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Smell of Death

TW: True account of multiple deaths.

Plans change. I heard my best buddy, Lefty, say so as he went down on one knee (he didn't even fall!), and said something like that to pretty Miss Claire, our new friend. And, boy, have they been changing around here lately!

It started one evening as I was getting the cattle herded back to the pen when Good Ol' Simon, our neighbor next door whom we watch over and help out sometimes suffered some kind of set back. He was hurtin' bad so Lefty drove him away in our truck and left me in charge. He didn't come back 'til the next day but I knew the routine and took care of everything myself.

When he did return, instead of Simon, Lefty had this pretty little gal with him that smelled of lavender scented smoke. She had wild curly hair but spoke softly and was generous with pats on my head, skritches behind my ears and later hugs. Unfortunately, she carried a ball of fluff with her that could be extremely dangerous. Still I treated them both with kindness and welcomed them to stay.

Strange. They stayed in our house and Lefty went to the tiny house Simon had built for himself. I naturally stayed put in my own house. But I liked to hang out in the room Claire slept in instead of Lefty's room.

Wasn't long before Simon came to stay in Lefty's room. He wasn't himself for a while and Claire watched after him. I watched after Claire and kept a careful eye on that ball of fluff.

Simon became himself again and that's when Lefty announced 'plans change'. We all made a hasty trip over to the small chapel in the dell, surrounded the place with flowers, got the Reverend to say a few words while standing in front of us and presto, change-o when we went home Simon went to his tiny house and Lefty carried Claire into his room. I was left out in the hallway with the ball of fluff. We weren't sure if they were ever coming out again!

But when they did, they were both so happy we all started behaving like a big sappy, happy family. Of course, there were still all the ranch chores to do but we worked together and had fun.

Along came another change that's hard to describe. Suddenly, all the people around me seemed tense and sad. A lot of rain fell in a short amount of time. Their mood seemed to be related to that. Sure, our normal work load was more difficult in mud still the cattle were dirty but fine. We endured. But my people couldn't cheer up. No matter how much I tried to make them laugh.

Then, Lefty started packing our truck with camping gear. Oh, great idea! We always have a frolicking time hiking in the woods! I find all kinds of exciting smells to explore. I couldn't wait to jump into the front seat and get going. Come on! Come on! What's taking you so long?

Finally, Lefty climbs in. What? No Claire? No ball of fluff? Not even any Simon? From what I can understand he is leaving them behind to carry on the ranching. It's only him and me and we'll have a different kind of work to do. Bummer! Thought we were going on a camping vacation for fun and games. What does he have in mind?

“Well, Mr. Right. It's just you and me. Hope we are up to the challenge. A lot of people are suffering. It's hard to sit by and do nothing. We have to go and see if we can help. You are such a smart, hard working dog. I'm sure you can help find some of these people that got swept away in the flash flood that struck some of our neighbors in Kerrville and the surrounding area. It will be less than a two-hour drive from us here in the Hill Country of Texas. We'll camp out at night and stay for as long as they need us. Agreed? It won't be easy. It will change from search and rescue to recovery in a few days, I'm afraid. We'll have to be brave. Imagine what these families are going through. A lot of children were sleeping at their campgrounds when the water from the river rose at frightening speed and swept them away. Some people lost their homes; some lost their vehicles; some lost their lives. We need to keep them in our prayers.”

Huh? This sounds serious. I don't understand everything you're talking about, Good Buddy, but I'll follow your lead and do everything you want me to do. My ears pricked up as he was speaking and I tilted my head one way then the other to be sure I caught everything. Still he wasn't making much sense to me. He looked so sad I finally laid my muzzle on my paws and whimpered to show him sympathy.

We arrived at a place full of emergency type vehicles flashing lights, men in uniforms shouting instructions with megaphones and lots of folks gathered around some even leading other dogs. I wanted to go meet some of them but Lefty kept me tight on the leash. Somehow I realized we were here for a mission. This place was headquarters. Volunteers made food and water available. We were to check in here when we finished the day's assignment before we bedded down for the night.

The work was unlike anything I ever did. The grass and bushes were flattened and small trees stripped of their foliage. Huge piles of trash and debris were dumped along the banks of the river or against bridges. Broken boards littered the land. We were searching for something but exactly what? Seemed like a game. Hide and seek.

Other dogs were sniffing around so that's what I did, too. So many confusing smells. We looked under piles of broken boards. Inside crushed cars. In branches of downed trees.

