Submitted to: Contest #292

The Portrait of Silence

Written in response to: "Center your story around a mysterious painting."

Mystery Suspense Thriller

Clara was thirty-five when she inherited the crumbling countryside estate of Château des Ombres, a legacy from a great-aunt she barely remembered.

The news arrived like an omen, slicing through the fog of her post-heartbreak haze, offering an escape from the echoes of a life she no longer wished to inhabit.

The estate was a relic of another time, its walls cloaked in dust and draped with faded, peeling wallpapers.

But amid the fading grandeur, one thing stood out: a painting in the dining room, unnervingly lifelike, depicting a woman in 17th-century attire. A woman who looked eerily like Clara herself.

Dark eyes, too knowing. A face both foreign and familiar.

She reached out without thinking, tracing her fingers over the delicate oil strokes. A chill seeped into her skin. She had never been the type to have doppelgängers or be mistaken for someone else.

Yet, as she stared at the unsettling realism of the portrait, she wondered: was her face simply ordinary, or disturbingly unique?

At first, she dismissed the unease. She attributed the odd sensations—the dizziness, the lightheaded drift she felt in the dining room—to exhaustion or stress. The house was ancient, creaking with history, and her rational mind clung to explanations.

But as weeks passed, the feeling intensified. The air in that room thickened, her unease grew stronger every time she walked by the portrait. The painting seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking—a flicker in the eyes, a whisper of movement in the curls of painted hair. And at night, as she started hearing murmurs in the darkness—indecipherable and persistent—she began to fear that she was truly losing her mind.

She sought answers, but the staff who had served her great-aunt Seraphina knew little. The painting had always been there, an intrinsic part of the house.

Frustrated, Clara turned to Seraphina's belongings, rummaging through drawers and cupboards until she found an old leather-bound notebook buried in a wooden chest.

She flipped through brittle pages filled with lists and recipes until a single entry stopped her cold:

"She waits in the canvas. She watches."

That night, a storm raged. Rain lashed against the windows, and the wind howled through the halls. Sleep was impossible. The words from Seraphina's notebook burned behind her eyes.

Before she knew it, she was standing before the painting, breathless, pulse hammering.

She reached out, fingers trembling, and scratched at the surface.

The paint peeled away in thin layers, revealing another portrait beneath.

The same elaborate clothing, the same pose—but the face was different. A stranger’s.

She could swear the figure in the painting smiled—briefly, impossibly. The grin was too wide, stretching just beyond the limits of the face, too sudden, as if it had flickered into existence rather than emerged naturally. A grotesque mimicry of human expression.

She blinked rapidly, her breath catching, as though clearing her vision might erase the horror. When she looked again, the smile was gone.

A wave of nausea hit her. Staggering back, she felt a weakness grip her limbs.

Panic drove her to action. At dawn, she reached out to an art historian she found online.

**

Dr. Theodore Valce arrived at Château des Ombres two days later. He was a man of careful precision, his salt-and-pepper hair constantly pushed back as if keeping stray thoughts in place. His initial response to her frantic message had been one of polite disinterest—until he saw the attached image.

He recognized the woman at once. Isabella de Loria.

By morning, he was at Château des Ombres, his presence sharp against the house’s faded grandeur.

"This is Alessandro di Rossi's work," he murmured, eyes narrowing in fascination. "An original. But… this isn’t possible."

"What isn’t possible?" Clara's voice was taut.

He turned to her with a tense expression. "Isabella was the only daughter of a powerful aristocratic family from Southern Europe. She was painted by nearly all the great artists of her time. She was around fourteen when she first posed for a portrait and vanished at age twenty-two. No one knows exactly what happened to her, though there are many tales."

"But here...," he continued. "She looks older. Much older."

Clara led him to the torn fragments of the topmost layer, revealing the face that had been painted over. "She looked a lot like… me," she whispered, he words feeling absurd even as she spoke them. Her voice wavered, caught between disbelief and a creeping certainty she wished she could ignore.

Dr. Valce exhaled sharply. "The painting was altered. But why? And by whom?"

As they dug into history, the truth unfurled like a nightmare.

