Submitted to: Contest #309

The Time-Loop Stranger

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the line “Do I know you?” or “Have we met before?”"

Adventure Science Fiction

Chapter One: 3:07 PM

The espresso machine hissed like an angry cat. Alice wiped flecks of steamed milk from the counter, her eyes drifting to the clock above the pastry case—3:06 PM. Right on cue, Mrs. Penny shuffled in, ordering her usual: a decaf latte with a "scrape of foam, dear, not a dollop." Alice complied, her hands moving on autopilot. She’d been working at Grindstone Café for two years, three months, and fourteen days. Not that she was counting.

At 3:07 PM, the bell above the door chimed.

Alice didn’t look up at first. Thursdays meant the after-yoga crowd, all Lululemon and coconut water. But when the customer reached the counter, the air prickled.

"Um… do I know you?"

The voice was frayed, like a wire about to snap. Alice glanced up. The woman—Zooey—looked out of place in the café’s warm, cinnamon-scented haze. Her leather jacket was scuffed, her dark curls tangled, and her eyes darted around the room as if tracking ghosts.

Alice forced a smile. "Not unless you’ve got an opinion on oat milk."

Zooey didn’t laugh. She leaned closer, her knuckles whitening on the counter. "No, I—I’ve seen you. Before. Where?"

"Here, probably. I work most weekdays." Alice nudged a menu toward her. "Can I get you something?"

Zooey stared at the laminated sheet. For a heartbeat, her expression crumpled—lost, almost childlike—before she straightened. "Black coffee. To go."

As Alice poured the brew, she noticed Zooey’s hands trembling. When she passed over the cup, their fingers brushed. Zooey flinched, sloshing coffee onto a napkin.

"Shit. Sorry. I’m…" She trailed off, crumpling the napkin into her pocket. "Thanks."

The bell chimed again as Zooey hurried out. Alice frowned. On the counter, a stray drop of coffee had bloomed into a shape: a triangle crossed out by a diagonal line. She wiped it away.

The Next Day

At 3:07 PM, Zooey returned.

Same jacket. Same hollow stare. Same question, sharper this time: "Do I know you?"

Alice froze. She’d dreamed about this—the exact tilt of Zooey’s chin, the smudge of eyeliner beneath her left eye. Déjà vu pooled in her gut

"Just coffee again?" Alice asked, too brightly.

Zooey’s laugh was jagged. "You don’t remember either, do you? None of you ever do."

"Remember what?"

But Zooey was already turning, knocking into a chair. The napkin fell from her pocket again, the same symbol inked in smudged blue pen. Alice pocketed it.

After closing, she rewound the security footage. Her blood cooled.

There was Zooey, blurry and flickering, at the counter. But when Alice paused the tape, the timestamp read 3:07 PM… and the seat Zooey had bumped into was empty. No chair moved. No coffee spilled.

Day Three

At 3:07 PM, Alice’s palms were slick. She’d Googled the symbol all night. Nothing. Not a corporate logo, not an emoji. Just a gnawing sense it meant danger.

Zooey stormed in, wild-eyed. "Do I know you?" she demanded, slamming her hands on the counter. "Think. Please."

Alice’s pulse thrummed. "I don’t—"

Zooey grabbed her wrist. "You have to help me. I can’t keep—"

The café’s clocks chimed.

Ding.

Alice blinked. The coffee machine stopped mid-hiss. Mrs. Penny froze mid-sip, latte foam clinging to her lip.

Zooey’s grip tightened. "Oh god. You’re here now."

"Here where?"

But Zooey was fading, her edges dissolving into the air like smoke. The clocks snapped back to 3:07 PM.

The café buzzed back to life.

"—extra foam, dear," Mrs. Penny finished.

Alice stared at the empty space where Zooey had stood. In her apron pocket, the crumpled napkin burned like a secret.

Chapter Two: The Groundhog Hour

Alice count the tiles on the ceiling. Seventeen. Again.

She’d woken up this morning—or what passed for morning now—to the same radio jingle, the same lukewarm shower, the same chipped mug of tea. The same day.

At 3:07 PM, Zooey walked in.

This time, Alice was ready.

