The Forgotten Road

Submitted into Contest #249 in response to: Write a story about a character driving and getting lost.... view prompt

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The night was a thick veil of fog and shadow, the kind that swallowed up the weak beams of Alex's headlights and made her feel like she was driving into nothing at all. Eldridge was a small blip on the map, a place you'd miss if you blinked while passing on the highway. But it was home, or at least it had been for the last few years.

Alex's grip on the steering wheel tightened as the road seemed to twist more than memory served. The GPS had given up the ghost miles back, its screen now a dull and lifeless gray. She was alone out here, save for the occasional deer that would freeze in the headlights before bounding into the underbrush.

It was on the third such turn, the car's tires crunching over gravel that seemed too loud in the silence, that Alex noticed the road. It wasn't the one she was on, but another, branching off to the left. It was narrow, the asphalt cracked and worn, with weeds sprouting through like nature was trying to reclaim it.

Curiosity was a siren call, and Alex had never been good at resisting. She slowed the car, peering down the road that shouldn't be there. The fog seemed to gather more densely, as if it were a barrier between the known world and... something else.

The decision to turn was made with a reckless kind of abandon that Alex would later struggle to explain. The car's tires left the familiarity of the main road, and the world changed.

The radio, silent for the last half-hour, crackled to life with a burst of static. Between the white noise, a song began to play, one that Alex was sure hadn't been heard on airwaves since her grandparents were young. The clock on the dash, digital and modern, flickered and spun backward, the numbers regressing with every second that passed.

Alex's heart hammered in her chest, a staccato beat that seemed too loud in the confines of the car. She should turn around, go back to the main road, forget this ever happened. But when she glanced in the rearview mirror, the road behind her was gone, swallowed by the fog as if it had never been.

The fuel gauge, which had been comfortably full, now hovered above empty, the needle quivering as if in fear. Alex's breath came in short, sharp gasps. She wasn't a believer in the supernatural, but Eldridge was old, and old places had old legends. The Forgotten Road was one of them, a tale told to scare children and laugh about later.

But no one was laughing now.

Up ahead, the light from the gas station flickered, a beacon in the oppressive darkness. It promised safety, or at least the illusion of it. With no other options, Alex steered the car toward it, each turn of the wheel a silent prayer that this was not the end of her story.

The neon sign of the gas station buzzed like a dying fly, its light flickering erratically as if struggling against the darkness. The name was obscured by years of neglect, the letters peeling and faded. But it didn't matter; sometimes names are just placeholders for things better left unnamed.

Alex's car rolled to a stop, the engine sputtering out its last breath before silence enveloped everything. She sat there for a moment, hands still gripping the wheel, heart pounding a rhythm of primal fear. The mist pressed against the windows, a shroud that hid the world she knew.

With a deep breath that did little to calm her nerves, Alex stepped out of the car. The air was cold, carrying the scent of oil and something else, something sweet and rotting. The gas station was a relic from another time, the pumps rusted and the windows boarded up.

"Hello?" Alex's voice was a whisper, stolen by the fog. No answer came, save for the distant echo of her own call.

The door to the station's shop was ajar, hanging off its hinges. Inside, the shelves were stocked with goods covered in dust, the prices marked in cents rather than dollars. Cobwebs clung to the corners, and the floor was littered with the detritus of years gone by.

A bell above the door jingled as Alex pushed it open, the sound discordant and jarring. The air inside was stale, heavy with the weight of unspoken stories. And then, movement—a shadow flitting just beyond the edge of sight.

Alex turned, catching only the tail end of... something. It was there and then not, leaving only the lingering sense of being watched. The back of her neck prickled, and every instinct screamed to run, to get back in the car and drive until the sun rose and burned away the fog.

But the car was dead, and the road was gone. There was no choice but to press on.

Behind the counter, a newspaper lay open, the headline screaming about a war that had ended decades ago. The date was from a time before Alex was born, the paper yellowed with age.

A noise—a soft, skittering sound—drew Alex's attention to the back room. The door was slightly open, swaying gently as if coaxed by an unseen hand. The light inside was dim, but it was light nonetheless.

