Nonna's legacy

Written in response to: Set your story in a post office.... view prompt

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Fantasy Fiction Historical Fiction

In the heart of the bustling town of Cerignola, Puglia, nestled between the fragrant aroma of freshly baked bread and the lively chatter of locals, stood a quaint post office by the Piazza Duomo. Its red-brick walls exuded an air of permanence, as if time had woven itself into the very fibers of its existence.


Inside the building, the atmosphere was a sense of anticipation, with people waiting to send their thoughts and feelings across the expanse of paper and ink. The hum of conversations mingled with the satisfying thud of stamps meeting paper, creating a symphony of connection. The postmaster, with his well-worn vest and thin-rimmed spectacles, orchestrated this harmony, his hands moving with a practiced grace as he tends to each customer. Behind him, a vintage clock kept time with a gentle tick, reminiscent of the pace of life in this corner of the world. In this haven of written words and parcels, the present, past, and future find common ground, and as Isabella stepped through its doors, she unknowingly became part of the post office's living tapestry.


As she patiently stood in line, she kept clutching a letter close to her heart. Her curls were of copper color, and her eyes carried a glimmer of worry, for the letter was intended for her dear grandmother who had been sick. Sick for a really long time, but she was still alive against the odds that her doctors believed.


Isabella's childhood memories were painted with the vibrant hues of her grandmother's stories. On warm summer evenings, they would sit beneath the ancient olive tree in their garden, its gnarled branches swaying like feathers. Nonna's voice, a melody of passion and nostalgia, would weave tales of brave knights and mischievous fairies, painting vivid landscapes that danced in Isabella's imagination. The flicker of fireflies seemed to synchronize with Nonna's animated gestures as if even the creatures of the night were captivated by the magic of her words. Those stories were the tapestry that bound their family together. Through journalism, Isabella found a way to honor her grandmother's legacy by becoming a modern-day bard, sharing truths and tales that echoed with the same magic that had enchanted her own childhood.


Just beyond the lace curtains and glass windows of the post office, the sun cast a warm glow on the cobbled streets, but Isabella's heart felt heavy with concern.


As she approached the counter, the postmaster, Signore Rossi, greeted her with a genial smile. He stood with a gentle stoop, his silver hair neatly combed, and round spectacles perched on his nose.


"Buon pomeriggio, Isabella! Sending a letter to your grandmother, I see?"


Isabella nodded, her fingers tracing the envelope's edges. "Yes, Signore Rossi. Nonna has been unwell, and I wanted to send her some words of comfort."


Signore Rossi's eyes softened; his years of experience have taught him the unspoken languages of empathy. "I'm sure your words will bring her solace, my dear. Our post has a way of delivering more than just ink on paper."


With a reassuring pat on Isabella's hand, he took the letter and affixed the necessary stamps. Just as he handed it back, a curious glint sparkled in his eyes. "You know, Isabella, this post office has a history of its own. Some say that if you stand by that window and close your eyes, you might catch a whisper of the past."


Isabella's interest was piqued, and a small smile tugged at her lips. "The past, Signore Rossi?"


He winked. "Try it, my dear. It might just be the magic you need."


With her heart full of curiosity, Isabella moved toward the window and gazed outside. She closed her eyes, allowing her senses to absorb the world around her—the murmur of conversations, the distant laughter, and the rustling leaves. Time seemed to pause for an instant, and in that moment, she felt a gentle tug, like a brush of cool air against her skin.


When she opened her eyes, she found herself standing in a different place, a village she had not seen before. It had something familiar yet different in the air. Cobblestone streets wound through rows of charming cottages, and colorful market stalls displayed wares that seemed to belong to a different era. Isabella's heart raced as she realized that she had stepped into a world from the past.


Intrigued and excited, Isabella explored the village, chatting with villagers dressed in attire from a bygone era. She discovered a jovial baker who shared tales of recipes passed down through generations, a mischievous child who insisted on showing her the "most popular" games, and a wise old woman who spoke of the healing power of stories.


As the sun began to set, casting a warm orange hue over the village, Isabella felt a sense of belonging that she had never experienced before. She understood that the past was not just a place of nostalgia, but a realm of lessons and laughter that could shape her present.


With a heavy heart, she approached a shimmering portal that had appeared near the village square. She knew it was time to return to her own world, her grandmother's words echoing in her mind: "Stories hold the power to bridge time and distance, my dear."


As Isabella stepped back through the portal, she found herself back in the bustling post office. The sun had not set yet there, but she sensed the familiar scent of ink and paper surrounding her. With a glimpse of the vintage clock, her eyes opened wide in the realisation that only a couple of seconds had passed.


Signore Rossi looked at her with a knowing smile. "Did you find what you were looking for, Isabella?"


She nodded, her heart brimming with gratitude. "Yes, Signore Rossi. And more."


With a cheerful wave, Isabella left the post office. The weight of worry lifted from her shoulders. She knew that her grandmother's stories had led her on an unexpected journey—one that had not only connected her to the past but had also infused her with hope for the future. As she walked down the cobbled streets, she couldn't help but chuckle at the magical secret hidden within the walls of the humble post office.


And so, Isabella continued her journey as a young journalist, carrying with her the wisdom of the past and the promise of stories yet to be told.




August 25, 2023 19:20

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Rama Shaar
05:47 Sep 01, 2023

I really enjoyed reading this. You have a beautiful way of describing settings and feelings that one feels like they're dreaming ✨️ if I may make one observation it would be that the story lacks a plot or at least a bit of tension. I think all stories need something to keep the reader guessing or hoping or feeling some kind of response.

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Belladona Vulpa
10:34 Sep 01, 2023

The dream-like vibes was the thing I was going for, so I'm glad! I saw the other day a picture of a scenery that had this fairytale/dream atmosphere and then I got the idea. It is true indeed, I didn't put too much thought or plan for this, I just sat and wrote it without having a plot on mind, you caught me😅😂 I absolutely agree, indeed it would be more interesting if it had some conflict to create more tension :) Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment!😊

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Jonathan Page
21:32 Aug 25, 2023

Great story, Belladona! Your prose is crisp and dense and has a lot of color in the corners. For instance, I love the line, "but she was still alive against the odds **that her doctors believed**." That throws in some added characterization from the way you said it. The way you paint a picture of Italy, I feel like I am there! I got some strong "Midnight in Paris" vibes with regard tot he magical realism element of stepping back to a bygone age, but thought your plot with Isabella's past with Nonna and her present/future career in journ...

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Belladona Vulpa
17:40 Aug 26, 2023

Thank you for your encouraging words! Indeed, now that you mention it I see it too- very similar vibes in that regard :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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