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Drama Holiday Mystery

HI FRIENDS,

ANGERNESS IS NOT THE GOOD QUALITY, YOUR ANGRY ,WILL SPOIL YOUR GOOD QUALITY.THE STORY IS DESCRIBES ABOUT THE “THE REAL MAGIC".REAL MAGIC WAS SOME PERSONS ENTRY .

LET'S START THE STORY,

SOME PERSON WILL COME TO THE LIFE,WITHOUT REASON, BUT ,THE PERSON ,WILL GIVE A LOT OF PAIN AND HURT.AT THE SAME TIME,THEIR MEMORIES WAS ALWAYS IS IN THE HEART.

SONU WAS A COLLEGE STUDENT.HE HAVE NO FRIENDS, REASON:SONU'S ANGER NATURE.

SONU WAS VERY CALM PERSON, SOMETIMES SONU WAS BEHAVE VERY RUDE FOR SMALL THING.AT THE SAME TIME ,SONU WAS VERY AMBITIOUS BOY.

NEW ADMISSION SAMINA WAS JOINED THE SONU'S CLASS .IN THE BEGINNING,SONU DID NOT SPOKE TO SAMINA,BUT SAMINA SPOKE TO SONU.BUT,SONU DID NOT KNEW ONE THING:YES! SAMINA'S ENTRY IS CHANGED SONU'S LIFE ,REASON:SAMINA'S, FRIENDLY AND UNDERSTANDABLE NATURE.

YAH! SOME PERSON ONLY ,WILL UNDERSTAND THE SOME PERSONS HEART,THAT SAME THING WAS HAPPEN THE SONU'S LIFE.

SONU & SAMINA WAS BECAME VERY CLOSE FRIEND . A SHORT PERIOD OF TIME,SAMINA WAS UNDERSTOOD THE SONU AND ALSO SHE DID NOT TOOK THE SONU'S ANGER NATURE AS A SERIOUS THING.

SAMINA WAS VERY TALKACTIVE & INNOCENT GIRL. SHE WAS VERY KIND HEARTED.SAMINA AND HER CHARACTER WAS ATTRACTED THE SONU A LOT . SONU'S ANGERNESS QUALITY WAS LITTLE BIT CHANGED.

ONE DAY SAMINA ASK THE SONU "WHY YOU LIKE ME.SONU WAS TOLD" I DON'T KNOW, YOU NEAR WITH ME,NOTHING NEED FOR MY LIFE:IT'S NOT A LOVE ATSAME TIME YOU ARE MY BEST FRIEND, MORE THAN THAT.

SONO WAS INVITE SAMINA FOR HIS HOUSE.SAMINA WENT TO SONO HOUSE, SAMINA KNEW THE TRUTH FOR SONU'S ANGER QUALITY . SONU IS A MILLIONAIRE CHANDYS SON.BUT CHANDY WAS NO MORE, CHANDY BEST FRIEND ARORA WAS KILLED THE CHANDY FOR HIS MONEY. SO SONU MOTHER WAS ATTEMPT THE SUICIDE FOR NOT BEAR,HER HUSBAND CHANDY'S DEAD.. FINALLY SONU WAS LOST HIS PARENTS, AT HIS YOUNG AGE.

SONU MIND WAS FIXED, FRIENDSHIP, RELATIVES, LOVE"WHATEVER IT'S JUST A WORD ONLY ,NOT BE A TRUE.NO ONE BE TRUE IN THIS WORLD & ALSO THEIR AFFECTION WAS ALSO LIE.

NOW, SAMINA WAS. UNDERSTOOD ALL THINGS ABOUT THE SONU AND THE REASON BEHIND FOR HIS ARROGANCE NATURE.THEN SONU INTRODUCE HIS GRANDMA TO SAMINA & TOLD " I TRUST MY GRANDMA" ONLY.THEN SAMINA TEASED TO SONU, "WHAT ABOUT ME.SONO SAID "YOU ALSO". THEN SAMINA WAS SMILED.

SAMINA WAS RETURN BACK TO HIS HOUSE &THINK ABOUT SONU. HER MIND WAS FULL OF SONU& HIS PAST LIFE: HIS PARENTS DIED,INFRONT OF HIM; IS NOT A BEARABLE MATTER ;HOW HIS HEART WAS PAINED. SHE WAS NOT SLEEP AT THAT NIGHT.

NEXT DAY, SAMINA WAS SAW THE SONU, BUT SAMINA VISION WAS CHANGED. SAMINA FRIENDSHIP WAS CHANGED AS "LOVE". SAMINA WAS DECIDED TO GAVE ALL HER AFFECTION TO SONO.

