Submitted to: Contest #292

Beyond the Gray

Written in response to: "Write a story that has a colour in the title."

Adventure Fiction

The world had been colorless for as long as anyone could remember. The city was sleek, efficient, and lifeless—a landscape of grays, blacks, and whites. No one questioned it anymore. Color was a relic of myths, a concept that had faded not just from the world but from memory itself. Yet, whispers persisted in the underground circuits of those who still dared to wonder. They spoke of a painting—a forbidden object, hidden away by those in control. It was the only thing in existence that had not lost its color.

Elynn had never believed in it, not truly. She had heard the rumors, like everyone else, but they sounded like the desperate ramblings of those who longed for something more. Until the day she saw it with her own eyes.

She hadn’t been looking for it. She had simply been in the wrong place at the wrong time—or the right place at the right time, depending on how one saw it. A routine maintenance job had brought her to the depths of the city, to a sector rarely accessed by anyone outside the governing officials. A door, left ajar. A pulse of light from within. And there, in a small glass case, she found it.

The painting.

It was unlike anything she had ever seen. A house sat nestled within rolling fields of green, the sky above stretching in a brilliant, impossible blue. Flowers, red and yellow and purple, dotted the grass like scattered jewels. In the background, trees framed towering mountains, their peaks kissed by snow. The colors burned into her vision, so vibrant they felt alive. And there, barely noticeable in the foreground, stood a child, gazing toward the house. Or perhaps looking beyond it, toward something unseen.

Elynn’s breath hitched. Her fingers trembled as she reached for her satchel. She had to take it. She had no plan, no idea of what she would do next, but she knew one thing with certainty: she couldn’t leave it here. She couldn’t let it be forgotten.

The heist was easier than she expected. No alarms blared. No guards rushed in. Perhaps they had been too afraid to destroy it, and in their fear, they had simply hidden it away, never expecting someone to be bold—or foolish—enough to take it.

It wasn’t until she returned to her apartment that she made the connection.

The painting… she had seen it before.

Not in color—not like this—but in a small, fragile sketch her great-great-grandmother had drawn decades ago, tucked away in an old box. A simple pencil rendering. She had never thought much of it, just a relic of a time no one remembered.

But now, looking between the painting and the worn scrap of paper, she knew. They were the same place. And that meant it had to be real.

Heart pounding, she sought out the only person who might know more—her grandfather.

He had told her stories from his childhood—stories his grandmother had once told him about the world before it fully grayed. His memory was hazy, details blurred by time and control, but when she showed him the painting and the sketch, something sparked behind his tired eyes.

"I knew this place," he murmured, tracing a wrinkled finger along the landscape. "We went there when I was young… but it didn’t look like this." He paused, his gaze lingering on the painting. "My grandmother—she used to talk about it all the time."

“Where is it?” Elynn asked. “Does it still exist?”

His brows furrowed in thought. “Far beyond the city. No one goes out there anymore. I don’t know if anything is left.” He paused, then nodded to himself. “But I remember the way.”

It wasn’t perfect. His memory had holes, details missing or uncertain. But it was something.

And it was enough.

Elynn packed her things that night, leaving behind the life she had always known. She didn’t tell anyone where she was going; she couldn’t risk them trying to stop her, or worse, trying to follow. The painting was carefully wrapped and secured, a beacon guiding her toward the unknown.

The journey would be long. The city’s limits stretched endlessly, its borders guarded by laws, not walls. Few had reason to leave, and even fewer dared to try. But Elynn had to. The world had been gray for as long as she could remember, but now she knew—color had not been erased. It had only been hidden.

And she was going to find it.

Elynn walked for days, the city’s towering structures slowly fading behind her. The landscape around her was monotonous at first—gray roads, barren fields, empty skies—but as she ventured farther, she began to notice subtle shifts. The air felt different, lighter, as if the world was waking up from a long slumber.

It was on the fourth day, just as the sun began to dip beneath a cloudless sky, that she met him.