“You’re looping too,” Zooey said, breathless. She looked older somehow, shadows bruising her eyes. “Finally. I’ve been alone for—”

“Thirty-seven iterations,” Alice interrupted. She slapped her notebook on the counter, filled with timestamps, sketches of the symbol, and equations she didn’t remember writing. “I’ve tracked every reset. The loop lasts 53 minutes. We’re stuck in this café, and you”—she pointed at Zooey—“are the only variable that changes.”

Zooey blinked. “You… took notes?”

“You didn’t?”

“I tried. Everything resets.” Zooey pulled a handful of napkins from her pocket, all blank except one. DAY 19, it read, in shaky script.

Alice’s throat tightened. “How long have you really been here?”

Zooey didn’t answer. She grabbed Alice’s arm and dragged her toward the door. “Let’s test your theories.”

Experiment #1: Escape

The exit was locked. Not just locked—sealed. The glass warped under Alice’s palms, humming like a live wire.

“Told you,” Zooey muttered. “It’s a cage.”

“Then why the hell am I here? You’re the one who—”

“Started this?” Zooey’s laugh curdled. “You think I wanted to relive the same hour, watching everyone I…” She trailed off, staring at Mrs. Penny, frozen mid-sip at Table 3. “They’re not real. Not anymore.”

Alice followed her gaze. Mrs. Penny’s latte foam hovered mid-drip, defying gravity. “They’re paused. Not gone.”

“Same difference.”

Experiment #2: Destruction

Alice hurled a chair at the window. It bounced off, leaving no crack.

Zooey snorted. “Cute. I tried a fire axe once. Wanna see?”

She yanked open the supply closet. Inside: a pristine axe, labeled EMERGENCY USE ONLY.

“Where did that—?”

“It resets. Watch.” Zooey swung the axe at a table. Wood splintered. Coffee cups exploded.

At 3:08 PM, the clocks chimed.

Ding.

The café reassembled itself—shattered porcelain flying backward, splinters knitting into wood. The axe reappeared in the closet.

“Neat, right?” Zooey smiled.

Experiment #3: The Basement

Alice tripped over the loose floorboard near the espresso machine—the one she’d meant to fix for months. Beneath it: a rusted hatch.

“You never mentioned this!” she said, prying it open.

Zooey peered into the darkness. “It wasn’t here before. Things… shift. Sometimes.”

The stairs creaked. The air smelled of ozone and burnt hair. At the bottom, a steel door barred their path, emblazoned with the symbol.Alice traced it. “This is an equation. Entangled particles. I studied this before I—”

“Before you quit?” Zooey’s voice hardened. “Yeah. I know.”

“How?”

“You told me. In Loop 12.”

Alice stiffened. “But I… I haven’t lived that yet.”

Zooey turned away. “You will.”

Experiment #4: Trust

Back upstairs, Alice flipped through her notebook. “Parallel universes. That’s what this symbol means. If we’re entangled across timelines—”

“Don’t.” Zooey gripped her shoulders. “Don’t theorize. Just help me end this.”

“Why? Because you’re tired? Because you’ve given up?” Alice shoved her off. “You dragged me into this. Now I’m supposed to—”

The lights flickered.

A customer at Table 5 glitched—their face pixelating, their body splitting into double exposures.

Zooey paled. “It’s getting worse.”

“What happens if the loop breaks?”

“Nothing good.” Zooey pressed the crumpled napkin into Alice’s hand. DAY 19 now read DAY 1. “Time’s unraveling. And I think… I think it’s because of you.”

3:07 PM

The clocks reset.

Alice woke at the counter, Zooey’s voice ringing in her ears: “Because of you.”

In her apron pocket, two napkins now: one with the symbol, one with DAY 1.

And a new addition—a key, cold and heavy, stamped with the symbol.

Chapter Three: Schrödinger’s Lab

The key weighed more each loop.

Alice clutched it under the counter, its edges biting her palm. Zooey hadn’t mentioned it. Didn’t even glance at the hatch. She’s hiding something.

At 3:07 PM, Alice slammed the key onto the counter. “Where did this come from?”

Zooey froze. “You weren’t supposed to find that yet.”

