A/N: This story does revolve around the topic of depression. So please, stay safe. This is more of a poem format, and I just had an idea and wanted to write it out in a way that best suited me.
I’m watching the raindrops
pound against the window
No sun insight
Covered by gray stormy clouds
It’s dark
It’s cold
A flash of light
followed by a boom
Hope for a second
Cling onto that light
But as soon as it comes
it’s gone
The sea is violent and bleak
just like my mind
The waves are my thoughts
rolling around in turmoil
Turning into tsunamis
crashing and pounding against my skull
I’ll tell them that it’s all right
That I’m fine
But every time a wave hits me
My coastline crumbles and falls into the sea
Into the churning dark abyss
that I’m precariously dangling above
And it happens
over
and over
and over
Again
and again
I’m losing my mind
And all that I’ll say
is that I’m okay
That I’m fine
But it’s all a lie
It’s starting to seem
that everything I say
is a lie nowadays
The coastline is battered
Torn apart
The black
sickly
dark waves
Eating away at me
I can feel myself
Being chipped away at from the inside
Turning into an empty vessel
and I pretend not to mind
Pretend not to notice
I just keep pretending
that everything’s fine
Keep telling everyone that I’m okay
But deep inside me
I can just barely feel
the panic bubbling in my chest
Spiraling in the wind
Like a bird
Spreading its wings
Taking flight
Because I can see what’s happening to me
I can’t feel anymore
Everything I say lacks emotion
And I can’t feel anymore
I’m hollowed out from the inside
And I’m shattered
But I can’t show it
Because I knew this would happen
Nobody seems to notice
They accept my lies
Without a second thought
And just go on with their lives
Leaving me behind
And it’s so dark
And I’m so cold
I’m so lost
I’m so alone
I’m so empty
And nobody seems to notice
Nobody seems to care
So why should I?
Every day I’m putting on a mask
Hiding behind it
Because I don’t even know
who I am anymore
I can’t remember who I am
Who I was
And all I see
Is a nobody
Somebody who doesn’t belong
I see my skinny frame
My ribs that jut out
The dark bags under my eyes
That leaves me wondering
Will I ever be enough?
I’m left to wonder
Stuck in the storm
Inside my head
That just won’t end
I’m so desperate
So imperfect
And I want so badly
to be perfect
to be flawless
To be the person
that everyone wants to see
But I’m not
I’m useless
My mind is rocky and barren
Crumbling
Self-destructing
Empty
And I hate it
I hate it all
So I run
Run to the ocean
The waves are cold and rough
Like the knife in my pocket
So I sit on the edge of the rock
Just above the waves
I draw the knife
I hold it up
And I cut
Blood drips from my arm
onto the brown rock
A wave batters me but I don’t flinch
Because I’m used to it
I look down at the rock
And the blood is gone
Into the depths of the ocean
Like it was never there
So I keep cutting
and cutting
And more blood
Drips onto the rock
Over
and
Over
Tainting it
So that no matter how many times
The ocean washes over it
It’ll always be there
Irreplaceable
Stained
and beautiful
In a dark way
I roll down my sleeves and head home
Nobody glances at me
Nobody looks twice
at my baggy hoodie
Someone yells at me
To go wash the plates
And I do it
Obediently
Because I don’t know what to do anymore
I don’t know what to expect anymore
I don’t know what I want to be anymore
Because I just don’t know anything anymore
And I’ll never give it a second thought
Because that’s the way it’s always been
Summer break is over
And I find myself not feeling any dread
or excitement
Like I used to feel
But I’m fine
I tell myself
Over and over again
That I’m fine
that this is normal
So I put on my dark hoodie
to cover-up
the red swollen cuts on my arm
And I walk
I don’t look three times before crossing the road
I don’t wave and greet everyone I see
I don’t walk on the sidewalk
like a careful person
Because I’m someone that I don’t know anymore
I get beat up
By the group of girls
that always beat me up
And for once
I don’t fight back
Because I’m done fighting back
Because I don’t know how to
They finally leave me
And I peel myself off the floor
Not feeling any pain
I’m just numb
and cold
Just like always
So I stagger to the bathroom
And slump against the stall
And just lie there
Feeling nothing
I hear the sound
of somebody
Coming in the bathroom
Their shoes
Echo against the tile
But I just sit in the stall
The door opens
My knees are hugged against my chest
as I stare
At the wall
Not caring who it is
The footsteps stop outside the stall
And someone gently pushes the door open
He has tan skin
and blonde hair
He seems perfect
In every way
The complete opposite
Of me
And I wonder
What he wants
with a loser like me
He crouched down beside me
And leaned on the wall
I can’t say I was surprised
Because I don’t know how to feel surprised anymore
But we just sit there
Drinking in the silence
But this time
It isn’t as empty
I’m not as empty
And I can feel a spark
Of emotion
It isn’t much
But to me
It’s my whole world
I get up to leave
And he follows me
We don’t talk
We just head to class
The days fly by
And life gets easier
I may have my bad days
When the seas are dark and wild
And the sun is gone
And I head back to that rock with the knife
But I also have my good days
When the seas are sparkling blue
And the sun shines brightly above me
But one day
it gets to the point
where not even the rock and the ocean can do anything for me
I can feel the spark inside of me
stutter and flicker
And so I start to wonder
Why am I still here?
