Dear Sereva,
I wanted you to listen
To this song I wrote
I’ve never written
A song in my life
Or anything, really
In my life
Not a poem
Not a short story
Not unless it was in school
And a teacher
Was making me do it
The thought of paragraphs
Terrifies me to this day
And so even now
I have to break down the lines
As I’m typing this out to you
I also have to be careful
Because the nurses here
Love to keep an eye on us
As though we’re prisoners
Instead of residents here
At Farmington Pond
My daughter dropped me here
On my sixty-ninth birthday
After a minor stroke
And I assume she thought
I would only be here
For a year or two
Before the long hand of oblivion
Swept me up into its palm
Who would have thought
That ten years later
I’d still be kicking
With only some small
Permanent setbacks
From the stroke
My hands work fine
But certain words
Trip me up
And when I go to remember
Anything before the age of nine
My brain gets foggy
Although that might be protective
More than anything
If you knew what kind of childhood I had
My father didn’t let us
Listen to music
Unless it was bluegrass
Because for some reason
He enjoyed bluegrass
Although I never cared for it much
Nothing against the genre
But I think when something’s forced on you
You have a natural tendency
To pull back from it
“Elizabeth,” he’d scream up the stairs
If he heard me playing “Yakety Yak”
Or “Hard Headed Woman”
All I needed to hear
Was my name
And I knew I was going
To get a lecture and a half
Out of him
And when it was done
And I was sitting on that
Dusty old couch
Feeling like he’d taken me apart
And forgotten to put me back together
My mother would come into the room
Just to remind me
That her father beat her
And so wasn’t I lucky
That all my father did
Was explain to me
What a little bit of nothing I was
With all that, it’s a miracle
I managed to raise kids
That don’t hate me
But even when they don’t hate you
They still don’t know
What to do with you
Once you need them
More than they need you
As if either one of you
Is comfortable
With the shifting dynamics
I didn’t hate my daughter
For dropping me off here
But I had a kind of general anger
From that point on
At everything and everyone
That is--until I heard you
One of the nurses
Was playing your music
Behind the front desk
Even though she’s not supposed to
It was close to 2am
And I couldn’t sleep
But the rest of my floor
Is out like the dead
So I decided to go
Into the recreation room
And see what was on
Late night cable
I passed by the desk
And tried not to catch
The attention of the nurse
Even though she’s one
Of the nicer ones
That’s when I heard it
That song of yours
That filthy, vile song
“Big Mistake”
Isn’t it funny
How you can hear something
So shocking
And yet, you can’t stop listening to it
I stood there stock still
And listened while that song played
Until the nurse turned around
And nearly jumped out of her skin
To see me standing there
In my nightgown and robe
“Elizabeth,” she said, “Do you need something?”
I told her I needed
To know the name
Of that song
Now I listen to it
Night and day
Whenever I get a chance
The admin who checks on me
Says it’s not appropriate
As though I’m back to being fourteen again
Listening to my father tell me
How girls who play Elvis on their record player
Grow up to be street walkers
I would “Yes” the admin to death
And then go right back
To listening
Pretty soon, it wasn’t just that one song
Within a week
I had memorized your entire first album
And there are days
When I can’t even remember
What I had for lunch
Every song on it was overly sexual
And suggestive
And I couldn’t get enough
I’d hum it first thing in the morning
And all day long
Until I was back in bed
Then, and only then,
Would I allow myself
The pleasure of playing
That one ballad of yours
Softly next to my pillow
On the little CD player
I’ve had since my husband
Was alive and we’d go
On walks together
The way you sing ‘Serenade”
Is so beautiful
And I love how the title
Blends in with your name
You really are a lovely girl
And I’m sure all that cavorting
You do onstage and at your concerts
Is just you putting on a persona
I used to have to do
The same thing
When I was younger
Play at being a good daughter
Play at being a good wife
Play at being a good mother
And all the while
I wanted to rip my myself open
And step out as a different person altogether
I found that I couldn’t stop
At your music
I had to know everything
About you
I’d go on the computers
In the library
And read your Wikipedia
Top to bottom
Then I started reading articles about you
The good and the bad
(The New York Post sure despises you, huh?)
I had that nurse I like
Covertly make me a Twitter account
So I could read all the gossip about you
The stuff even the magazines
Can’t be bothered to write about
Rumors about who you’re dating
Who you’ve been seen with
That story about you and that guy
And that other girl
All spending a month in Greece together
And how maybe the three of you
Were engaged at some point
I read it all
And I kept reading
That’s how I found
The messageboards
All these people
Going back and forth
About things they’ve heard about you
And so much of it
Clearly not being true at all
I wanted to set them all straight
But if I said anything
Right away, they would all begin
To attack me
And fending them off
Took hours
And then I’d get yelled at by admin
For hogging the library computer
The messageboards are like a game
You have to learn
Which comment gets you ahead
And which sends you back
To the beginning
I didn’t want to say mean things about you
But if I said anything too nice
They’d call me all sorts of names
And threaten to boot me from the group
Good or bad
This was the most conversation
I’d had with any group of people
Since way back
When I was working
For the phone company
I found it stimulating
To figure out
What these people
Wanted to hear
And how I could phrase it in a way
That wouldn’t betray you
But would still endear me
To the anonymous posters
Like “SerevaSucks909”
That was how the rumor
Got started
You had been missing
From all your usual
Online places
And nobody had seen you
Plus you had canceled that concert
And boy, people were mad at you!
