Submitted to: Contest #305

The Quiet Between Heartbeats

Written in response to: "It took a few seconds to realize I was utterly and completely lost."

Fantasy Fiction Romance

It took a few seconds to realize she was utterly and completely lost.

Faelynn stood before the fractured mirror in her private chamber, where dawn filtered through silk-draped windows in gilded strands, bathing the stone in amber and sorrow. The mirror, long splintered from battles both within and without, no longer reflected truth. It only fractured it—casting her face in disjointed fragments, one half veiled in light, the other in shadow. She looked at herself, and saw a stranger wearing the remnants of a crown made of ghosts.

The rebel. The whore. The girl who once danced barefoot beneath the sun with flowers in her braid, and the woman who now bore empires across her shoulders, her spine bowed beneath the weight of too many names.

And somewhere between those shattered selves stood Lycel and Cailen.

The room was silent save for the crackle of candlewax and the distant murmur of life above Eden. Her hand, pale and trembling, gripped the windowsill as though it might anchor her to the present. But her soul drifted, untethered. Back to a memory wrapped in warmth and wistful ache.

She had returned to Eden broken but unbowed, her body gaunt from the Eladrin dungeons and her spirit frayed like an old ribbon. They had carved silence into her bones, but they could not take her fire. She stepped into the brothel’s velvet embrace with blood beneath her fingernails and defiance in her gaze.

And there stood Lycel.

He had aged. Not cruelly, but softly—like parchment singed at the edges. The lines beside his eyes had deepened from worry, not wear. Yet when he saw her, his soul surged forward, and the boy within him rose to meet the girl he once knew.

No words passed between them. Only touch. Only breath.

His hands trembled as they cupped her face, reverent, disbelieving. She leaned into him like a woman seeking sanctuary, and his kiss—tender and tasting faintly of mint and unshed grief—unraveled her.

That night, beneath Eden’s candlelight, they didn’t seek lust. They sought remembrance. Her fingers traced familiar paths over skin that had waited for her return. His mouth whispered old promises between shivers of longing.

And afterward, as their limbs tangled in the silence, he whispered into her hair, “You came back to me.”

But Faelynn could not answer.

Because a piece of her had not.

The memory faded, leaving the scent of crushed petals in its wake. Faelynn blinked slowly, her gaze settling on the mirror once more. Her face—split between light and dark—mirrored the chasm inside her.

The heart was treacherous.

It could cradle safety in one hand and cradle ruin in the other.

Cailen.

His name struck like a drumbeat in her ribcage. An oath and a wound.

It had been in the tunnels—those obsidian arteries beneath Solitude—where they’d fought side by side, blades drawn, silence taut between them. The air had tasted of moss and metal. She had not trusted him. Not then.

And yet, when the spider lunged—an enormous monstrosity of chitin and hunger—he had moved faster than thought.

One moment she stood alone. The next, she was crushed between his body and the wall, the stone biting into her spine, the heat of him like wildfire.

The creature’s fangs missed her by inches.

Cailen’s arm braced against her chest, his breath tangled with hers. His body shielded hers completely, and in that breathless pause—between death and the next heartbeat—she felt it.

Not hatred.

Not fear.

But recognition.

His eyes, gleaming with fury and something rawer, locked with hers. Her breath hitched. Her fingers clenched his tunic, not for balance, but because the world had tilted.

Later, they would not speak of it. He would press cloth into her hand for her wound and vanish into the dark. But the tremor he left in her ribs lingered, long after the blood was gone.

Now, days later, that moment pulsed beneath her skin like a secret. A sin. A choice unmade.

Faelynn inhaled sharply. The cracked mirror offered no answers—only questions spoken in broken glass.

Lycel had asked her to choose. “Not for the rebellion. Not for them. For you.”

But what was she, beyond the rebellion? Beyond the mistress of Eden? Beyond the Lythari whose people had been scattered like leaves?

Did she yearn for safety? For a love tethered to her childhood—sunlit and sure?

Or did she crave the kind of ache that Cailen ignited in her, the kind that made her feel not safe, but alive? The kind that burned?

She did not know.

She only knew that neither man could carry her entirety.

Perhaps that was what love truly meant—learning to live not with certainty, but with contradiction. With ache. With longing. With the quiet between heartbeats.

A knock stirred the air behind her.

“My lady,” came the soft voice beyond the door. “They await you below.”

Faelynn did not speak. She turned from the mirror, from the woman who could not choose, and stepped into her boots of leather and resolve. She draped her cloak about her shoulders—not to shield, but to sharpen.

Then she descended.

Through the winding corridors of Eden, past velvet halls and hidden doors, she entered the catacombs below—a place where the breath of the rebellion burned steady.

Prometheus.

Its heart beat deep beneath Solitude, a sanctuary forged from pain and fire. Torches flared as she passed, nods of reverence greeting her shadow. And when she reached the Sanctum—the deepest chamber where decisions were forged in steel and soul—she found them.

Cailen stood like a carved blade—rigid, gleaming with restrained fury. Lycel, by contrast, leaned forward in heated debate, his voice raw with passion, his hands clenched into protest.

They did not notice her arrival.

Not yet.

But they would.

And when they did, she would have to speak—not as Faelynn the girl, nor Faelynn the mistress, but as the storm-wrought woman who bore the weight of nations.

And chose.

Even if it meant staying lost a little while longer.

Posted Jun 02, 2025
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