I was from a poor family. I have siblings I have one brother and one sister. I'm the second child of Billy and Anna MacBride. My name is Margaux MacBride. I'm 26 years old. My parents can't afford to supports our daily allowance. My sister she is the eldest her name is Margarette 28 years old and the youngest is Maddox 20 years old. My parents are both vendors at the market. I know to myself that I have a talent. My best friend his name is James he invites me to sing on the street. Because we need to earn money. We used our talent. My teacher saw us singing on the street. She is Ms. Agatha she gave 100$ each. She said she loves our voice. She invites us to join at the singing competition. James and I decided to join. There is lot of competitors. All of them are from wealthy family. Some of them are from voice lesson. James and I felt nervous. We asked ourself if we wants to pursue our dreams. The host called us to be prepared for the singing competition. When it's my turn to show my talent infront of the judges. I started to sing with all my heart. They said my voice is fantastic. I'm so overwhelm. I felt I was over the moon. Because of their positive feedback. They said I made it to the top 50. Unfortunately James didn't passed the audition. I felt sad for him.
During the rehearsal one of my competitors her name is Dolly she is so arrogant. I know she is from whealthy family. But she don't have the right to insult me infront of other competitors. Even my parents are vendors at the market It's not ashamed for me. They are not pathetic. I promised to myself I will be a better person someday. I will reach my goals.
One day I'm out of the competition. I got a lower votes. I cried a lot. Dolly and her friends bashed me. At the back stage I met Mr.John he introduced himself to me. He said he is willing to manage my career. I'll be a famous singer in an instant. So I grab the opportunity. One time I just found out that there is a secret society. It's a black magic society. They called it "The Magical Door". And Mr.John is one of the founder of the said secret society. They get their soul and they replaced a new soul. I called Mr.John I said I don't want to become a famous singer. I'm happy with my life. One day I saw Dolly with her friends at the mall. Dolly teased me. She called me loser. I felt sad. I decided to go back home and my neighborhoods bashed me. I'm so annoying. At the house my brother Maddox announced to my parents his girl friend is pregnant. He needs money. I witnessed my parents sacrifices for us and it's difficult for them to raised three childrens. I don't have a choice. I went on Mr. John's mansion and I decided to solds my soul to them in exchanged of fame, career and wealth. And I became popular I earned money in an instant. I bought houses and cars. I have lot's of properties. I can buy anything I want. I received right and left awards. And so much praised from the people. I have 100 million followers on Instagram and Twitter. 100 million subscribers on Youtube. Always trending world wide on twitter. I received million views on youtube everyday. I felt so special. My parents and siblings are so proud of me. Because of my successful career. People idolized me as a singer. I have lot's of Celebrity friends. I met Sammy she is also a falling angel. Once you solds your soul to the secret society they will call you falling angel. She is so obsessed to her career. She taught me how to party. She always reminds me I'm on the right path. We posted our photos together on Instagram. Our fans wants a collaborations. So we decided to compose a duet song. While composing our lyrics. Sammy shared her life story. She is from whealthy family. I asked her why she chose to sold her soul. She replied for fame only. Because before she felt abandoned. No one will appreciate her voice. And her ex boy friend said to her she will never be on the top. That is the reason why Sammy sould her soul to the secret society. Is for fame only. Our secret society released our first collaboration. And we are no.1 on I tunes world wide. 1 billion streamers on spotify in one day and 1 billion views on youtube in one day. Our fans loves our song. I asked Sammy if ever I want to get back my soul what will happens to me. She said it's very dangerous. One of my family member might be experiencing slowly dying and suffering from so much pain. I'm so scared. I can't imagine I don't want to see them suffering from that kind of pain. She asked if I have plans to get back my soul to them. I said I don't have any plans. On the following day I recieved phone calls from Migo he invites me for a dinner date. Migo is a famous actor he is so handsome and chivalry. He admitted he wants me to be his girl friend. I don't know how to respons. To be honest I'm such a fan of him. He is my ideal man. Every friday night we spent our time at the bar. Gradually I'm slowly falling in love with him. One night I decided to surrendered my body to him. He gave so much pleasure to me. It was a perfect night for me. I called it the taste of perfection. On the following day he asked me if I'm ready to marry him. I don't know what to do. Migo is not a falling angel. I said to him just give me a time to think of it. I shared to Sammy my situation regarding to Migo. She said It's a big problem. If I wants to marry him. I need to invite him to the secret society. And to convince him to sold his soul to Mr.John. But I don't want him to be part of our secret society. He don't deserves it. We continue our relationship. It was a perfect love storywithout perfect ending. I need to left him because I'm so in love to him. He is my life. But I need to save him from the fires of the black magic. He don't understand why I left him he cried infront of me. But I need to do this I said I'm not in love to him. I tasted the real perfection. I reached my dreams in an instant. Even though I'm not an angel anymore.
The End..
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Such a fun concept. Please don't take this as being nasty because I genuinely mean this as constructive but there are a few grammatical errors that would be picked up by the editor function in Word. Also felt there was a lot of telling and less showing with your words. Your structure was great and I really loved the characters and where the story took me. I'm looking forward to watching your writing grow and develop.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
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