Why am I still alive?
Would anyone notice if I left?
So I walk out to the rock
And stare into the depths
of the inky black water
for the hundredth time
And wonder
What it would be like
To jump into them
And just fall asleep
before I fall apart
So I relax
Thinking about the blackness
I look down at the sea
once again
And I sling my legs
over the edge of the rock
And I get ready to jump
When someone hauls me backward
Away from the edge
I scramble to get out of their grip
The rain plasters my dark black hair to my forehead
But whoever it is has an iron grip
And they lead me away
from the rock
The knife left out on the edge
The blade stained with blood
When we make it to the beach
Away from the rocks
They let go of me
And I spin around to see who it is
And it's the boy
from school
His blonde hair
plastered to his forehead
and what shocks me the most
are the tears in his eyes
They spill over his cheeks
And he asks me one question
Three words
That make me freeze
"Are you okay?"
And I go silent
And I think
Am I okay?
Was what I was going to do okay?
"No," I reply. "No- I-I'm not okay."
He nods
tears still running down his cheek
and we walk down the beach together
I look back
and I see
the ocean consuming the knife
the knife with too much blood on it
and I'm glad
and disgusted with myself
With what I've been doing
What I've become
So I look away from the rock
And focus on where I'm headed
He leads me to a lighthouse
It's battered
The white and black stripes of paint
are peeling away
But the lighthouse still stands
It stands straight and tall
A survivor against all the storms
the waves and the wind
And for a second
I want to be just like the lighthouse
But I shake that thought off
And climb after the boy
The stairs seem to be endless
they keep spiraling
on and on
until we finally reach the top
We sit down on a wooden bench
And look out the window at the rain
"I had an older sister," he says. "She was beautiful. Perfect in every way. We used to play up here all the time when I was younger."
He looks at a crayon drawing lying on the ground.
"She started acting weird. Stopped coming to play with me. She was always wearing hoodies."
He closes his eyes, tears running freely.
"One day, I found blood inside her sweater sleeves. I ran to the lighthouse."
He opens his eyes.
"She climbed to the top and broke the glass. I ran after her, but I- I wasn't fast enough."
I don't have to ask what she was doing
Because I almost did it
Oh God- I almost did it-
It hits me like a freight train
The weight of realizing
That I tried to kill myself
And that ever since summer break started
I haven't shed a single tear
Not let one emotion
leak out
And for that
I finally cry
I sob because I haven't cried in months
I haven't let anything out
I haven't told anyone anything
And what has that done for me?
I cry because someone asked me a question
About how I was feeling
And I could finally give
An honest answer
So he turns over to face me
He's crying too
We're both crying
He cups my cheek
With his hand
And he kisses me
And I kiss him back
I'm overwhelmed
I'm surprised
I'm happy
I'm sad
I'm warm
I'm excited
I'm free
I'm at peace
And I love it all.
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3 comments
This was amazing! A very creative illustration of raw emotion. I like how you've narrated the story in a poem format. Very well done!
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Thank you so much for your feedback!! It means a lot!!
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It was a pleasure to read it! :)
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