I knew the smell of death. Had experienced it with the cattle. I found a dead squirrel. “Good Dog.” Said Lefty but he wasn't excited. We kept looking.

A German Shepherd came across a woman trapped in a car. All the searchers flocked around both her and the dog. Treated him somewhat like a hero. Oh, so that's the idea! People. Look for people. But we are surrounded by people. What kind of people?

Then I saw one floating in the water and barked to let them all know. Yes, yes! That's what they wanted. But they were all so sad. It had the smell of death on it.

This game just got very depressing but we kept at it for days. Never did find more like the lady in the car. But found more with the smell of death. Even so Lefty hugged me and said what a hero I had been through it all. I was so pleased to head back to our own safe home away from this smell of death.

After all searching was called off over 130 people were found who had died in this flood over the forth of July weekend. Almost thirty were little girls and counselors at a summer camp. One twelve-year-old survivor of that Christian camp, Skyler Derrington, rewrote the words to 'Hallelujah' and sings it on YouTube.

Posted Aug 08, 2025
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D .
19:18 Aug 08, 2025

Wow,That such an interesting story. The closing ending hits hard, Good Job!

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Mary Bendickson
02:18 Aug 09, 2025

Thank you.

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D .
23:57 Aug 11, 2025

No problem.

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Raz Shacham
15:36 Aug 08, 2025

This is such a heartbreaking story, all the more so because it's based on real events. Mr. Right’s innocence and his attempts to understand the “game” only deepen the sorrow as the grim reality unfolds. Things do change constantly, and so few of them are within our control. Beautifully told.

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Mary Bendickson
16:23 Aug 08, 2025

Thank you so much.

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Jo Freitag
21:20 Aug 17, 2025

Beautifully told, Mary!

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Martha Kowalski
19:05 Aug 15, 2025

Thank you for this powerful piece in their memory, Mary.

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Mary Bendickson
22:40 Aug 15, 2025

Thank you and thanks for liking 'Loopty-Loop'.

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Elizabeth Hoban
23:34 Aug 13, 2025

You are such a gifted storyteller! The way you use words set such a tone for all your stories. This is very sad, again, mainly because it really happened but telling from the eyes of the dog makes it somehow hopeful - you will get me every time with a dog story like this. I never underestimate what a dog is capable of understanding, and honestly, after reading this I will always wonder what my dog is thinking. Thank you for this poignant story. Well-done!

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Mary Bendickson
23:44 Aug 13, 2025

Thank you😊🐕‍🦺

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Rebecca Detti
15:38 Aug 12, 2025

This is so sensitively told and I was so upset to hear about this tragic loss of life. I’m going to look for the YouTube video now.

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Mary Bendickson
16:13 Aug 12, 2025

Thank you.

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Rebecca Detti
17:00 Aug 26, 2025

Hi Mary how are you? I’m sorry to contact you like this but had received some sad news and wanted to let you know if you hadn’t. Trudy has passed away. I’m so sorry but thought you’d want to know, Rebecca

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Mary Bendickson
21:46 Aug 26, 2025

Oh, no! I hadn't heard. Thanks for letting me know. She had such a gift. And was a wonderful friend on this site. I'll miss her talent and advice. I do hope she knew her Savior.

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Rebecca Detti
10:45 Aug 27, 2025

Of course Mary, so so sad and she did indeed have such a gift. Trudy is in my prayers. Hope all is well with you. Rebecca

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Mary Bendickson
12:46 Aug 27, 2025

And also with you.
All my usual aches and pains but generally fine,here.

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Helen A Howard
09:58 Aug 11, 2025

The dog’s voice rings true. Where would we be without them? Well done.

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Mary Bendickson
12:19 Aug 11, 2025

Thank you.😊

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Rebecca Lewis
17:44 Aug 10, 2025

First off — this is a strong piece. It’s moving, it’s vivid, and it hits the heart. Telling it through the dog’s eyes is a great choice. It keeps things warm and personal, even when you’re talking about something heavy. You let the sad parts land without making it too graphic, which is not easy to pull off. The dog’s voice is spot-on — loyal, curious, a little innocent, but still aware enough to feel the people’s emotions. I love how you start light with ranch life and move into the flood story. The shift in tone is smooth. Your details about the flood damage (flattened grass, stripped trees, debris, flashing lights) put the reader right there. You’ve got a nice balance of “what the dog understands” and “what the reader understands,” which lets the reader fill in the gaps. All in all — this is already a touching story.

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Mary Bendickson
00:59 Aug 11, 2025

Thank you so much!

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