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Fantasy Fiction

Sylber saw the shape of a whisper, rippling out across endless disjointed space, and it drew him to fixation.


He was sitting, now, days later, searching in his way staying perfectly still. The passage of time seemed suspended as he delved into the intricate patterns of the starlit tapestry adorning the ceiling above him. Erudite symbols intertwined, capturing the essence of all that had ever been seen. Each symbol was a gateway to knowledge, a testament to the countless explorations undertaken by the scholars of the Athalial League. The living network of nodes, each representing a real space, hummed with an energy that echoed the pulsing threads akin to the trails of comets. It was more than a mere map; it was a visual symphony, a testament to the ceaseless pursuit of understanding the mystical demiplanes that sprawled across the prime material. With an unwavering gaze, he continued his search, navigating the cosmic intricacies of the Atlas Dome with a sense of sharpened purpose. Each flicker of starlight held the promise of a revelation, a glimpse into the uncharted realms that beckoned him to unravel their mysteries.


“To the request of guildfellow Sylber Huekrib,” the voice of an archivist, even toned and disembodied by prestidigitation, rolled out through the hall, “refocusing on the known cluster Illiara.”


The ceilings display washed over into a single solid wall of illumination, before allowing blank space back in to reform a clear picture of a subsection of the former map. The sudden shift in the room's ambience drew the attention of the scholars, prompting them to pause in their activities and exchange curious glances. Some of the more seasoned researchers, familiar with the quirks of the Atlas Dome, sighed in mild frustration, recognizing another routine recalibration. All around, scholars exchanged speculative whispers, wondering if this recalibration held any significance beyond the usual adjustments.


“Oy, Sylber.” A voice, leaning over from behind, whispered. It was one he knew well enough, Jolien’s. They had come up together through the Commission of Discernment, before she fell fully under the sway of Reach ideology and switched tracts onto the Commission of Naturalization. “What’s the deal? Illiara’s a dead zone, tread back and forth. Why pull the focus?”


“I’m not sure, yet.” Sylber thumbed his quill, eyes still locked up to the ceiling. “There were some readings coming off of a waystation out there, anomalies in the aether. Something incongruous.”


“Well fuck, Syl,” Jolien let out a snort, “Illiara’s got the highest concentration of wild magic zones anywhere on the lattice, it might as well be nothing but anomalies. If your goal is to carve any gen coming out of that clusterfuck into a reasonable shape you’ll be whittling your whole career.”


“This is different.” Sylber said simply, fingers tracking over paper notes he had brought with him.


“Oh, sorry, my mistake,” Jolien spoke a little bit too loudly to be anything other than mocking, “This is different everybody. Raise the banners. I thought the whole dome was being held up from actual research on a lark, but this, this is different.”


“What’s your problem, Jolien?” Sylber’s brow furrowed, peeved.


“My problem is that Illiara is a waste of your talent. It’s been on the board for two centuries, and in that time how much has it gotten the League? Barely anything. We’ve walked the length and breadth of it, but it’s so fraught that nobody wants to settle there. It’s worthless.” She paused long enough to slug down the dregs of her tea. “Why not focus that beautiful big brain of yours on something wholly new, something nobody’s ever touched before?”


“That’s not how this works. That’s not it at all.” Sylber’s posture remained still as he explained, “We’re here to explore, to discover. To learn. I am, at least. And you don’t get to learn something from nothing. There have to be reference points. New knowledge comes when you think on the spaces between where we are sure.”


And just at that moment, the quantities fell into place.


“Spaces between.” Sylber mumbled to himself.


“What was that?” Jolien asked, again too loudly.


“Look, there and there.” Sylber pointed up towards two parallel streams of planar links, flattened from circular to a subtle oval in their constituent map. “I read those planes as Elohnih and the Sylva of the Three Takes. Is that right?”


“What? Yeah, that’s what it says there. What about them?” Jolien leaned over the back of the chair further.


“Look at these metrics.” Sylber held up the scrawled parchment for Jolien to examine. “From the waystation on Elohnih. The tensile undulation in its perpendicular connecting leylines, the way it modulates as a fixed point against the centrifugal rotation that that cycle it’s a part of should be exhibiting. Three Takes does the exact same thing, equal but opposite. That shouldn’t happen, unless-”


“Unless there was a leyline between the two of them that wasn’t listed on the map.” Jolien finished the thought, glibness giving way to dawning understanding.


“Exactly.” Sylber’s words tumbled over each other excitedly, “There’s a gap between them, one that we didn’t know to fill until something started making noise inside of it. And I’d stake my heart on the guess that it’s not just a leyline between them, I think there’s a whole new demiplane. Otherwise where in all hells would the disturbance be coming from in the first place?”


The two sat a moment, staring up at the empty space between the two blinking dots meant to symbolize entire worlds.


Sylber stood suddenly, a flurry of movement as he began collecting the papers that had worked him up to this revelatory thought. “I’m going. I’ll have provost Grejyre post a contract, she's out in that direction last I heard, and I’ll take it myself. I think you should come to.”


A beat passed, and Sylber cracked a knowing smile. “Who knows what we’ll find, now that we’ve found it.”

January 05, 2024 17:43

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Amanda Zambrano
13:38 Jan 18, 2024

I think this short story (or perhaps part of a story?) has a significant amount of promise. You have some interesting world-building and a great premise that sets up the possibility of a really intriguing longer work. There's a vibrancy and passion here that is evident - you love your work, and that allows others to love it, too. As a part of the Critique Circle program, I'll be bold enough to make two comments and a (hopefully) helpful suggestion: - Strive to avoid complex or challenging vocabulary simply for the sake of using it. This isn...

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Morgan Aloia
14:16 Jan 18, 2024

Thanks for the feedback, it is well appreciated! Definitely not a cop-out, out loud readings prior to editing was something that has helped me in the past but I've fallen out of practice with in recent times, so something to come back to! Heard on the points about the diction used, I'll work to level it out to something with a more internally consistent flow going forwards.

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B. D. Bradshaw
14:30 Jan 13, 2024

This is fantastic! In a very short piece, you've constructed a vibrant, detailed setting that immediately communicates an extensive history, industry and culture. You feel excited for the characters - experiencing the joy of discovery and potential alongside them. I can only wonder what comes next for them? What will they find? What will the consequences of discovering an entirely new demiplane entail? It comes across to me as reminiscent of Treasure Planet and Exandria Unlimited: Calamity. More of this, please!

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Morgan Aloia
17:36 Jan 13, 2024

Gods above, I loved Calamity! Anyways haha, thanks for the lovely comment. This was a very fun one to write, for exactly the same reason you describe: the characters are excited, so I'm excited for them. This piece was actually written as a sort of soft prequel to another of mine, I'll put up a link (https://theetraanthology.com/category/aetherdrawn/) if you're interested in reading more! The website here is all stories that I've written into the same setting, so feel free to poke around if you wanna see more.

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B. D. Bradshaw
18:03 Jan 13, 2024

Great - I'll have a look!

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