Gathering the shards of her courage, Alex approached the door, each step a monumental effort. The skittering grew louder, more insistent. Something was in there, something alive.

With a trembling hand, Alex pushed the door open, and the light revealed its secrets. The room was small, cluttered with boxes and old machinery. And in the center, a figure hunched over something on the floor.

It turned, and Alex's breath caught in her throat. The figure was human, or had been once. Its eyes were hollow, its skin pale and translucent. It regarded Alex with a curiosity that was almost childlike.

"Lost?" it croaked, the voice dry as autumn leaves.

Alex nodded, unable to find her voice.

The figure smiled, and in that smile, there was a promise—a promise of answers, of secrets unveiled.

"Follow," it said, and shuffled toward a door at the back of the room, a door that hadn't been there a moment ago.

Alex followed, because what else was there to do? The road had brought her here, to this place out of time. And the road demanded its due.

The door at the back of the room opened with a groan, its hinges protesting the movement after years of disuse. The figure led Alex down a set of stairs that creaked under her weight, each step sending a puff of dust into the air. The light from above seemed to struggle to penetrate the darkness below, as if the shadows were too thick, too hungry.

The basement was a cavern of forgotten things. Old signs hung from the ceiling, their messages advertising products that no longer existed. Mannequins stood in silent judgment, their faces blank and eyes empty. It was a museum of the discarded, a testament to the ephemeral nature of human endeavor.

The figure moved with a purpose, its steps sure despite the clutter. It stopped before a wall lined with old newspaper clippings, yellowed and brittle. The headlines spoke of disappearances, of people who had ventured onto the Forgotten Road and never returned.

"You're not the first," the figure whispered, its voice rustling like dead leaves.

Alex's eyes scanned the articles, a growing sense of dread knotting her stomach. "What happened to them?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.

The figure turned, its eyes gleaming with a pale light. "Lost," it said, the word a sentence unto itself.

"But why? Why are they... why am I here?" Alex's voice grew stronger, fueled by a mix of fear and anger.

The figure's smile was a thing of sorrow. "The road is hungry," it said. "It feeds on the lost, on those who seek but do not see."

Alex felt a chill that had nothing to do with the cold. "How do I get back?" she asked, desperation creeping into her voice.

The figure pointed to a map on the wall, its edges curled and faded. It was a map of Eldridge, but not as Alex knew it. The roads twisted in unfamiliar patterns, and at the center, where the town should be, there was only a blank space.

"The road changes," the figure said. "It shifts with the mist. To find your way back, you must understand the road."

Alex looked at the map, her mind racing. The roads were a puzzle, a labyrinth with no clear exit. But there had to be a way. There was always a way.

The figure watched, its expression unreadable. "Be quick," it said. "The mist doesn't linger, and neither does the road."

With a nod, Alex stepped forward, studying the map with a focus she didn't know she possessed. The articles, the stories of the lost, they were clues. Each one a piece of the puzzle that would lead her home.

Or so she hoped.

The figure retreated into the shadows, leaving Alex alone with the map and the whispers of the past. The basement felt alive, as if it were breathing with the slow, steady rhythm of something ancient and unfathomable.

And above, the mist waited, patient and eternal.

The map was a cryptic guide, a riddle wrapped in Eldridge's fog-shrouded history. Alex traced the lines with a finger, the paper brittle under her touch. The roads looped and curled like serpents, a maze with no discernible start or end.

Eventually patterns began to emerge, a logic to the chaos. The stories of the lost, the ones who had vanished into the mist, they weren't random. They were signposts, markers that charted a course through the labyrinth.

Alex's mind worked, piecing together the puzzle. One article spoke of a man who disappeared after pursuing the sound of a child's laughter. Another told of a woman who followed a light she swore was her late husband's lantern, leading her off the path.

The road didn't just feed on the lost; it lured them, tempted them with the echoes of their deepest desires and fears. It was a predator, and they were its chosen prey.

