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Fantasy

By the time they came for her, Maria had already decided- she would not die beneath the mountain.

The prophecy had been clear. The Oracle, an old woman with milky eyes and the voice of dried leaves, had spoken it before all the gathered villagers.

"On the night the moon bleeds, the mountain will call its daughter home."

And there was no doubt who the daughter was. Maria, born beneath the shadow of the great peak, marked from birth by the gods with hair the color of storm clouds. The village elders bowed their heads in resignation, whispering that fate had spoken. It was done.

But Maria did not believe in fate.

So when the moon rose red and swollen, and the earth trembled beneath her feet, she did not wait for the village guards to come for her. She ran.

She had spent months preparing for this. A hidden pack of supplies in the old mill, boots worn soft by hours of silent practice. She had mapped the safest paths through the forest, the hidden caves where she could rest unseen. And most importantly, she had memorized the stories of those who had tried before her.

None had ever returned.

That did not mean they had all died.

The Flight

Maria fled into the night, her breath coming in ragged gasps as the mountain howled behind her. It was not just the shifting earth — it was something deeper, something alive.

The villagers believed the mountain was a god. A god that demanded blood.

She did not look back.

Through the twisted roots and whispering trees, she ran. When she stumbled, she forced herself forward. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something metallic, something wrong.

The river was her first obstacle. It carved through the land like a scar, cold and deep, swollen by the spring thaw. She had prepared for this, tying a length of rope to the rocks on the bank and crossing hand over hand.

Halfway across, the rope snapped.

For a terrifying moment, she was weightless — then she hit the water.

The current grabbed her, twisting her limbs, dragging her down. The world blurred into darkness and ice. She fought, kicking, clawing at the water, lungs screaming.

Then hands.

Not human hands — cold, impossibly strong, closing around her wrists and pulling her up.

She broke the surface, gasping, coughing, and found herself staring into the empty eye sockets of a corpse.

A dozen figures stood waist-deep in the river, waterlogged bodies swaying in the current. Their faces were pale, lips blue, eyes hollow. But they did not let go.

"Come home, daughter."

Their voices were one. Many mouths speaking in unison. The mountain’s voice.

She screamed, wrenching herself free. Their fingers tore at her, but she fought, kicking off their grasp, thrashing to the far bank. She dragged herself onto the shore, coughing up river water, and forced herself to run.

The dead did not follow.

But the mountain did.

The Descent

Maria did not sleep.

She ran until her body ached, then forced herself to keep moving. The forest thinned, turning to open plains where the sky stretched vast and endless. She should have felt safe.

She did not.

The moon still burned red overhead, staining the land in blood. The ground trembled beneath her.

Fate was a cruel thing. It did not like to be denied.

She reached the old road before dawn. It was little more than a cracked path of ancient stone, overgrown with weeds, but it led away from the mountain. Away from home.

For the first time, she allowed herself to hope.

She was nearly to the ridge when the sky split open.

A deafening roar filled the air, and the earth buckled. She was thrown to the ground as the mountain screamed. A great fissure tore through the land, swallowing trees, cracking the road like glass.

From the depths of the earth, something rose.

It was not human.

It had no face, only a shifting mass of stone and shadow, its form shaped by the will of the mountain. It was vast, ancient, wrong.

"Come home, daughter," it whispered, though it had no mouth.

Maria scrambled back, but there was nowhere left to run. The road had crumbled. The land had fractured. The sky itself seemed to press down upon her.

She had spent her life believing she could outrun fate. But fate was patient. Fate was relentless.

Fate had found her.

The creature reached for her, its form shifting like molten rock.

And she understood.

The mountain did not want her blood. It wanted her to return. To take her place within it, to become part of something older, something endless.

But Maria was not ready to become a story whispered in the dark.

With the last of her strength, she lunged — not away, but forward.

Into the heart of the thing that had come for her.

Into the darkness.

The Reckoning

Pain.

Then nothing.

Then—

Maria opened her eyes.

She stood at the peak of the mountain. The village lay far below, untouched, sleeping beneath the crimson moon.

She was not dead.

But she was not the same.

The mountain no longer rumbled beneath her feet. The voices no longer whispered.

She had not escaped her fate.

She had become it.

As she looked down upon the world, she understood the weight of the sky. The weight of eternity.

The mountain no longer needed to call its daughter home.

She was already there.

The Silence Between Heartbeats

Maria stood at the summit, her breath slow, measured. She was alive, but her body no longer felt entirely her own. The mountain had taken something from her — or perhaps it had given something in return.

The wind howled through the crags, carrying voices she had once feared. Now, she could hear them clearly. They were not cries of hunger, nor demands for sacrifice.

They were waiting.

She turned her hands over, expecting to see them changed, but they looked the same — calloused from years of work, scarred from her escape. Yet beneath her skin, something new thrummed, something ancient.

The mountain had claimed her.

But it had not consumed her.

Maria took a slow step forward, testing the ground beneath her. It was solid. She had expected the summit to be barren, yet there was life here — twisted trees with silver leaves, pools of water that shimmered under the red moon.

And then she saw it.

At the edge of the peak, a stone figure knelt in silent reverence. It was shaped like a woman, frozen mid-prayer, her face tilted toward the heavens. Time had worn away the details, but Maria knew.

This was not the first daughter the mountain had called home.

She circled the statue, her pulse steady. How many had stood where she stood now, believing they had escaped, only to find themselves bound to the will of something greater?

The stories of those who had fled before her came rushing back. None had returned. But perhaps that was because returning was never an option.

Perhaps they had all reached this place.

Perhaps they had all faced the same choice she now faced.

Maria pressed her fingers against the stone woman's shoulder. It was warm. Not cold like death, not lifeless like the river's drowned dead.

The mountain was not a god. It was a keeper.

A keeper of those who had tried to defy it.

A keeper of those who had failed.

And yet, she was still standing.

The Choice

She turned away from the statue and faced the horizon.

Below, the village slumbered, unaware of what had transpired. She could go back. She could descend, walk through the gates, return to the life she had fought so hard to keep.

But something deep within her whispered that she would never truly return.

She had crossed the threshold of something beyond mortal understanding.

She was part of the mountain now.

Maria clenched her fists, the weight of her choice pressing upon her.

She could stay. Give in. Become another silent figure among the stone, forgotten by time, lost to history.

Or—

She could take the power the mountain had unwillingly given her and break the cycle.

The Oracle’s prophecy had never said she would die beneath the mountain. Only that it would call her home.

But home was something one could leave.

Her breath came faster. Was it possible? Could she do what none before her had done?

She turned her gaze skyward.

The moon was still red, but beyond it, the stars remained. They had always been there, above the weight of fate, beyond the reach of prophecy.

Maria had spent her whole life running from destiny.

Now, she would shape it.

She took a step forward, away from the stone woman, away from the mountain’s call.

The ground trembled beneath her, as if in protest.

She did not stop.

For the first time, fate was hers to command.

February 28, 2025 14:50

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