The Timekeeper's Gift

Submitted into Contest #279 in response to: Write a story about a character who’s lost.... view prompt

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Fantasy Fiction

The town of Willoughby slept under a blanket of twilight, its streets quiet but for the occasional chime of an unseen clocktower. It was a place caught in a perpetual dusk, where shadows stretched long and the air carried the faint scent of old books and candle wax. Through these shadowed streets walked a man named William Crowe, his shoes worn thin and his purpose as faded as the name on the satchel he carried.

William had arrived on a train he couldn't remember boarding. He had been searching—always searching—but the destination was unclear, even to himself. There was a feeling in his chest, like a clock wound too tightly, ticking down to something unnamed.

The Town of Twilight

Willoughby was strange, as towns go. The buildings seemed older than they should have been, leaning slightly as if listening to secrets whispered by the wind. The people who wandered the streets—shopkeepers, schoolchildren, and men in wide-brimmed hats—moved with the unhurried grace of those who had no particular place to be.

William stopped outside a shop with a wooden sign that read, "Clocks Repaired: Time Lost, Time Found." The ticking inside was rhythmic, hypnotic. He pushed open the door, a bell jingling softly above him.

The Clockmaker

Behind the counter stood an old man with wiry hair and spectacles that seemed to catch the glow of the dim gaslight. He was tinkering with a pocket watch, a magnifying lens perched on one eye.

"Lost something, have you?" the man asked without looking up.

"Excuse me?" William replied.

The clockmaker finally raised his gaze, his eyes the color of tarnished brass. "You're lost. That's why you're here. Everyone who walks through my door is."

"I—I don't think I am," William stammered. "I was just passing by—"

"Nobody passes by Willoughby," the clockmaker interrupted. He set down the watch, folded his hands, and leaned forward. "Tell me, Mr. Crowe, what are you looking for?"

William’s heart skipped. "How do you know my name?"

The clockmaker smiled faintly. "I know a great many things. I know you’ve been searching for something—or someone—for years. I know you feel like time has slipped through your fingers, like sand from a broken hourglass. Am I wrong?"

William hesitated. "No," he admitted. "But how—?"

"Willoughby isn’t just a place, Mr. Crowe. It’s a crossroads. People like you come here when they’ve lost their way, when they’ve forgotten what it is they’re searching for. And sometimes, if they're ready, they find it."

The Offer

The clockmaker reached beneath the counter and produced a small, ornate pocket watch. Its surface was engraved with swirling constellations and the faint outline of an hourglass. He held it out.

"This is yours," the clockmaker said.

"I’ve never seen that before," William replied, but his hand moved to take it. The moment his fingers brushed the metal, he felt a jolt—a memory, sharp and vivid.

The Forgotten Memory

He was sitting on a park bench, years ago. A boy with curly hair sat beside him, clutching a wooden toy plane. His son. His son. They were laughing, sharing a moment beneath a sunlit sky. But the scene shifted—William was walking away, briefcase in hand, while the boy’s voice called after him, distant and plaintive.

"Dad! You forgot—"

And then the memory faded.

William gasped, the watch trembling in his hands. "What is this? What did you do to me?"

The clockmaker regarded him solemnly. "You’ve forgotten what matters most, Mr. Crowe. Time has a way of blurring things, doesn’t it? But this watch—it can help you. It can take you back, if you’re willing."

"Take me back?" William whispered. His heart pounded, a mixture of hope and fear. "To where? To him?"

The clockmaker nodded. "But be warned: it’s not without cost. To regain what you’ve lost, you must let go of what you’ve become."

The Choice

William stared at the watch. He could feel the weight of years pressing down on him, all the choices that had brought him to this lonely crossroads. He thought of his son’s face, now a blur in his memory, and the ache of an unspoken promise.

"What happens if I don’t?" he asked quietly.

The clockmaker tilted his head. "Then you continue as you are—a wanderer in the twilight, chasing ghosts that never were. The choice is yours."

William closed his eyes. The ticking of the clocks seemed to grow louder, filling the shop with a relentless rhythm. He felt the pull of regret, the weight of time wasted—and then, something lighter. Hope.

The Turning of the Key

William opened the watch. Inside, the hands were still. He turned the small key, winding it carefully. As the hands began to move, the world around him dissolved into golden light, the shop, the clockmaker, and the town of Willoughby fading into the glow.

The Gift of Time

The golden light enveloped William as the world dissolved, the ticking of the watch blending with the pounding of his heart. He felt weightless, suspended in a river of light and shadow, as memories long buried surfaced like fragile blossoms. Laughter, sunlight, the warmth of small hands clutching his own—it all came rushing back. And then, as suddenly as it began, the light receded.

William found himself in a room, dimly lit, its walls lined with clocks of every shape and size. Unlike the clockmaker’s shop, these clocks didn’t tick in unison. Each seemed to chime to its own rhythm, creating a symphony of time itself. At the center of the room stood the clockmaker, but he was different now—taller, younger, and radiating an ethereal glow.

“This is the In-Between,” the clockmaker explained, his voice resonating like a bell. “Time’s threshold. Here, the threads of your life converge. Before you step forward, you must confront what you’ve left behind.”

Before William could reply, the air shimmered, and a figure stepped into view: his son, older now, with eyes so familiar they made William’s chest tighten. The boy—no, the young man—regarded him with a mix of longing and sadness.

“Dad,” he said softly. “You’ve been gone so long. Why?”

“I was lost,” William whispered, tears blurring his vision. “Lost in work, in regret, in everything but you.”

His son smiled faintly. “It’s not too late. But you must let go of the past to truly come back.”

The clockmaker handed William a small key, different from the one that wound the watch. “This key will unlock the path you choose, William. But only one door can open.”

William turned toward two doors that had materialized—a weathered one marked Regret and another, bright and inviting, marked Hope. His hand trembled as he reached for the keyhole.

As the door swung open, light poured through, warm and forgiving. On the other side, his son’s laughter echoed, vibrant and full of life.

Epilogue

In a park bathed in sunlight, a man sat on a bench, watching a boy with curly hair fly a wooden plane. The man smiled, tears glistening in his eyes as the boy ran to him.

"Dad," the boy said breathlessly, holding out the plane, "you forgot this."

William Crowe took the plane, his hands steady, his heart full.

"I won’t forget again," he promised.

And somewhere, in a place caught between moments, the clockmaker smiled.

December 07, 2024 00:05

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