Under the endless expanse of a star-speckled sky, Sarah stood alone, her eyes scanning the heavens for the first streak of light. The meteor shower was supposed to start any moment now—a celestial show she’d been planning for weeks. But the field around her was empty, the stillness broken only by the faint chirp of crickets and the occasional sigh of the wind through the grass. It wasn’t supposed to be like this.
Even the fireflies seemed to whisper warnings with their coded, flashing light, their erratic glows hinting that something in the night wasn’t right.
She shifted her weight, her bare toes brushing against the cool, damp earth, the sensation grounding her as she adjusted the blanket she’d so carefully arranged earlier. Beside her, the snacks she’d brought for her and her friends glimmered faintly in the moonlight—chips, candy bars, and sodas for tonight. It all sat untouched, waiting, just like she was. The sharp tang of citronella clung to the air, her meticulous preparation for the night evident in every detail. Yet, the most important part was missing—her friends.
Where is everyone? She thought.
Her astronomy club had promised to come—this was their thing, their tradition. They’d always watched the stars together, sharing whispered jokes and awe-filled gasps as falling stars streaked across the sky. But now, as the minutes stretched on, Sarah’s excitement was mingling with an ache of disappointment. Where were they? Why hadn’t they come?
The air seemed heavier with each passing second, her gaze darting between the sky and the empty field around her. She hugged her knees close, her heart wavering between hope and hurt. The first falling star would appear soon—she could feel it—but would she be watching it alone?
She had thought of everything. Everything except this. The unexpected absence of her friends.
Her eyes flicked to her phone screen, its brightness cutting through the darkness. No texts. No missed calls. Just silence. Sarah’s chest tightened, a lump forming in her throat. She had planned for every little detail—the snacks, the blankets, even the perfect spot to catch the meteor shower. She’d thought they were all excited about it, too. Just a few days ago, they’d been huddled together in the school library, talking about how cool it would be. But apparently, that excitement hadn’t lasted.
Sarah couldn’t shake the image of the new girl—the one her friends seemed completely captivated by. She was all glossy hair, designer labels, and a smile so practiced it could have been rehearsed in front of a mirror. Every laugh, every flick of her wrist, every casually dropped mention of her life in LA seemed perfectly crafted to command attention. And it worked.
She had this way of making everyone feel special, leaning in like their every word was the most fascinating thing she’d ever heard, but Sarah could see through it. It wasn’t about connection—it was about control. The new girl didn’t just aspire to be liked; she needed to be the center of the universe, and her friends were orbiting her now, drawn in by her charm.
What stung most was how easily they’d fallen for it, how quickly they’d shifted their focus from Sarah to her. One by one, they drifted closer to the new girl, laughing at her exaggerated stories and hanging on her every word, leaving Sarah standing on the sidelines. It wasn’t just attention she wanted—it was their attention, and she was stealing it, effortlessly.
She drew in a shaky breath, her chest tight with the weight of disappointment. Tilting her head back, she let her eyes trace the vast expanse of the night sky, searching for something—anything—to distract her from the ache that had settled deep inside her. And then, it happened.
The first meteorite tore through the darkness, a brilliant streak of light that burned like a firework, its tail shimmering for just a moment before dissolving into the black. It was so sudden, so breathtaking, that it stole the air from her lungs. Another followed, then another—each one carving through the heavens like a fleeting work of art, as if the universe itself was painting across the night.
For a moment, the pain in her chest loosened its grip, replaced by a sense of awe so pure it felt like magic. The falling stars fell like a Fourth of July spectacle, bursting across the sky in fiery bursts, their trails glowing faintly before vanishing into the void. It was beautiful—so beautiful that, for just a heartbeat, it made her forget. Forget the emptiness beside her. Forget the absence of her friends. In this moment, it was just her and the stars, and that was enough.
And then she noticed it—something strange. Out of the corner of her eye, a faint glow flickered in the darkness. At first, she thought it might be a firefly, but this was brighter, sharper, and an eerie shade of green that seemed almost unnatural. Her breath hitched as she turned her head, her eyes locking onto the light.
It hovered there, just at the edge of her vision, pulsing faintly, as if it were alive. It shimmered, twisting and darting in a way that sent a shiver rolling down her spine. This wasn’t the lazy drift of a firefly or the harmless glimmer of something familiar. Its movements were erratic, deliberate—almost as if it were watching her.
Her pulse quickened as she took an instinctive step back, her gaze glued to the glowing anomaly. It hovered for a moment longer, then darted away so quickly it left her blinking into the empty night. Whatever it was, it wasn’t normal, and an uneasy knot was forming in her stomach. No aircraft moves like that. And why green? Her breath hitched, her chest tightening as unease prickled at the edges of her mind. What was that? It wasn’t a meteorite, not like any she’d read about, not like anything she’d ever seen.
She squinted into the darkness, her eyes darting to where the strange light had been, trying to catch another glimpse. Her heart thudded painfully as she scanned the horizon, searching for any trace of its path. But it was gone, vanishing as quickly as it had come, leaving behind only an unsettling stillness.