Everybody wanted to know
Where you were
And why you were letting
All your fans down
Fans like me
Who, sure, weren’t going
To go to your concert
Because I can’t afford it
And I have no way
Of getting there
But who still worry about you
And want to make sure you’re alright
Sereva, I don’t know
If you saw the comment I left
Or if somebody told you about it
But I promise all it said
Was “Maybe she’s pregnant?”
Did you see
How I wrote the word “maybe?”
Did you see
How I didn’t say I knew you were pregnant
Because how could I know?
How could anyone know but you?
I didn’t know everybody
Was going to start repeating it
Like it was a fact
And I definitely didn’t know
That the news would report it
And say it was speculation
But still act as though
That meant it was practically true
And the thing I really
Couldn’t have known
Was that you were pregnant
And you were trying to keep it a secret
And when you heard people talking about it
The stress put you in the hospital
And you almost lost the baby
If I knew all that
Could happen
Just from one
Stupid comment
I would have never even
Gone near that computer
I would just kept
Playing gin rummy
With the other women
On my floor
And I would have enjoyed your music
And never tried
To learn a single thing about you
Sereva, I know you must be
Furious with me and I don’t blame you
But I want you to know
I decided to apologize
By doing something
I’ve never done before
I wrote you a song
When I was young
And did something wrong
My father would make me
Write out poetry
And I hated it
It helped me learn
A lot of poetry
But it also made me
Dislike it so much
I never touched a book
Of Frost or Dickinson since
But something
In my bones
Seems to believe
That when you err
You rectify by writing
And so that’s what I’ve done
I wrote a song
About you and for you
Called ‘Big Mistake’
Same as your song
But with a different tune
And different words
And what I did was
I wrote down the words
And then practiced
Singing it over and over
Until I was ready to record it
On this little tape recorder
That the nurse I like
Has on her phone
She recorded me
And then helped me
Attach the recording
To an email
And then left me
To write whatever I wanted
To say to you
And that’s what I’m doing now
It’s very late here
But I don’t know where you are
I just hope it’s somewhere nice
I know you’re expecting
And you’re due soon
And I’m glad it seems like
Everything is going well
With the pregnancy
Based on that interview you did
With that lady on the tv
Whose hair I don’t like
I want to tell my daughter
All about the mess I got into
But she hasn’t come
For a visit in awhile
Maybe she’s ashamed of me
But why should she be ashamed
When she doesn’t even know
There’s something to be ashamed of?
Maybe she doesn’t need a reason
Maybe nobody does
I apologize for the sound
On the recording
Not just for my lack of vocal ability
But for how softly I’m singing
The nurse said we had
To be careful
Not to wake anyone up
Even though you couldn’t wake
Most of these people up
With a foghorn
I’m singing low
But if you can bring
Your phone or your computer
Or whatever you get email on
Really close to your ear
I think you can hear me just fine
Obviously there’s no
Direct email to you
But I think all the emails
To your fan club
Must go straight to you
Isn’t that right?
I hope I’m right
I know you won’t like the song
But it’s not really for liking
It’s just a way to say “I’m sorry”
You can play it once
And then never listen
To it again
You know, as soon as I recorded it
I completely forgot
How it was supposed to go
Isn’t that funny?
What stays with you
And what leaves?
Some songs stick
And some don’t
So you just listen
And then forget it
And then forget me too
No use remembering
Somebody like me
Even if I never stop
Remembering you
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Kevin, a running diatribe of the meandering thoughts of a lonely old woman who believes she is the reason a rumour is perpetuated out there and then her attempt to make amends. I like how you showed that her stroke affected her in the way you presented her language and scope of topic. Your level of creativity with the narration and weaving of story intermixed with the diatribe is awesome and engaging. You captured it so beautifully in this piece. I am so impressed with how you did that. This tale is intricate and has layers and is just...
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Thank you so much, Lily.
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NP, long time no chat. You okay?
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Another wonderful story. Having a foggy memory is a scary thing. The idea of being in a care home is an odd idea as well. I’m never sure how I feel about them.
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Thank you, Graham.
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Hi Kevin, This was a beautifully crafted poem that told us an incredible story. I loved the way that you pointed out the tragedy of this characters, life and all the different ways that she has managed to keep calm and carry on that one line about her mother’s father really stuck out to me and I can’t imagine feeling like you’re stuck in that cycle. I think the way that you chose a setting was fitting as well-how often do we set aside our elderly because it’s inconvenient to try to care for them? This was a wonderful response to the prompt. ...
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Thank you so much, Amanda.
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This was powerful and creative
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Thank you so much, Nina.
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This was a very sweet story (and a little sad too). I like your unique take on the obsessive fan character. Also enjoyed the stylized format, I feel it really added to Elizabeth's character.
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Thank you so much, Raymond.
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You say so much and paint a full picture of the narrator in so few words. Really well written and engaging.
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Thank you so much, Olivia.
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Super creative. Touching. Telling.
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Thank you so much, Mary
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