But Alex was determined not to be another story, another headline to add to the wall. She memorized the map, the turns and landmarks that might lead her back to reality.

The figure watched from the shadows, its form barely more than a wisp in the dim light. "Do you see?" it asked, its voice a hushed whisper.

"I see," Alex replied, her voice steady despite the pounding of her heart.

"Then go," the figure said, gesturing toward the stairs. "The road is waiting."

Alex ascended the stairs, the map etched into her memory. The fog greeted her like an old friend, cold and damp against her skin. The gas station was a silent sentinel as she returned to her car.

The engine roared to life, a small miracle in the stillness. Alex put the car in gear, her hands steady on the wheel. She drove, following the turns and twists that the map had promised would lead her home.

But the road was a living thing, and it didn't give up its quarry easily. The mist swirled, the landscape shifting, changing before her eyes. Landmarks appeared and vanished, the world remade with each passing second.

Time lost meaning, the clock on the dash frozen at a moment that no longer mattered. Alex drove, her eyes fixed on the road that seemed to stretch into infinity.

Suddenly, a glimmer of hope. A familiar sight, a tree that Alex recognized from her daily commute. It stood there, a beacon in the chaos.

With a surge of relief, Alex turned onto the road that led home. The fog began to lift, the world returning to its rightful shape.

But as she neared the edge of Eldridge, a chilling thought took root. The road had let her go, but at what cost? What had it taken in exchange for her freedom?

She didn't know, couldn't know. But as she passed the sign that welcomed her back to Eldridge, Alex felt a piece of herself left behind, lost forever on The Forgotten Road.

Eldridge welcomed Alex back with open arms, its streets and houses unchanged by the passage of time. But Alex was changed, touched by the mist and marked by the road.

She found herself driving through town, the faces of passersby blurred and indistinct. Alex's mind was a whirlpool of thoughts, spinning around one haunting question: What had the road taken from her?

The answer came not in words, but in feelings—a hollowness inside, a sense of something missing. Memories seemed distant, as if viewed through a fogged lens. Laughter, love, moments of joy—all felt muted, as though the road had siphoned away their vibrancy.

Alex pulled into the driveway of her home, the house a silent witness to her return. Inside, everything was as she had left it, yet nothing felt the same. The photos on the walls, the books on the shelves, all familiar, yet strangely foreign.

Sleep refused to come that night. Alex lay in bed, staring at the ceiling, listening to the silence. It was in these quiet hours that the road whispered to her  its voice a hiss that promised more, always more.

Days passed, and Alex tried to reclaim her life, to fit back into the grooves of normalcy. But the people of Eldridge noticed the change. There was something off about Alex, something distant and unreachable.

Whispers spread, stories told in hushed tones about the one who came back from the Forgotten Road. Some said Alex was lucky, others that she was cursed. But all agreed that the road had taken its toll.

Alex could feel the pull of the road, even now. It called to her, a siren song that promised answers to questions she hadn't dared to ask. And deep down, she knew the road wasn't done with them. Not yet.

One evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon and the mist began to rise, Alex found herself standing at the edge of town, where the pavement gave way to dirt and gravel.

The road was there, waiting, its path clear in the twilight. Alex took a step forward, then another. The mist closed in, a loving embrace that promised oblivion.

As she walked into the fog, Alex understood the truth of the Forgotten Road. It didn't just take; it gave as well. It gave a glimpse of the infinite, of the spaces between worlds where reality bent and dreams took root.

But such knowledge came at a price, a piece of one's soul traded for the secrets of the universe. Alex paid that price willingly, for the road had shown her wonders and horrors beyond imagining.

As the mist swallowed her whole, Alex smiled. The road was hers now, and she was its willing acolyte.

In Eldridge, the legend of the Forgotten Road grew. It became a cautionary tale, a story to scare children and thrill adults. And sometimes, on foggy nights, they say you can see a figure walking the road, a figure that looks a lot like Alex.

But no one ever stops her, for some roads are best left untraveled, and some stories are best left untold.

May 08, 2024 17:17

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