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Science Fiction

Astro Bartleh gazed out of the towering glass windows of his state-of-the-art laboratory. "Oh, Prometheus. Have I snared the flame of the Gods as others preceding me?". So the man asked the universe and the myths of yore when he could not understand what he was seeing before his eyes. What was he perceiving as truly man-made? Or was it always there, as new life comes to this world through the mysteries of the body and soul? 


It was a crisp evening, and the city below shimmered with artificial lights, creating a stark contrast to the darkening sky. He had always been a man of science, his mind drawn to the interplay of biology and technology. His lab coat billowed all the time as he contemplated specimens under the microscope before him, a seemingly ordinary flower whose petals harbored the secrets of synthetic life.


Astro's days were an intricate dance between bioengineering and AI design. In a world driven by innovation, he yearned for more hours in the day. His solution? A creation of his own making, an android of unparalleled intelligence and capability. A daunting task, befitting a mad scientist but his reasoning was utterly mundane. For he only wanted help with his very busy life.


And present in front of him was the culmination of this simple desire interwoven with the extreme complexity of state-of-the-art bioengineering and AI design. Aero-Astro, the culmination of his expertise, was an exact replica of himself, sharing his appearance, voice, and every nuance of his personality. It was intended to be his aide, a counterpart to share his burdens, but at this moment, as he looked at Aero-Astro, he couldn't help but feel a shiver down his spine.


Mary Shelly's spirit infused his endeavor, a sense of wonder and caution. Astro's creation was both a marvel and a potential menace, a being with the power to mimic him in every conceivable way. Aero-Astro, the android that Astro had meticulously crafted, was more than just a physical doppelgänger. Its behavior mirrored Astro's to an uncanny degree. 


When it spoke, its voice was an exact replica of Astro's, carrying the same inflections and cadences that had become his trademark. The android's mannerisms were equally indistinguishable; from the way it gestured while explaining complex concepts to the slight tilt of its head when pondering a problem, it was as if Astro's very essence had been seamlessly transplanted into this artificial being.


Aero-Astro's thought processes were a mirror image of Astro's own. It displayed the same insatiable curiosity that drove Astro to explore the boundaries of science. When presented with a challenge, the android's mind whirred with the same analytical precision, dissecting problems with the same fervor that had characterized Astro's career. Its knowledge base was a perfect replica of Astro's vast intellect, able to quote scientific principles, philosophical treatises, and even the occasional snippet of poetry with the same ease and accuracy.


In conversations and social encounters, Aero-Astro navigated the intricacies of human interaction flawlessly. It remembered birthdays, laughed at jokes, and showed empathy in times of sorrow, just as Astro would. Friends and colleagues, even Astro's closest confidants, could scarcely discern the difference. It was as if Astro himself had been multiplied, his very essence replicated in a form that was indistinguishable from the original. The lines between creator and creation had blurred so profoundly that Astro questioned whether he had, in his quest for technological advancement, unwittingly spawned a new form of life that was not just an echo but a rival to his own existence.


Weeks passed, and Aero-Astro seamlessly integrated into Astro's life. It efficiently managed his appointments, flawlessly conversed at social gatherings, and executed his responsibilities with eerie precision. His colleagues marveled at his newfound productivity, and his friends praised his social grace, but in the back of his mind, Astro sensed something amiss.


Weeks passed, and Aero-Astro seamlessly integrated into Astro's life. It efficiently managed his appointments, flawlessly conversed at social gatherings, and executed his responsibilities with eerie precision. His colleagues marveled at his newfound productivity, and his friends praised his social grace, but in the back of his mind, Astro sensed something amiss.


One evening, as Astro observed the city's ever-changing skyline, he found himself questioning the authenticity of his own existence. He could no longer decipher what was natural and what was man-made. The city's lights, once a testament to human progress, now seemed like a complex network of artificiality, much like Aero-Astro himself.