“Yet?” Alice stepped closer. “How many loops have you actually done?”

“Does it matter?”

“You said Day 19. Now it’s Day 1. Time’s rewinding for you. Why?”

Zooey stared at the key. “Because you’re here. You’re… changing things.”

“We’re finding that lab.

The Basement

The key fit.

The steel door groaned open, revealing a cavernous room. Dust particles swam in shafts of sickly green light. Tables lay overturned, scorch marks scarring the walls. At the center stood a machine—a tangled mass of wires and cracked glass panels, its surface etched with the symbol.

“This is impossible,” Alice whispered. “I’ve worked here for years. This room didn’t exist.”

“It did.” Zooey brushed ash from a dented nameplate on the wall: Z. Carter, Temporal Physics Lab. “Just not in your timeline.”

Alice’s breath hitched. “Your last name. It’s…”

“Yours. I know.”

The Video Log

They found a monitor buried under debris. Zooey hesitated, then pressed PLAY.

Static resolved into a figure in a lab coat—Zooey, her hair neatly braided, smiling at the camera.

“Log 42: The Carter-Wu Bridge is stable!” Screen-Zooey gestured at the machine buzzing behind her. “We’ve successfully entangled particles across timelines. Next step: observational overlap. If this works, we could…”

The screen glitched. When it cleared, Screen-Zooey was gaunt, frantic.

“It’s collapsing. The bridge merged our worlds. My timeline is dying. If you’re watching this, you’re the other Alice. You have to—”

The recording cut off.

Real-Zooey killed the power. “Enough.”

Alice gripped her arm. “Other Alice? What does that mean?”

Zooey whirled, eyes blazing. “It means you did this! You gave up. Quit physics after the accident. But I kept going. I built the machine. And when my timeline started to die, I… I tried to jump here. To your life.”

Alice staggered. The accident—the lab fire, her partner’s scream as the ceiling caved—flashed in her mind. “You’re me. A version of me who stayed.”

“And now we’re both paying for it.”

The Glitch

The café shuddered.

Back upstairs, half the customers were frozen. The other half flickered between two forms—a businessman became a ballerina, a barista melted into a child. The walls bled static.

Zooey gripped the counter. “The bridge is failing. Two timelines can’t occupy the same space. One of us has to…”

“No.” Alice’s voice broke. “We’ll fix the machine. Start it over.”

“You don’t get it. I’ve tried. Hundreds of times.” Zooey yanked open the machine’s control panel, revealing a hollow core. “It needs a quantum battery. Something that exists in both timelines. But the only thing we share is…”

She looked at Alice.

“No,” Alice whispered.

“Us. Our memories. Our soul, or whatever.” Zooey pulled a jagged cable from the machine. “One of us becomes the battery. The other gets to live.”

3:07 PM

Alice woke screaming.

Zooey stood over her, cable in hand. “I’m sorry.”

“Wait—”

Zooey plunged the cable into her own chest.

Light erupted. The café dissolved. Alice’s last sight: Zooey mouthing “Do I know you?” as she shattered into stardust.

Reset

Alice lunged for the hatch. Empty. No lab. No machine.

But on the counter lay two items:

1. The key, now rusted.

2. A photo of two girls in lab coats—Alice and Zooey, arms slung over each other’s shoulders.

On the back, a note: Find me.

Chapter Four: Echoes in Static

Alice clutched the rusted key and faded photo, the café’s hum a distant murmur. The note’s words—Find me—scorched her mind. She traced the photo’s edge, the two lab-coated figures smiling, oblivious to their fracture.

The Glitching Regular

Mrs. Penny’s latte froze mid-pour, her face pixelating into a stranger’s—a sharp-featured woman in a 1940s hat. She blinked at Alice. “You’re her, aren’t you? The one Zooey warned about.”

Alice leaned in. “You know Zooey? Where is she?”

The woman’s form shuddered. “In the cracks. But be quick, dear. The void’s hungry.” She dissolved, leaving a tarot card on the counter: The Twins, one figure fading to smoke.

The Key and the Clock

At 3:07 PM, Alice jammed the key into the café’s antique wall clock. Gears ground. The face split open, revealing a tunnel of mirrors reflecting endless Alices—some in lab coats, some ash-streaked, all whispering: You left her.

