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Submitted into Contest #16 in response to: Write a story about a character on a quest, trying to "prove themselves."... view prompt
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Great job of aligning your content to the prompt itself-- definitely can see the progression of the characters and it ends with a clearly defined moral at the end that ties everything together up nicely. I thought the bamboo was a really interesting element, and I liked the delivery style/voice because it reminded me of a mix of both old Japanese urban legends and traditional African folklore in a way. My only suggestion would to be for your next piece, maybe break up the piece into paragraphs so that the reader is forced to slow down and le...
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thank you, it will help me a lot. I'm just a new writer
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this is my second story.. hope you like it.
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