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Today I woke up and I realized today’s the day I get my Tesla so I drove seven hours to Detroit and went to the Tesla dealership, I looked at the kind of Tesla’s they had, I found the one that I wanted it was the Tesla cyber truck they let me test drive it so then I could know if that was the one I want and then I said “no I don’t want that one I want to Tesla model X” and when I sat down to see the phone number of the car, I said how much is the car and they said $100,000 and then I said is there any cheaper prices and they said $90,000 dollars and then I said that’s a better price I’m gonna buy it and I bought it and then when I first drove it I fell in love with it the next morning I had to go to work so then when I was on my way to work I had a flat tire on my Tesla, so then I called the tow truck and they said can I help you with something and I said yes my Tesla has a flat tire and they said I’ll be there in a bit and then I said will you bring it to the dealership so then we can see what’s in the tire and they said sure but it might explode and then I said well what happens if it explodes you’ll have to return the whole Tesla and buy a new one then I said but I don’t have enough for the new one because that other one was $90,000 dollars and then the people that worked with the tow truck they said well if you return the Tesla then you’ll get your $90,000 dollars back. So then I went back to the Tesla dealership and then I got a Tesla roadster and then it went really fast and then I took it to a drag race and it won the race and then then again I had enough for another Tesla then I bought a new Tesla, the truck and then I took it to a truck race and sure enough it won so then I got money again so then I could buy a new Tesla and then that new Tesla I actually wanted to buy instead of the Tesla I wanted by Ferrari so then I need to go another race and then I want to get in so then I got the Ferrari But the Ferrari cost $100,000 dollars and then I return some of my Tesla‘s and sure enough I had enough for that Ferrari the only testa that I didn’t return was the roadster and then I went home with my new Ferrari and then the next day I drove it to work the top speed on it was 150 mph and then I want to go buy another Ferrari so then I sold the roadster for $100,000 and then I got a different Ferrari and it went 200 million Miles per hour Took them both a race and they both won two races do you think I could win another race? With the Ferraris and then I took Both of the Ferraris and a Tesla roadster to a race The next day I retired from my work The next day I chose a new job and that new job was a Farmer they still let me take my Ferraris and my Tesla roadster to work but they didn’t let me drive them they only let me drive the big equipment and then the next year I retired again and then I work for this outdoor expansion company they had me come into the next year I retired again and then I just chose to be a construction worker In Then I went to work and Shernoff there’s a lot of big equipment so I chose to drive the dump truck the excavator and the front loader and then soon enough when we were done we had to use the road roller The next day I went to work in a job that same big equipment that day and then took some time off work to go to a race and then I went to buy another Tesla that Tesla was the Tesla model X it took off really fast and then I went to my friends house it was fun then I took my friend to a big race that big race was really loud but it was fun we even got to sit in a race car and then we had a professional racer take all my cars to race them One of my cars went really fast the other one lost a race it was really bad because it had a flat tire that’s the second flat tire that my cars have had and then all my other cars won the race for winning most of the races I got $50,000 dollars and then on my way back I couldn’t drive all my cars back so I called the tow truck to tow some back and then the tow truck lost control and it nearly crashed me and my friend had to drive each one back because it wouldn’t fit enough in that truck but then me and my friend had a great idea the idea was to race it back but then we realized we would get a ticket so then we started revving it was really fun until we got home and then soon enough my friend had to go home but then we asked my parents and my friends parents if we could have a sleepover and they said yes so then the next morning we woke up. We got right in the cars and went to a race. Then I bought a Chevy Camaro. It was 45 mph and it went really fast at the end. It was the best few days of my life!

November 06, 2020 03:01

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Claire Tennant
23:48 Nov 12, 2020

William this is definitely a bloke story and though I can feel your (or your character's) excitement I'm not excited by it I guess not being a driver stands in the way. However, that is not to say there was no tension to it. Just a suggestion. If you write something like this you need to insert paragraphs because it runs better (no pun intended) Give your reader breathing space and time to picture the description. Otherwise well done

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