Beautiful Revenge

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Mystery Romance Funny

JANUARY 1, 2006

*BOOM!! CLANG CLANG CLANG!!

“Why the hell is it always noisy when new year…I hate it” a girl walking to the back alley said.

*Bumps

“Hey watch it!!” she said to the guy she bumped to.

“…”

The guy suddenly collapsed in front of her.

“Hey, you alright?!! Wake up!!Wait a sec. I’ll call 911…”

“No, don’t call them…” then the guy fainted.

“Hey!! ugh…whatever”

The girl carried him back to her apartment when suddenly 5 men in suits blocked her way.

“Are they shooting a movie here?? This guy must be a big shot…” she thought while staring at the 5 men in suits blankly.

“Can we see who you’re carrying, we’re finding for a wanted person…”

“Wanted person, so this is the wanted person, sigh when I finally thought I’ll be rich…but it’s suspicious though.” the girl thought.

“Oh-this is my— brother, yeah my brother, I’m carrying him because he’s so drunk partying with some girls…haha”

“Can we see is face…” one of the men in suits took out his hand to look at the guy’s face.”

“Oh NO!!! I mean no, my brother is hideous, his face is so ugly that will make you puke, he just happened to have a lot of money so he can party…” she said while thinking.

“You can go now…”

“hahahaha thanks for understanding boss, I’ll let you know if I see that guy, what does he look like though…?”

“Sorry but we can’t reveal any information.”

“ah…ok then, goodbye boss” she said with a force smile.”

After a while walking away from those guys, the guy she’s carrying suddenly spoke…“Hey you’re pretty good at lying…you can put me down now.”

*bumps

“Ouch! Hey can’t you put me down gently!!”

“I already saved you, now give me money you’re a thief right…”

“pftt…hahahahahaha….me? A thief? HAHAHAHAHA it’s the first time someone said that to me…?”

“Then what are you? A murderer, or a boss of some big gang?”

“…”

“Looks like I hit the jackpot, We’re here now in my apartment, you can come in if you like…”

“ahahaha thanks….”

“So what’s your name?”

“Zach Forton… you?”

“you don’t need to know, I will leave anyways after I got my pay

from saving you…” she said with a smile on her face.

“You must really love money huh?”

“It’s actually the opposite…I just need money right now…”

“What…you got a loan, I can pay that for you…”

“Then can you buy the HR company…”

“I can’t, they’re the richest family here, more like the whole world…that must be your target then…goodluck” he said thinking “though I can really buy it, just I don’t want to see their child”

“Yeah, ‘good-luck’ to me…”

“Here’s my card it has 5 million there…”

“Woah…You’re really rich, thanks”

8:00 AM in the morning

“It’s been a while since I’ve slept like this…??? Where is she?” he said talking to himself while stretching, then he saw a note on the table.

NOTE:

“Hey, hope you have a good rest, thanks for the money…I’ve already called your guys there, they should be there by 8:00…One more don’t you dare reveal anything about me.”

“Wow she’s heartless, just left after taking my money…” he stared blankly at the note.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

“Come in…”

“Boss, sorry we can’t protect you…”

“Don’t worry, Just find the location of my card right now…” he said with his tone like he could kill anyone he like.

“Who the hell made the boss like this…” then his men trembled.

“Ray book a flight for me, and also look for a woman with a long blonde hair with blue eyes…”

“Oh if you’re talking about a woman with a long blonde hair with blue eyes, that must be the young lady of the Harris family…”

“Harris family? Isn’t their child has a brown hair with black eyes?”

“You’re talking about the second lady, her mother is the second wife of the president…but the first lady of the HR group has died just a week ago, then her father got missing all of a sudden.”

“Interesting” then he smirked.

“There’s also a rumor, they said the first wife was so kind to let the second wife and her baby to live with them, but the second wife was greedy and killed the first wife…though there weren’t any evidence to prove that so the president just let the case go” One of his men butted in.

“You’re really great when it comes to rumors…Go and investigate the Harris family…”

“Yes boss!!!”

PRESENT, YEAR 2021

‘Breaking news, the president of HR group is still missing until now…Since the first young lady’s death, the heart of the HR group has been down, now we have her younger sister Anna Harris to take over the group.’