The tale of Isabella’s disappearance had long been attributed to a commoner’s obsession—a man who had watched her from the shadows, consumed by an infatuation that festered into madness.

When she refused his advances, he took her. She was hidden away, tortured, broken. Then, she vanished.

"Her body was never found," Dr. Valce said, running a hand through his hair. "But if this painting was done later—if di Rossi painted her again, aged, changed—then…" He hesitated.

"Then he must have known what became of her," Clara finished.

Days of relentless research followed. They sifted through forgotten archives, scoured letters written in fading ink, and pieced together fragments of records long buried in the estate’s library.

Dr. Valce reached out to colleagues, historians, and experts in restoration. It was in an obscure 17th-century art treatise that they found mention of a certain di Rossi portrait—one never exhibited, one whispered about in hushed tones, rumored to hold something more than just pigment and canvas.

There was never a commoner lurking in the shadows. The story had been a fabrication, a convenient myth. In truth, Di Rossi had never been commissioned to paint Isabella. He had offered his services for free, captivated by the chance to immortalize such a remarkable face—an unusual gesture for an artist of his stature.

His fascination began as artistic admiration—but soon, it twisted into something else. He became obsessed, haunted by her beauty, unable to capture it to his satisfaction.

When Isabella sat for him, the proximity consumed him. He had to be near her. He had to possess her.

She was never seen again.

Several years later, Isabella succumbed to the horrors she endured in Di Rossi’s grip. Unable to let her go, he took her blood and mixed it with his red paint, binding her essence to the canvas. He had painted her into permanence, attempting to capture what was left of her before it faded completely.

The painting had fed on those who gazed too long, who felt its pull. A cycle of replacement, over and over.

Clara felt the truth settle deep in her bones.

Dr. Valce turned to her, something dark flickering in his gaze. "We must destroy it."

They worked beneath the shroud of midnight, the flickering firelight casting restless shadows against the walls. The painting resisted, its surface trembling as if something within fought desperately to hold on.

Flames licked at the edges, hesitating, as if repelled. Then, with a sudden burst, the fire consumed the canvas, curling the centuries-old paint into ash. A wave of energy rippled through the room—dense, suffocating. And then, a scream—high, raw, inhuman—tore through the air, reverberating through the walls before fading into an eerie silence.

Silence.

A faint shimmer lingered in the air, barely perceptible, as if resisting the finality of destruction. For a fleeting moment, Clara thought she saw the embers pulse. Not with fire, but with something else she couldn't explain.

The house exhaled. The weight pressing against Clara’s chest lifted. When the last ember died, only ash remained.

**

Leah and Dave arrived early at Château des Ombres, barely containing their excitement at finally purchasing their dream home.

By the time the real estate agent arrived and began unlocking the heavy front doors, they had already taken in the surrounding land, giddy with possibility.

They had heard about the disappearance of the previous owner—a woman named Clara. The house had been unoccupied since.

Eagerly, they explored the dim hallways, the grand staircase, the candlelit chandeliers. Then, in the dining room, they stopped.

There, above the fireplace, hung an old portrait. A woman in 17th-century attire, hands folded neatly in her lap. Her eyes were dark and deep, her expression impossibly lifelike.

Leah frowned, tilting her head. Something about the portrait unsettled her—not fear, but familiarity.

A strange tug in her gut, a whisper of recognition just beyond reach. 'That’s strange… she looks a bit like—"

She stopped, heart hammering.

How exquisite. The woman in the painting did look a lot like Leah, they both agreed.

And for the briefest moment, she swore she saw the lips part—forming a sudden unnatural smile.

Behind them, the door clicked shut.

Posted Mar 07, 2025
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Abhishek Todmal
11:15 May 01, 2025

Good gosh - the undertones depict of the gothic found in some well-known tales of that literary-canon. Be it the ominous sense of foreboding found in 'Rebecca', or the eerie unsettlement prevalent in 'The Woman in Black'. Very well-written, if I may say so, Marina. How did the idea come to you? Do you read much in the genre?

With my very best wishes, and I look forward to reading more of you.

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Bethany Stanford
15:54 Mar 14, 2025

Amazing story, I could actually feel my heart pounding while I read it. The imagery and descriptive language is remarkable, it feels very poetic.

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