SAMINA SCHOOL MET BILLAN CAME TO, MEET THE SAMINA AND AT THE TIME SAMINA AND SONU WAS TOOK THE CONVERSATION .SAMINA WAS INTRODUCE THE BILLAN TO SONU & TOLD;BILLAN IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR ME ;SONU WAS THOUGHT SAMINA AND BILLAN WAS IN LOVE. BUT, HE DID NOT ASK ANYTHING FOR HER.

ONE DAY HER COLLEGE MATE VENU WAS TEASED THE SAMINA . SONU WAS ANGRY TO SCOLD & SLAP THE VENU.BUT , SAMINA DO NOT TOOK THAT MATTER AS SERIOUS ; THAT IS VENU'S TEASING.SO,SONU & SAMINA WAS FIGHT WITH EACH OTHER.

VENU WAS GAVE THE COMPLAINT TO PRINCIPAL, BUT VENU DID NOT SAY SONU WAS SLAPPED.PRINCIPAL ASK THE SONU" WHY YOU SCOLD THE VENU".THEN SONU WAS TOLD ;VENU WAS MISBEHAVE TO SAMINA.

SAMINA WAS THOUGHT, DID NOT TOOK THE PROBLEM AS MORE SERIOUS ,BECAUSE IT WILL AFFECT THE SONO'S EDUCATION AS WELL AS HIS SONU'S CHARACTER(BECAUSE ALL SHOULD KNOW THE SONU'S ANGERNESS).SO SAMINA HIDE, THE VENU TEASED& TOLD TO THE PRINCIPAL;SONU WAS MISUNDERSTOOD ABOUT” ME(SAMINA) AND VENU'S CONVERSATION”.

SONU WAS SHOCKED & SPEECHLESS, THE PRINCIPAL WARNED THE SONO "DON'T INTERFERE THE OTHER'S CONVERSATION". SONO WAS SAW THE SAMINA & WENT OUT OF THE PLACE .

SAMINA WAS FOLLOW THE SONO AND TOLD ABOUT THE REASON BEHIND FOR HER LIE. SONO DO NOT LISTEN THE SAMINA SPEECH . AT THE TIME, BILLAN WAS CAME, SONU ARROGANTLY TOLD TO SAMINA,"YOUR LOVER WAS CAME",SO, PLEASE WENT TO HIM.

SAMINA HEART WAS BROKEN & SCOLD THE SONU: HE IS NOT MY LOVER", BILLAN IS MY FRIEND; DID YOU KNOW ABOUT THE MEANING OF FRIEND.SONU ANGRY WAS IN HIGH AND TOLD TO SAMINA "YOU ARE ALSO BEHAVE AS A NORMAL GIRL";I WAS WRONGLY JUDGED YOU.

SONO'S WORD WAS KILLED THE SAMINA'S HEART.

AFTER THE FIGHT BETWEEN SONO & SAMINA,THEY DID NOT SPEECH WITH EACH OTHER.BUT SAMINA ,WAS BELIEVE " ONE DAY, SONU WAS FELT IS MISTAKE" BUT DAYS ONLY GONE.

GUYS,SOME PERSON WAS MAGIC FOR OUR LIFE,BUT WE ARE NOT REALIZED; THAT SAME THING, SONU WAS DONE.

BOTH OF THEM COMPLETED THEIR GRADUATION.SONO TOOK OVER HIS FATHER'S BUSINESS.SAMINA PARENTS WAS NOT ALLOW THE SAMINA TO WORK, SHE WAS IN HOUSE.THE LIFE WAS CHANGED, BUT THEIR EGO AND SONU'S MISUNDERSTOOD WAS NOT CHANGED.

SONU GOT SUCCEED IN HIS BUSINESS. SAMINA PARENTS WAS DECIDED THE SAMINA'S MARRIAGE.BALLAN WAS KNEW THE SAMINA'S TRUE LOVE SO .BALLAN, SAMINA'S FRIEND WAS TRIED TO TOLD ABOUT THE SAMINA'S LOVE TO SONO, BUT SONO DID NOT HEAR THE BALLAN WORDS.

SUDDENLY SONU'S GRANDMA WAS ARRANGE THE ENGAGEMENT FOR SONO. SONO SAID OK , TO HIS ENGAGEMENT GRANDMA WAS INTRODUCE THE ZENVA AS HIS FIANCY. SONU & ZENVA WAS TOOK THE CONVERSATION.

SONU WAS SO DISTURBED, BECAUSE HE DID NOT LIKE ZENVA. THAT TIME,SONU WAS REALIZED SAMINA'S AFFECTION.SO SONO REMEMBER SAMINA & HER MEMORIES BUT HIS EGO, DID NOT CHANGE, SO HIDE HIS FEELING.

