Submitted to: Contest #316

The Mask of the Midnight Racer

Written in response to: "Include the word “hero,” “mask,” or “truth" in your story’s title."

Adventure Fiction

The first time Jordan Reyes heard the roar, he thought it was thunder.

It was close to midnight, and he was locking up his father’s auto shop on the edge of the industrial district. The streetlamps flickered over cracked pavement, graffiti-tagged warehouses, and the rusting skeleton of an old freight depot.

Then the sound came again - not thunder, but a symphony of engines, the kind that vibrates in your ribs and makes your teeth buzz. It grew louder, until a blur of color and chrome shot past at impossible speed. One car, then another, then five more, each low-slung and growling, their exhausts spitting fire.

Jordan froze. He’d heard rumors about the Midnight Circuit - illegal races held when the city slept, in places the police rarely patrolled. The racers all wore masks to hide their identities, some elaborate and theatrical, others simple and utilitarian. But one name came up again and again in whispered conversations at the shop: The Silver Comet.

The Comet wasn’t just fast. The drivers were untouchable. Every challenger, no matter how skilled, ended up chasing their taillights. No one knew who they were. No one had ever seen them without the signature silver masks shaped like the front end of a classic Jaguar, with narrow eye slits that gleamed in the dark.

Jordan’s father used to say legends are just people with better PR. But the Silver Comet? They felt like something else entirely.

The Invitation

Two weeks later, Jordan found a flyer taped to the side door of the shop - a playing card, the Ace of Spades, with a single phrase scrawled in silver ink:

Midnight. Pier 12. Come ready.

He stared at it for a long time. He didn’t even own a proper race car - just his beat-up ʼ93 Nissan 240SX, stripped down for drifting events at the track. But curiosity gnawed at him. He had to see it for himself.

That night, the pier was alive with noise and light. The smell of burning rubber hung heavy in the air, and floodlights from parked semis cast harsh shadows over rows of modified imports, muscle cars, and exotics. The crowd pressed close to the starting line, a sea of hoodies and leather jackets.

Then the racers emerged. Every one of them wore a mask. Jordan saw a fox-faced driver leaning against a neon-green Skyline, a skull-masked racer revving a matte-black Charger, and -

There.

The Silver Comet.

Their car was a work of art: a vintage Datsun 280Z, silver paint shimmering like mercury under the lights. The body was clean, the stance aggressive, the engine note tuned to perfection - a low, confident purr that sent shivers down Jordan’s spine.

The Challenge

Jordan wasn’t sure what possessed him to step forward. Maybe it was the way the Comet drivers looked straight at him from behind that mask they wore, like they already knew him. Maybe it was the Ace of Spades still burning a hole in his pocket.

“I want in,” he said.

A tall man with a wolf mask laughed. “You? In that?” He pointed at Jordan’s 240SX like it was a rusty bicycle.

“I can hold my own.”

The Comet tilted their heads, then gestured to the wolf-masked man. “Let him run,” they said, their voices muffled but smooth.

The crowd roared.

The Race

The course ran through the deserted dockyards, looping around warehouses, weaving between shipping containers, and spilling onto the cracked asphalt of an abandoned highway ramp. Three laps. No rules.

Engines screamed as the flag dropped. Jordan’s tires bit hard, his 240SX surging forward. The Comet slipped ahead immediately, their lines impossibly precise, hugging the curves like the car was part of the road.

Jordan fought to keep up. He pushed his Nissan to the edge, brakes glowing, turbo whining, every gear change a desperate gamble. He clipped the rear bumper of the wolf-masked man’s car and spun him out on a hairpin, the crowd’s distant cheers echoing in his helmet.

But the Comet was still ahead. Always ahead.

On the final lap, Jordan caught a break — a narrow straight where he could sling past if he timed the shift perfectly. He dropped into fourth, the tach needle redlining, the world narrowing to the glint of silver just ahead.

Then the Comet glanced back at him. A single, calm look.

They downshifted, the Datsun’s rear sliding out in a flawless drift, cutting him off so cleanly it felt like choreography. By the time Jordan recovered, the race was over.

The Truth

Afterward, Jordan expected gloating, maybe even mockery. Instead, the Comet approached him, pulling off their gloves.

“You drive like someone who’s got nothing to lose,” they said.

“I’ve got plenty to lose,” Jordan replied. “But I guess I wanted to see if the stories were real.”

The Comet studied him for a long moment. Then they reached up and unlatched the mask.

Jordan’s breath caught. It wasn’t some anonymous street legend. It was Alicia Vega — the mechanic who used to work for his father, who’d vanished after a bad crash five years ago. She’d taught him half of what he knew about cars.

“You disappeared,” he said.

“They said I wasn’t fit to race anymore,” Alicia replied. “Doctors. Sponsors. Even your old man. So I built my own circuit. Here, the only truth that matters is what happens on the asphalt.”

Jordan looked at her, really looked, and understood. The mask wasn’t just for hiding. It was for freedom.

The Legacy

A week later, Jordan returned to the pier — not as a spectator, but as a racer. His Nissan was rebuilt, tuned within an inch of its life, wearing a new coat of deep midnight blue. And a mask.

The Comet was there, as always, waiting at the line.

This time, Jordan didn’t care if he won. The real victory was knowing why the mask mattered — not to hide from the world, but to race without its judgment.

When the flag dropped, two engines screamed in unison, silver and midnight disappearing into the dark, chasing not glory, but the truth only speed can tell.

Posted Aug 19, 2025
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