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Creative Nonfiction Drama High School

Too friends where getting ready to have a slumber party with a couple of people , when they noticed that they didn't have any good movies to watch someone texted them saying that they were going to be there in like a hour, one of the friends looked surprised because she could've sworn that she had a good movie to watch the other one looked disorganized because everything was going great until that one moment neither knew what they were going to do it was too late too go to the store but they realized that there was a library near by so they grabbed the library card and rushed out of the house and started to walk to library it was only a half a mile walk but they swore it was longer, they eventually got to the library they took a minute and sat down then they wen't inside they started in the kids section just to cheek to see if there was anything good to watch they couldn't find anything so they wen't to the third floor they looked around and still couldn't find anything so they when't to the second floor and looked around, they both grabbed some books they wanted and then they wen't to the movies they looked up and down the movies they found a couple of things but they weren't going to be able to watch them all, so they started whispering trying to figure out what to watch when all of a sudden a voice turned around and shushed them they were surprised because they didn't think that they were talking very load but they lowered there voices even quieter anyway, when all of a sudden he shushed them again they barely could hear each other there was no way this guy could hear theme but so they when't even quieter not really being able to hear each other one word came out of there mouth when he walked over to them this is the moment that they noticed it was a librarian, he walked over to them and yelled at them telling them that he shouldn't be able to hear them even though there was no was of him being able to hear them it just wasn't possible so they grabbed too movies and they went to go scan out, the guy scanned them out and when he when't to go scan the card it wasn't going through they noticed that there was no way possible they were getting a movie knowing that the guest would be showing up any minute and they still had to walk back to the house, so they just left and walked home luckily one of the guest brought a movie so they ended up having something to watch and they had a good night after that they played games they watched movies the too people told the everyone else what happened and they seemed surprised and confused too they never wanted to see that guy again but the next time they go they would make sure that they had other people with them so that they wouldn't have to be worried about much because they have more witnesses . The next time they when't to the library they brought more people with them but he wasn't there, but when the boy and the other girl left he showed up , the girl was with the guys brother and of coarse he started yelling at us the boy that was with the girl stood up and started yelling back iv never seen anything like this she didn't know what to do if she should not get involved or if she should get involved she didn't know what to do so she kinda just sat and watched the guy she was with got kicked out not soon after she left the library because she didn't want to deal with the guy who was yelling at her and all of her friends all because they were whispering to this day she doesn't understand why he yelled at her and her friends there teens there suppose to have a good time there supposed to be living out there high school life with only school being frustrating there not supposed to have to worry about weird guys at the library yelling at them at the library especially not in the teen space, yes of coarse there are people who they have to watch out for but they weren't thous people they don't get drunk our smoke our throw giant party's there just trying to live the best life they can without being trouble makers, anyway they haven't seen the guy since but that also because they kinda stopped hanging out a that library they switched to hanging at malls,parks,and more of coarse they still do fun stuff together this was like 3 years ago and everyone has changed but there still best friends and they will never stop being best friends they will be 90 and still doing things together all of them know it and if they don't well they will eventually.even if you do get yelled at our whatever always remember you have friends with you and that person can't bring you down only you can bring yourself down by believing it our by letting it get to you always remember you are always your own person and know one can take that away from you know matter what they say or do you are you, she turns to me and tells me how it still bugs her and how he maid her feel bad about herself and i say the same thing to her she doesn't believe it right know but she will believe it one day i promise her that i will make her feel better even if one of are friends are going through a difficult time we will all believe it one day.And always take care of yourself first by listening to music relaxing in a bath our drinking tea or something just do something for you.

April 26, 2021 22:46

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Isabella McAdam
15:18 Jun 17, 2021

I know there are still mistakes i was trying to get the idea on the paper i forgot to go back and fix it

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Luis Medina
16:37 May 05, 2021

Nice message in the story but your spelling and grammar definitely need some work. Why not use the Grammarly function that Reedsy has? It'll help you fix mostly everything.

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Thanissha Tasaso
02:40 May 04, 2021

Love the idea of this story! However, it was so hard to read due to the grammar and the formatting being incorrect. I also think that the wording could’ve been better, but the plot and story was nice, and fits the prompt! I like the detail put into everything, but the grammar and formatting needs work.

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