The night felt heavier, darker, as though the absence of the light had stolen something from the air itself. She swallowed hard, her pulse racing as questions swirled in her mind. Whatever it was, it didn’t belong here. And for the first time, she felt truly alone under the vast, endless sky.
As the falling stars slowed, her mind drifted back to her friends and the laughter they shared with Dimi. She couldn’t stop thinking about Dimi—the new girl with her cocky smirk and cutting remarks. Dimi didn’t see the astronomy club as anything more than a joke, but Sarah had a sinking feeling she’d become the punchline.
Turns out, she was right. Dimi, the self-proclaimed queen of everything, had used her dad, an actual NASA engineer, to hijack the club. While Sarah waited alone under the stars, Dimi had thrown a pool party, complete with her dad pointing constellations out with a laser pointer. Worse, the whole club had ditched Sarah to be there.
Dimi had planned it perfectly. The strange green light in the sky wasn’t random; it was a carefully crafted trick, designed to unsettle Sarah, to make her look foolish. She needed Sarah to be a joke, someone her friends could laugh at, not someone they respected. If all went well, Sarah would take the bait—confused, disoriented, and desperate to explain what she’d seen.
The hope was simple: Sarah would tell everyone she’d seen a UFO. The absurdity of it would spread like wildfire, and by the time the story made its rounds, Sarah wouldn’t just be an outsider; she’d be a punchline. Dimi didn’t just want Sarah out of the way; she wanted her to be humiliated, stripped of the dignity that made her likable and the head of the club. This wasn’t just a prank; it was a calculated move to dehumanize her in the eyes of everyone who mattered.
The girls were all in on it; Dimi’s father was an unwitting accomplice to his daughters' cruel prank.
The following Monday, whispers began, buzzing through the school like a swarm of angry bees.
Sarah walked into the classroom, head down, but the giggles and sharp-edged glances were impossible to ignore. By lunch, the comments grew louder.
“So, Sarah,” Lacy said, leaning across the cafeteria table with an exaggerated smirk. “What did you do Saturday night?”
Sarah hesitated, her voice small. “I set up my telescope by the pond. Like we planned.…”
The group erupted into laughter.
“Oh, didn’t you hear?” Dimi said, lounging back like a queen on her throne. “My dad gave us a private astronomy lesson. He even used his laser pointer to show us constellations. It was amazing.”
Sarah’s stomach twisted, but she kept her voice steady. “Why didn’t anyone tell me?”
Lacy shrugged, fake sympathy dripping off her words. “I guess Dimi’s the new leader of the club. I mean, her dad does work for NASA.”
Sarah didn’t respond. She’d spent Saturday night seeing something none of them had—a strange, green light carving impossible patterns in the sky. But there was no point trying to explain. They wouldn’t believe her anyway.
Mr. Callahan, the astronomy club advisor, noticed Sarah’s silence in class that day. When he found out what had happened, he wasn’t just upset—he was determined to make it right.
It didn’t take much convincing for Clyde, Dimi’s dad, to step in. Over beers at their bowling league, Mr. Callahan explained how Dimi had sidelined Sarah, turning the club into her own popularity contest. Clyde, to his credit, didn’t defend his daughter. If anything, he seemed disappointed. He had seen this act before in LA. It was time for a lesson in humility, a chance to learn from mistakes.
“She needs to learn,” Clyde said with a sigh. And he had a plan.
When the next big celestial event rolled around—a rare planetary alignment, Sarah debated whether to even bother setting up her telescope. But Mr. Callahan encouraged her, and she eventually decided to try again, this time with no expectations.
Dimi, meanwhile, was holding court by her backyard pool, surrounded by friends. Chlorine and laughter filled the air as she reveled in her effortless popularity.
“Dad, are you setting up the telescope here?” she asked, noticing him packing up gear.
“No,” Clyde said calmly, shutting the car trunk. “I’ll be helping Sarah tonight. She’s the leader of the club, after all.”
Dimi froze. “What? I’m the leader of the club!”
Clyde raised an eyebrow. “No, you’re not. Sarah planned the event, and I’m going where I’m needed. You can stay here.”
Her friends exchanged awkward glances as Clyde drove off, leaving Dimi speechless. They each recognized the lesson from him as they had similar lessons from their own parents.
The friendship they’d shared with Sarah lingered in their minds, a bittersweet ache they couldn’t quite shake. Before Dimi, it had been easy—effortless, even. Sarah had been the one they laughed with, confided in, trusted. But Dimi’s arrival had changed everything, pulling them into her orbit with her glitzy charm and sharp-edged wit. They hadn’t realized how far they’d drifted from Sarah until now, and the guilt was beginning to weigh on them.
Each of them, in their own quiet moments, found themselves thinking about Sarah—her warmth, her kindness, the way she always made them feel seen. Dimi’s games had been fun at first, but now, with the sting of her manipulation fresh in their minds, they couldn’t ignore how wrong it all felt. They’d let themselves be swept away, abandoning Sarah for someone who cared more about control than connection.
