled at her , like he had known her his entire life ,

She smiled back and In that moment shared an intimate connection 

He looked back to the jewel and then he touched it and as he touched it 

He became the man she fell in love with.

“ nick is that you “. Tears welling up in Sophie’s eyes 

“ yes it is .” And as nick catches her tears .

They fall on his soft hand , and become tear diamond drops 

They both look reluctantly, at the diamonds , and that’s when they see it 

The diamonds are so beautiful they come together as a person , and that person is the real bluesy 

Nick and Sophie come together ,as they come together shockingly as one , and they smile 

“Your the secret “. They say together , bluesy smiles and speaks 

“ yes I am the sacred secret of these walls , but your love is so powerful it blinds the light together your my mother and father , you created me by diamonds in Sophie’s eyes and you nick created the diamonds by your affection for Sophie .

“ we are all the secret , the secrets of life are upon us .”

 As nick and Sophie come together in one piece , they look at bluesy 

And bluesy is the key to open the long lost treasure that hides beneath these very walls .

He opens his eyes and his heart as if he knows what he has to do that guides him

To the floating air of the walls .

As he floats , he comes across , a hidden treasure as the earth begins to shake 

The spidery creatures come out and the haunting bats come spiralling in they attack bluesy .

“ watch out , bluesy “. Nick and Sophie say together and that seems to work there voice shakes the core light of day and together they are ones family a unit .

But there is more to come as bluesy tries to tackle the remaining bats and spiders 

As he reaches for the hidden treasure , the treasure moves and comes forward , as it comes forward , it speaks .

“ oh chosen one , oh glorious one , I have been waiting for you and your family to come and collect this treasure . “

“Don’t be fooled bluesy his parents shout at him “.

But bluesy seems to be locked in the treasures eternal beauty which magnifies against 

Him .

Mesmerised bluesy takes the jewels and then connects it with his mothers jewel .

And out comes the phantom , his dark majestical magic feels the wounds of the very room 

Out of the surface , comes a light , guiding light , it leads to the room the secret room 

Inside they all enter ,bluesy still under trance .

“ bluesy no don’t touch it , “ screams Sophie 

But it’s to late , the golden snake wraps round his neck , the snake came from the phantom ,

“Stop “! Shouted bluesy’s parents , but it was too late 

The snake was killing him slowly , painfully broken by the golden windows 

Of life .

“No!” Please have mercy, but no matter how hard Sophie and nick shouted the phantoms power grew and grew , and as bluesy struggled to breathe fighting for air .

He looked directly into his mothers eyes and as he did his body became the earth once more.

“ no” his parents shouted 

The phantom gave a huge chuckle , and in that moment 

Sophie saw red and charged for the phantom nick tried to held her back 

But too late she stomped over the remains of the gold .

The phantom falls to the ground as Sophie hits him then cries her tears 

Her diamond tears destroy the phantom there’s a huge light that blinds the air

And her beloved son bluesy comes back , as they leave the hidden tomb they try to resurface the events but they know that when they get back to work there will be answers that need answering ,

But as they leave together , bluesy smiles at least keep it secret .”

 They all looked at one another , “can you keep a secret?”

They all laughed I can if you can . 

August 21, 2020 19:03

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