He was sitting on a rock by the side of the road, staring into the distance as if waiting for something—or someone. Elynn had become accustomed to the loneliness of the journey, but this man stood out. His clothing, though worn, was different from what she was used to. An old oversized jacket, boots covered in dust, a satchel that looked like it had seen too many miles. His face was weathered, but his eyes—sharp, curious—locked onto hers as soon as she came into view.

“I’ve been waiting for you,” he said, his voice rough, like someone unused to speaking.

Elynn paused, unsure whether to approach. “Waiting for me?”

The man gave a crooked smile. “I’ve been following the same whispers you have. The painting, the colors—no one believes it, but I do. I knew you’d come looking for it, eventually.”

She studied him, cautious but intrigued. “Who are you?”

“Someone who’s been trying to find the truth,” he replied. “I’ve been out here for years. I used to live in the city, just like you. But I saw things—things I couldn’t ignore. They would have you believe the world is gray because it has always been this way. But I knew better.”

Elynn hesitated. She had been alone in this search, driven by a family relic and the hope that the world hadn’t always been this way. But here was someone else, someone who believed as she did. She found herself wondering if this was another part of the puzzle. A sign that she wasn’t as alone as she thought.

“I’m Elynn,” she said, finally sitting down beside him. “And I’m looking for the place in the painting.”

He nodded, as if he had expected that answer. “I thought as much,” he said, his voice filled with a hint of weariness. “I’ve been searching for it for years—following the whispers, the rumors—but every time I think I’m getting close, I get turned around. Lost. The land itself doesn’t want to be found, it seems.”

Elynn glanced at him, seeing the frustration etched in his face. “So you haven’t seen it? Not the place in the painting?”

He shook his head, a faint smile on his lips, though it didn’t reach his eyes. “No, not yet. But I’ll keep looking. Something tells me we’ll find it together.”

They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of their shared understanding hanging between them. Elynn felt something shift inside her. The lonely, uncertain path ahead seemed a little less daunting with him by her side. But she still knew the journey was hers to make.

They rose and began walking together, moving further away from the city, following the faint trail her grandfather had given her. They crossed rivers and climbed hills, each day pushing them closer to the place she had seen in the painting. Yet, the closer they came, the more Elynn wondered—what would they find? Would it be real? Or had the world already forgotten?

As they neared the final stretch of their journey, the land began to change. The barren, gray fields gave way to patches of green grass, and small clusters of flowers—red, yellow, purple—sprouted where there had been nothing. Elynn’s heart raced as she recognized the signs from the painting. She could almost see it now, just beyond the next hill.

And then, as they crested that hill, they were standing there at the edge of it—where the land still remembered what it was like before everything changed.

A small house stood at the edge of a sprawling meadow, surrounded by flowers in every shade she could imagine. The sky above stretched out in a vast expanse of brilliant blue. In the distance, trees lined the horizon, their dark green leaves swaying gently in the breeze, and towering mountains rose beyond them, their peaks dusted with snow.

It was the same. The same as the painting. The same as the sketch her great-great-grandmother had drawn, the same as the world her grandfather had whispered about.

They had found it.

Elynn felt tears welling in her eyes as she stood there, unable to speak, overwhelmed by the beauty of a world forgotten. The colors were vibrant, alive. The world was not lost. It had simply been hidden.

But even as the moment took her breath away, she knew it wasn’t over. This place, this forgotten Eden, was only a piece of the puzzle. Elynn could feel it—the weight of the world’s lost history, the secrets buried beneath the surface. There were more truths to uncover, more questions to ask.

“I thought it would feel different,” the man said, breaking the silence. “But it’s real. It’s all real.”

Elynn turned to him and nodded, her heart heavy with the understanding that this was only the beginning. “The colors are here,” she said softly. “But there’s more. There’s more to find.”

The man smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. “Then let’s find it.”

And so they began the next part of the journey—together, but still separate in their own ways—knowing that the world’s secrets were out there, waiting to be uncovered.

The colors were only the start. And for the first time, Elynn felt that perhaps she could bring them all back. Not just the colors of the world, but the colors of truth.

Posted Mar 02, 2025
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