In The World Of Shadows

Written in response to: Set your story in a town disconnected from the rest of the world. ... view prompt

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Science Fiction

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October 12, 2021 12:13

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47 comments

22:50 Oct 19, 2021

Send your poem on your blog to Abi. It's amazing and she needs to hear it :) ACTUALLY Put it on the doc so EVERYONE can see it :)

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Dhwani Jain
03:45 Oct 20, 2021

Okay...Which poem?

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19:20 Oct 20, 2021

The latest one :)

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Dhwani Jain
03:08 Oct 21, 2021

Take another chance?

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18:43 Oct 21, 2021

Yes! It's amazing.

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Dhwani Jain
13:27 Oct 22, 2021

Okay!

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Super interesting story; I regret not reading it sooner! The fact that the shadows could apply to a human was an interesting take on it. I also noticed that you changed up your main character a bit so that was nice! Super coolio story overall :D I hope you’re doing alright btw <3

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Dhwani Jain
06:00 Oct 16, 2021

Thanks a lot, Flow! 1. You should regret it! ;) 2. Yeah.... 3. How so? I am doing as well as I can. What about you?

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:D np! Yeah lol Well, mostly you have the main character be a girl so a guy was a nice difference. I mean, being a shadow was also a cool change. Doing alright. I hope your bio doesn’t suggest that you’re leaving… right? I mean, breaks are good, but just leaving like that? Not so good.

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Dhwani Jain
05:52 Oct 17, 2021

=D Yeah, I thought so too, about the MC Great to hear that! Why aren't you as 'active' on Skribbls as you are on Reedsy? Nope, I just wanted a fresh start for the bio...

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:) cause, I feel like Reedsy is better honestly- phew! good to hear, cause I'd really miss you if you were to leave :)

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Dhwani Jain
02:57 Oct 18, 2021

Okay.... XD!

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Philia S
06:23 Oct 15, 2021

Wow. I'm stupified by this story, honestly, I loved it! Although the time lapses in between disoriented me a bit cause of a lil lack of details, I loved the idea and the way you portrayed it! Are you thinking of doing a sequel or sum? Cause I'd absolutely love that! And your bootifool bio- TvT

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Dhwani Jain
12:55 Oct 15, 2021

Thanks Philia! I got this idea while laying on the bed at night. Maybe not. (for the sequel) I love my NEAT and CLEAN bio too! XD

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Philia S
15:47 Oct 15, 2021

Lol, nice! Sedness :( (for the sequel XD) XDD I MEANT WHAT HAPPENED TO IT-

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01:31 Oct 14, 2021

Dhwani! What happened to your BIOOOOOOOOOO?!!!!!!!!

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Dhwani Jain
06:42 Oct 14, 2021

Sienna! I just wanted to go 'back to basics' for a while Trying to lay low and see the reactions of others, I honestly kinda don't 'want' to publish any more stories here rn, 'cause no body cares about them.........

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02:02 Oct 15, 2021

DHWANI NO WE LOVE YOUR STORIES! OK?! I know a bunch of people are busy with school now, and I'm on holidays. I've been working on a novel, and have slight block, so I'm not online much :)

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02:03 Oct 15, 2021

But, I do get it. Everyone is so stressed lately, and the mood on Skribbls is kinda down. Though, it's been MUCH better!

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Dhwani Jain
04:41 Oct 15, 2021

I don't think so....I think the MOOD is affecting me too

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Dhwani Jain
04:41 Oct 15, 2021

Yeah....

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