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Contemporary Fantasy

In the ghostly, early light of dawn, Bo Winters stood by his father’s river, a place he had long avoided. The wide stretch of water twisted through the mountains and vanished into the forest, carrying secrets he had tried to leave behind. He stared into the dark current, every ripple a taunting shimmer of memory. The last time he’d stood here, he was a boy, small and shielded, clinging to his father's rough hand, each tug of the current a quiet threat. Now, he returned as a man, uncertain of the safety he could claim without that guiding hand.

For years after his father’s death, he had felt the old man’s presence fading, like mist burning off in the sun, slipping through his fingers despite every effort to hold on. It was the memory of the river itself, its quiet, sinister pull, that had clung to him, binding him with threads of something unspoken. In dreams, he saw his father’s silhouette against the water, speaking words Bo could never quite catch. He’d wake with a sharp sense of a debt unpaid, a legacy he didn’t understand but felt burdened to honor. And so, after his father’s passing, he found himself compelled here — not by duty, but by a gnawing need for answers he hadn’t realized he’d been carrying.

Around him, the forest stood in its indifferent silence, the trees like old, disapproving witnesses to his arrival. As dawn broke, the shadows began to peel away, leaving Bo exposed, vulnerable in a place that felt both familiar and alien. His father had loved this river, almost obsessively, but he had never explained why. To Bo, it seemed more like an adversary than a companion. “Treat it with respect,” his father had warned, his voice grave. “This water has no mercy.”

Bo had never understood that reverence. As a boy, he’d resented the river for how it consumed his father’s attention, pulling him away from the small moments they might have shared. He’d hated the way his father’s eyes grew distant when they were near its edge, as if he were listening to a voice only he could hear. Now, standing alone on the bank, Bo felt a chill rise, the same combination of awe and unease that had lingered in his father’s gaze.

He had come without a clear purpose. There was no family home to sort through, no estate to manage. His father had owned little beyond his presence and his secrets. But still, Bo felt bound by a silent promise — an urge to understand what his father had seen in this place, to confront the river that had always loomed larger than he could explain.

Kneeling, he trailed his fingers through the water’s cold surface, the chill biting into his skin like a warning. He couldn’t say what had drawn him here, not exactly. But he felt his father’s ghost here, not in some sentimental sense, but like a shadow hidden in the water’s depths, waiting. He could almost hear his father’s voice murmuring his name. He was driven by duty, yes — but also by a yearning to know the man who had loved him, yet kept him at a distance, as if fearing that whatever bound him to this river might pass on to his son.

A flicker of movement caught his eye, startling him from his thoughts. Across the river stood a woman, her pale face framed by dark hair that spilled over her shoulders like a veil. She was out of place here, almost luminous in the early dawn. She watched him, her gaze steady and unblinking, her presence too intentional to ignore.

Bo raised a hand in uncertain greeting. The woman nodded but didn’t move closer, studying him with a strange intensity. Her gaze was piercing, carrying a weight of knowledge he could feel pressing against him, silent but powerful.

Without thinking, he called out, “Do you know my father?”

The woman tilted her head, her voice soft yet clear, as if carried by the river’s flow itself. “You’re Bo Winters. Yes, I know you.” Her tone held an age that was unnerving, as if she had been waiting for him longer than he could imagine.

A prickling unease settled over him, but he felt anchored in her gaze, unable to turn away. “Who are you?” he asked, voice rough with the mix of fear and curiosity that had been festering within him since he’d arrived.

“I’m part of this place,” she replied calmly. “Part of him.” She glanced at the river, and Bo felt as if the water rippled with meaning only she could see. “And part of you, too.”

The weight of her words struck him. He hadn’t come to pay respects; he had come seeking answers — for himself and for the legacy his father had left, the one he had feared to pass down. His father’s silence had always haunted him, but the woman’s words echoed in that emptiness, filling it with a chilling clarity. His father had protected him, yes — but from what?

“Why would he be afraid for me?” he asked, his voice catching. Memories of his father rose unbidden, sharper than they’d been in years. He recalled his father’s dark eyes, wary, his cautionary words whispered in a voice that trembled ever so slightly when they were near this river. Those warnings had sounded cryptic then, but now, they felt too real.

The woman’s gaze softened, but she didn’t answer directly. Instead, she rose, her movement as smooth as water over rock, and gestured for him to follow. Compelled, Bo waded into the river, the cold swallowing him, tugging at his clothes, dragging him deeper with each step. His father’s warnings echoed in his mind, urging him to turn back, but he pressed forward, the questions in his heart louder than the fear.

When he reached the opposite bank, she took his hand, her touch warmer than he expected. Together, they walked through the forest in silence until they reached a clearing. There, half-buried in ivy, stood an ancient altar, weathered and forgotten.

“What is this?” he whispered, though he sensed that the answer would unravel the thread he’d been clinging to.

“It’s what your father hoped you’d never find,” she replied, her voice filled with a sorrow that sent a shiver through him. “He fought his own call to this place, Bo. For years. But he feared, more than anything, that it would reach you too.”

Understanding dawned in Bo’s mind, heavy and unwelcome. His father’s love, his silence, his distance — they had been walls he’d built around his son, barriers against a fate he could never fully escape. Bo felt an ache, the weight of a love he’d misjudged, a sacrifice that had left them both alone. The river, he realized, was not his enemy; it was his father’s final guardian, the silent witness to a life spent keeping Bo free.

“What does it mean if I answer it?” he asked, knowing already that he stood at a crossroad.

“You become part of the river,” she said, her voice carrying the river’s ancient song. “Its soul merges with yours. It binds you here, forever.”

Bo felt the pull in his chest, deep and relentless, the lure of the river that had haunted his dreams. He imagined his father, standing here countless times, resisting the call, turning back for Bo’s sake. A fierce pride rose within him, tempered by grief.

As he turned away, he felt the woman’s gaze on him, her approval like a blessing. He glanced back, only to find her gone. The river’s whisper reached him, a soft murmur of love and loss. He would return someday, he knew — but only to honor the man who had given everything to set him free.

October 26, 2024 14:41

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Mary Bendickson
20:49 Oct 26, 2024

Good one answering the difficult prompt to a tee.

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Rebecca Lewis
14:23 Oct 27, 2024

Thank you very much. It took a little bit for me to get the feelings that Bo has for his father right. But I am happy with how it came out. 😊

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