Now, they couldn’t stop wondering how to make things right. The thought of apologizing felt daunting, but the thought of losing Sarah forever felt worse. One by one, they began to realize that the friendship they’d left behind was worth fighting for—and that maybe, just maybe, Sarah would be willing to forgive them.
Meanwhile, under the clear night sky, Sarah stood by her telescope, guiding a small group of students through the planetary alignment. Clyde’s massive telescope was the star attraction, and his steady presence gave Sarah the confidence to lead the group like she always had.
When her friends appeared in the parking lot, their headlights slicing through the thick dark like knives, Sarah strained her eyes, expecting to see Dimi among them. She was absent.
As Clyde pointed out what the bright dots were in the sky, their light cutting through the darkness like jewels strung across the heavens, Sarah felt something shift deep inside her. She wasn’t invisible. She wasn’t forgotten.
Miles away, Demi sat alone by the pool, her friends long gone, the fading laughter of the party replaced by the quiet hum of crickets. She leaned back in a lounge chair, staring at the stars. For the first time, they felt heavy, pressing down on her like a weight she couldn’t shake. The vastness of the sky, something she never really thought about before, now seemed to stretch endlessly, uncaring and infinite.
Her eyes caught a faint green light slicing through the darkness, zigzagging erratically. A laser pointer. Her father’s laser pointer. She knew exactly where he was—helping Sarah.
The sting hit her sharp and fast. He’d chosen Sarah. Not her.
Demi’s throat burned as if the indigestion was venom. It wasn’t the telescope, the stars, or even her dad’s choice that hurt the most. It was the realization that, for once, she wasn’t the center of everything. The world, the stars, the universe—they didn’t care about her.
Tears blurred her vision, turning the laser’s green beam into fractured prisms against the night. The truth hit her harder than she expected: she’d been mistaken. About Sarah, about the club, about all of it.
The laser's secretive, mysterious light—once a playful tool her father used to point things out, now felt like a brand seared onto her conscience, a constant reminder of her cruel actions.
The following Monday, Demi found Sarah by the lockers after class, her usual confidence nowhere to be found. She shifted awkwardly, her words catching in her throat.
“Hey,” she said, her voice softer than Sarah had ever heard it. “I just… I’m sorry. For everything.”
Sarah blinked, surprised, unsure if she’d heard her right. She studied Demi’s face, the hesitation in her eyes, the vulnerability she wasn’t used to seeing.
After a long pause, Sarah nodded. “Thanks,” she said simply.
Dimi just stood there waiting. Finally she asked her, “Are you interested in astronomy?” Sarah asked.
Dimi peered into her eyes. “I’m interested in starting over with you, and yeah, I like what daddy is doing, so it wouldn’t hurt to know something about it. Can you forgive me?”
She thought about the hours she’d spent alone, wondering what she’d done wrong, questioning if she’d ever been enough for them. A lump rose in her throat, and for a moment, she couldn’t speak.
“I don’t know,” Sarah finally said, her voice trembling with the weight of her pain. “Do you even understand what you did to me? Do you know what it felt like to be made into a joke… to lose everyone I thought I could trust?” Her hands curled into fists at her sides, but her voice cracked as tears pricked her eyes. “You didn’t just hurt me, Dimi. You made me feel invisible. Like, I didn’t matter.”
She looked away, her gaze fixed on the ground, trying to steady the whirlwind of emotions inside her. Part of her wanted to scream, to tell Dimi that forgiveness wasn’t hers to ask for. But another part—one she wasn’t ready to admit to yet—longed to let go of the weight she’d been carrying.
Finally, Sarah looked back at Dimi, her expression a mix of raw vulnerability and quiet strength. “I don’t know if I can forgive you right now. Maybe someday. But not yet. You can’t just say sorry and expect the hurt to disappear.” Her voice softened, though the pain still lingered in her words. “If you really mean it, show me. Prove to me that you’ve changed. Maybe then… maybe then I can try.”
Forgiveness was locked deep within Sarah, and she couldn't freely give it, not this time. If Dimi wanted her forgiveness, if she wanted her friendship, she would have to prove it, not with words but with actions, day by day. Trust wasn’t a gift; it was something earned, and Dimi would have to become the friend she had never been to any of her peers to deserve it.
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I wasn't sure where the story was going, and then when the green light appeared I briefly thought we might be heading for an unwitnessed alien abduction, but you cleared that up quickly enough, but the "what's really happening" question kept me reading.
You made me feel the cruel rejection all too often experienced in youth (and adults, to be honest.) Thank you for not having Sarah surrender to the "need to forgive"; I hope the lesson stuck with her friends as well.
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Can you imagine if her father or fathers today had the correct response to their own progeny like this father did? That was tough love, and it was totally out of love to nudge his daughter into being a better person. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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This is a great story, beautifully told, Scott. The descriptions of the surroundings and of the thoughts and feelings of the characters are vivid. I felt present in the story.
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Thanks, Jo. Now, if I can just get the attention of a judge or two, it would be wonderful!
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