“Tsk, their moving fast since they can’t find my body…”

“HAHAHAHAHA…hey Dianne, look at this.”

“What you’re so noisy…”

“HAHAHAHA…you’re sister is into acting right?”

“Yeah so what, You’re interested ahahahahaha!!”

“NO WAY!!! Just watch this…”

VIDEO:

“Can’t you act it right?!! we’ve taken 87 shots now…just go home if you can’t act properly!”

“I’m the heir of the HR group, how dare you talk to me that way!!”

“Yeah you’re the heir, I thought the daughters of the Harris family were extremely talented, but you can’t just do anything right…”

“How dare you!!! just watch I’ll make you lose your job!!”

“Oh sorry young lady but you don’t have to make me quit, I’ll quit myself”

“HAH! that’s great then, you guys kick him out!”

“You’re only the heir now, just because the first miss is dead, if she wasn’t you would be nothing right now…”

*CUT

“Hahahaha I didn’t know my sister to e that shameless, she got a talent…”

“Hahahaha, so when will you take action…?”

“Let’s start by being the largest shareholder, send Jack to buy all of those stocks…”

“But where will you get the money?”

“I bet you forgot, I’m already richer than my own ‘family’ now…”

“Ok then…”

“Oh one more, Jake can you hack the cameras inside the mansion

and also buy me a flight back to America.”

“You got it boss!!”

“And you should get along with your twin now, He’s only answering to my phone so you better get along with him…”

“F-fine…then I’ll go now”

*Waves hands

AIRPORT

“Hey will Zach be back today?”

“I’m sorry miss Anna but please leave now…”

“How dare you ask me to leave!!! I’m his fiancé”

“I’m sorry miss, but the young master will be tired after he got here

so he’ll go directly to the hotel, so please leave now…”

“Isn’t that great that will be an opportunity for us to bond”

Beep beep beep

“I’ll go underground and also change my hotel, also keep her for

now…”

“yes sir…”

“Miss the young master just said that his flight changed so he’ll be

back tomorrow…”

“I don’t believe you, I’ll call him myself”

RING RING RING RING

“Answer it”

ON THE PHONE:

“Hey honey, is it true your flight got cancelled”

“I’m sorry miss, this is his secretary, I advise you to not call the young master anymore…”

“How da—”

BEEP BEEP BEEP

“That’s so disgusting, why did that girl has a sister like that…”

“The girl 15 years ago?”

“She left an impression…so did you found her?”

“I think your cousin found her, he’s bragging to me about how he saw a beautiful woman in Italy, he said that woman has a blonde hair with blue eyes…”

“That playboy, I need to treat him nice now…”

“But bad news sir, I think your cousin might be interested to her now…he said that she kicked him hard on his private part so…”

“I think he have a death wish”

“wow from a nice tone, to a death tone…” his secretary thought.

“So where is she now?”

“One of the men I sent at Italy said that she’ll go back here in America.”

“Then we’ll meet again…”

AT THE HOTEL IN ITALY

“I guess they’re still not giving up on finding my body”

Knock Knock Knock

“Come in”

*CLACK

“Now who sent you here, my ‘SISTER’ or my ‘MOTHER’?”

“I’m afraid you’re all wrong miss, I was sent by another person, I

assumed you already know him…”

Dianne took the dart at the door then slowly walk to the couch.

“Who? Zach Forton? That guy’s quite persistent”

“Actually, it’s the first time he had troubled on searching someone…”

“Of course he would, cause I’ killing every one of them”

*Trembles

“HAHAHAHAHA I’m just joking, don’t worry it’s not his men that I’ve

killed but my family’s”

“HA-Ha…”

“What you’re scared? Just go now and tell him to don’t worry, I’ll pay back the money in his card, and can you relay my message…”

“Alright miss…”

“give this note to him…then tell him I’ll be back in two days”

“Yes, miss…”

2 DAYS LATER

“Woah! It’s great to be back…now let me crash a party tonight…"

January 12, 2021 02:11

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Kate Heesemann
21:37 Jan 21, 2021

Great story! It was definitely very creative. =) I had trouble to understand some parts due to the way the language was written, but it was good.

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