BEFORE THE DAY OF MARRIAGE, SONO WAS MET THE SAMANIA COINCIDENTALLY. SAMINA WAS LEAVE HER EGO, SHE SPOKE TO SONO ABOUT THE COLLEGE FIGHT.

"I WAS NOT LIE ,I WAS JUST HIDE THE PROBLEM ,BECAUSE I WAS SCARED ABOUT YOU AND YOUR STUDIES , IF I WAS TOLD TRUE MEANS, PRINCIPAL WAS GIVE PUNISHMENT FOR YOU, BECAUSE ALL SHOULD KNOW YOUR ANGRESS,AND IT'S THE CHANCE FOR ALL WILL SPOIL YOUR CHARACTER .

SAMINA WAS FURTHER TOLD TO SONO YOU WAS GAVE THE IMPORTANCE TO OUR FIGHT NOT OUR TRUE RELATIONSHIP. GOOD BYE SONU.SONU WAS SPEECHLESS AND FREEZED.SLOWLY HE WENT TO HIS HOUSE. GRANDMA WAS SAW THE SONO AND ASKED HIM EVERYTHING

"SONU WAS CRIED AND TOLD TO HIS GRADMAA,ABOUT THE SAMINA'S SPEECH.GRANDMA WAS TOLD TO SONO,

"LIFE IS SOME TIME TURNED AS A MAGIC", THAT MAGIC NAME WAS LOVE.YOU LOVE SAMINA, BUT YOU DID NOT UNDERSTOOD.

BECAUSE YOU WAS ANGRY WITH SAMINA &YOUR ANGERNESS WAS HIDE YOUR LOVE .SONU WAS HUG THE GRANDMA & SAY”I WAS GAVE LOT OF PAIN AND HURT TO SAMINA , BUT SHE WAS THINK ABOUT ME ONLY". NOW,MY HEART WAS FULL OF SAMINA " GRANDMA, I NEED SAMINA".BUT ,SAMINA DID NOT ACCEPTED ME.

GRANDMA WAS TOLD “SHE WAS ACCEPTED YOU SURELY" ,BECAUSE YOU ARE A TRUE PERSON,WHATEVER IN YOUR MIND,YOU WAS DO,:AND DID NOT HIDE ANYTHING.SONU ,NOW MY HEART AND SOUL WAS SAY :”I LOVE AND I NEED SAMINA" UNTIL MY LAST BREATH.

GRANDMA WAS VERY HAPPY ABOUT HIS DECISION, GRANDMA WAS STOPPED THE SONU'S AND ZENVA MARRRIAGE, BECAUSE SHE LIKE SAMINA AND ALSO GAVE IMPORTANCE TO HER SONU'S FEELINGS. BALLAN WAS CAME TO SONO'S HOUSE TOLD ABOUT THE SAMINAS LOVE TO SONO. SONO WAS VERY HAPPY & WENT TO SAMINA'S HOUSE.

SONU WAS REACHED THE SAMINA'S HOUSE &HIS HEART BEAT WAS INCREASING.BECAUSE SONU FIRST TIME WAS FELT THE TRUE LOVE.

FINALLY ,SONU WAS TOLD “SORRY" TO SAMINA.SAMINA EYE'S WAS FULL OF TEARS AND LOVE.SAMINA WAS TOLD TP SONU" EVERYONE SAW YOUR EGO,ANGERNESS AND ARROGANT NATURE,BUT I WAS SAW YOUR PAINFUL AND TRUEFUL HEART”.I NEED YOU AND YOUR LOVE.

SONU WAS CRIED AND TOLD “I LOST MY LIFE AND SMILE ,BECAUSE OF MY PAINFUL PAST,BUT WHEN I SAW YOU ,NOW I AM REBIRTH”.THIS BIRTH IS ONLY FOR YOU.

LATER SONU WAS UNDERSTOOD THE MAGIC ,THAT MAGIC NAME WAS “SAMINA.”

THANK YOU GUYS,SOMEONE ENTRY WAS CHANGED YOUR LIFE SURELY,YOU WILL NOT LOST THAT PERSON",OTHERWISE YOUR LIFE WILL BECOME HELL.

September 12, 2020 16:18

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Chris Wagner
13:33 Sep 24, 2020

I'm thinking English is not your primary language. I found this story incredibly difficult to read. Having it in all caps with weird punctuation and grammar didn't help. You might want to take some English classes or English as a second language classes

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Tom Sun
01:27 Sep 20, 2020

Great story and my suggestion are the same as @ᔕᗩᗰᗩᖇᗩ ❤️, please try to ignore caps, but it is OKAY if that's your style. Also, watch out your grammar.

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16:51 Sep 19, 2020

Great story! It was very unique. One suggestion: all caps was hard to read, so many do normal letters in upcoming stories. Nice work!

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Mahathi A
04:09 Sep 20, 2020

Thank you

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