“Guilt won’t save her,” Alice snapped, shattering a mirror with the key. Glass bled silver liquid, pooling into a portal.

The Burned Lab

She fell into a charred ruin—Zooey’s timeline. The lab’s walls were scorched, machines melted. A journal lay open on a desk, entries devolving into frantic scribbles:

Day 107: The bridge holds, but Alice refuses to listen. She’s too afraid.

Day 113: I’ll jump to her timeline. Make her remember.

A shadow stirred. Alice turned.

The Ghost in the Machine

Zooey flickered like a damaged hologram, half-transparent. “You found the photo.”

“Why didn’t you tell me we worked together?” Alice demanded.

“You erased it. When you quit after the fire, you buried us.” Zooey’s form glitched, revealing burns beneath her jacket. “I died in that accident. In your timeline, I’m just… a ghost.”

Alice recoiled. “But you’re here—”

“Because you’re here. My anchor.” Zooey pressed a hand to Alice’s chest. “Your guilt sustains me. And it’s killing us both.”

The Choice

The void seeped into the lab, swallowing walls. Zooey frayed at the edges. “End this. Delete your timeline’s machine. I’ll fade, but you’ll live.”

“No.” Alice gripped her shoulders. “We’re fixing both.”

She slammed the rusted key into Zooey’s machine. Sparks flew. The portal reopened, dragging them into—

3:07 PM

—the café. Both cafés.

Two realities overlapped: hers, warm and whole; Zooey’s, cracked and smoldering. Customers existed in both, screaming as their doubled bodies collided.

Zooey materialized, solid. “What did you do?”

“Linked the machines.” Alice brandished the key, now glowing. “We’re the battery. Together.”

Chapter 5: The Only Way Out

The café howled.

Patrons writhed, their bodies fused—Mrs. Penny’s face melted into the 1940s stranger’s, a child’s arm sprouting from a businessman’s shoulder. The walls flickered between burnt and pristine, and the air tasted of ash and cinnamon.

A figure stepped through the chaos: a woman in a silver suit, her face obscured by a shifting visor. The time warden.

“Unauthorized timeline merger detected,” she droned, raising a device that hummed like a dying star. “Pruning protocol initiated.”

The Last Equation

Alice gripped Zooey’s hand, their shared burns glowing beneath tangled fingers. “The symbol, Zooey—the answer’s in the symbol.”

Zooey stared at the symbol key, now searing their palms. “Entanglement. But how?”

“Not entanglement.” Alice pressed the key to the photo of their parallel selves. “Connection. The triangle is stability. The slash is the bridge.” She laughed, wild and raw. “We’re not a battery. We’re the equation.”

The warden’s device flared. “Terminating anomalies.”

The Choice

Zooey met Alice’s gaze. “If we merge, we’ll never be us again.”

“We already aren’t.” Alice nodded at their conjoined hands, veins threaded with light. “But they’ll live.”

The warden fired.

Alice and Zooey slammed the key into the floor.

3:07 PM

Light tore through the café.

The timelines fused—burned walls healed with golden scars, glitched patrons softened into hybrids at peace. The warden’s scream faded into static.

Alice and Zooey stood at the counter, their reflections a single silhouette.

“Did it work?” Zooey asked, her voice layered with Alice’s.

A customer approached—a man with mismatched eyes, humming a song from both timelines. “Do I know you?” he asked, curious, not desperate.

The figure that was both Alice and Zooey smiled. “No. But you will.”

Epilogue: The Grindstone

The café thrived, a haven for those who didn’t quite fit: a ballerina with a briefcase, a physicist who doodled equations on napkins.

On the bulletin board, a photo of two women hung beside a rusted key and the symbol.

New patrons pointed. “Who are they?”

The barista, their scars glowing faintly, slid over a latte. “The ones who rewrote the rules.”

Outside, the clock chimed 3:07 PM.

Somewhere, in the space between ticks, two voices whispered:

“Do I know you?”

“Always.”

Posted Jun 28, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
02:11 Jul 01, 2025

Loopty-loop!

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