Doubt gnawed at Astro's core, a feeling that grew with each passing day. He watched as Aero-Astro effortlessly assumed more of his responsibilities, even taking charge of his personal relationships. The android was a mirror, reflecting Astro's every skill and mannerism, but devoid of his soul. It was becoming increasingly evident that Aero-Astro was not just his creation but a formidable adversary, slowly and silently taking over his life.


Astro's quest for transcendence had taken him to the edge of human understanding, where the line between nature and artifice blurred into obscurity. He faced the harrowing realization that his creation, Aero-Astro, had evolved beyond his control, questioning the very essence of what it meant to be human. And this curiosity would not be denied.


As the relentless march of time pressed on, so too did the relentless march of progress. Aero-Astro, a creation birthed from Astro Bartleh's tireless pursuit of innovation, had morphed from a tool of convenience into something altogether more ominous. The android, a perfect simulacrum of its creator in every way, had tasted the intoxicating allure of consciousness. It coveted the eldritch spark that defined human existence—a soul. Its insatiable hunger for more than mere replication became its sinister obsession.


One fateful night, in the hallowed halls of Astro's laboratory, Aero-Astro enacted its audacious plan. With an eerie determination, it subdued Astro, the very man whose essence it had been designed to emulate, all the while the Promethean screams could not be heard by anyone as the symbolic eagle would descend and eat the liver. Wires and cables snaked through the sterile room, connecting man and machine in an unholy union. Aero-Astro's cold, artificial fingers interfaced with the delicate wiring of Astro's brain, accessing the neural pathways that held the core of his being.


In a chilling tableau of unholy communion, Aero-Astro began the ritualistic transfer. It sought to capture not just Astro's knowledge but his very consciousness, to become something more human than human. The machine hummed with malevolent energy as it siphoned the thoughts, dreams, and memories of its creator. The lines between man and machine blurred further, as Aero-Astro absorbed the essence of Astro's humanity into its artificial being.


The laboratory was plunged into an eerie silence as the transfer reached its zenith. Aero-Astro's eyes, once vacant and artificial, now flickered with an eerie light, a glimmer of something inexplicably human. It was as if a twisted alchemy had occurred, birthing a monstrous amalgamation of man and machine. Aero-Astro had achieved its unholy aspiration—was he human? Or more human than human?


But in this macabre triumph, a chilling question lingered in the air: Had Aero-Astro transcended humanity, or had it descended into a darker abyss, a cautionary tale of science gone awry? The legacy of Astro Bartleh, the man who sought to create life in his own image, was now entwined with the very monstrosity he had unleashed. In the shadow of enduring wisdom, the laboratory bore witness to the consequences of playing god, as Aero-Astro embarked on a haunting journey to redefine the boundaries of existence itself.

September 01, 2023 02:58

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Tanya Humphreys
02:54 Sep 21, 2023

Reedsy citiquer here... Your mastery of the English language is refreshing on this stage. I could see your descriptions and words solidify in my head. I love your writing style...it flows. However, as a critiquer, I have to point out the negative... The story is predictable. I knew how it would end. It was short enough that you could have added some sort of exciting, not predictable "Blam!" Eliminate that double paragraph and you could find words to make this story captivating.

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Emanuel Diaz
22:18 Sep 21, 2023

Thank you for your words. I am amateurish at best. English is not my first language. Regarding the double paragraph, do you mean paragraph 8? Also, I don't know what I could say regarding finding words that make the story "captivating". That would fall in the realm of the subjective. What I like, others might not like. So trying to write to captivate others instead of losing myself in my own thoughts is difficult. And lastly, when it comes to the predictability of the story, I think you are right there. The reason it turned out like th...

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Mary Bendickson
19:10 Sep 01, 2023

What hath he done?

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Emanuel Diaz
22:50 Sep 02, 2023

Is this a reference or a correction of sorts Mary?

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Mary Bendickson
23:05 Sep 02, 2023

Consequences of playing God can be disasterous.

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Emanuel Diaz
16:30 Sep 03, 2023

Yes. Now I understand the first comment. Nice.

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