Submitted to: Contest #302

I don't understand

Written in response to: "Write a story with the line “I don’t understand.”"

Fiction Thriller

The flickering gas lamp cast elongated, dancing shadows across the cluttered shelves of Professor Eldridge’s study. Dust motes, disturbed by my frantic pacing, swirled in the weak light, mimicking the chaos in my own mind. I gripped the worn leather armrests of the professor's chair, the only stable thing in a world that had suddenly tilted on its axis. I stared at the intricate, almost alien symbols etched into the obsidian amulet lying on the mahogany desk.

"I don't understand," I repeated, the words a hollow echo in the silent room.

Professor Eldridge, my mentor, my guide, my friend, lay cold and still on the Persian rug, a grotesque parody of his usual scholarly composure. His eyes, usually twinkling with intellectual curiosity, were vacant and wide, fixed on some unseen horror. A single, crimson stain bloomed on his crisp white shirt, a stark testament to the brutal efficiency of the antique letter opener plunged into his chest.

The police dismissed it as a robbery gone wrong. They pointed to the ransacked drawers, the scattered papers, the missing silver candlesticks. But I knew better. I knew that Eldridge’s most prized possessions, his real treasures, were untouched: his rare manuscripts, his ancient artifacts, and the secrets he guarded with his life. This wasn't robbery. This was something…else.

My name is Arthur Finch, and I was Eldridge's protégé. For the past five years, I had dedicated myself to learning from his vast knowledge of forgotten lore, arcane languages, and the history that mainstream academia preferred to ignore. Eldridge believed, and I was beginning to believe with him, that the world concealed a deeper, darker reality, a realm of ancient powers and entities best left undisturbed.

The amulet was our current obsession. He’d acquired it during a clandestine expedition to the remote mountains of Tibet, claiming it was the key to unlocking a hidden temple said to hold unimaginable knowledge. He’d been poring over it for weeks, deciphering its inscriptions, meticulously sketching its intricate design in his notebooks. He was close, I knew he was. He’d been whispering about breakthroughs, about gateways and dimensions, his eyes burning with an unnerving intensity.

Now, he was dead, and the amulet remained an enigmatic cipher, its secrets guarded by silence and the professor's cold, lifeless form.

The detective, a burly man named Inspector Davies, had warned me to stay away. "Let us handle this, Mr. Finch. You're clearly shaken up. Go home, get some rest." Easy for him to say. He saw a simple crime scene. He didn't see the implications, the tendrils of something ancient and malevolent reaching out from the shadows.

I knew I couldn't leave it. I owed it to Eldridge, and perhaps more importantly, I owed it to myself. I had to understand.

Under the watchful gaze of the gas lamp, I began to retrace Eldridge's steps. I carefully gathered his notebooks, each filled with meticulous notes, sketches, and cryptic translations. As I delved deeper into his research, a terrifying picture began to emerge.

The amulet, it seemed, was not merely a key, but a focal point, a conduit. It was a device designed to open a gateway to…something. Eldridge's notes spoke of entities residing in a realm beyond human comprehension, beings of immense power and unimaginable cruelty. He believed the amulet, if activated properly, could grant access to this realm, allowing these entities to cross over into our world.

My blood ran cold. Was it possible? Could Eldridge have inadvertently unleashed something terrible? Had he stumbled upon something he couldn't control?

The more I read, the more I felt like I was losing my grip on reality. The symbols on the amulet seemed to writhe and shift before my eyes, whispering secrets in a language I couldn't understand but felt in the deepest recesses of my soul. I saw patterns in the dust motes, heard whispers in the silence, felt a presence lurking just beyond the periphery of my vision.

Driven by a desperate need for answers, I decided to follow Eldridge's last entry in his notebook. He wrote of a specific astronomical alignment, a celestial convergence that would occur within the next few days. He believed this alignment was crucial for activating the amulet. He had planned to perform a ritual, a series of incantations, at a specific location – an ancient stone circle located deep within the Blackwood Forest.

The forest was notorious for its oppressive atmosphere and its history of strange occurrences. Locals whispered of ancient pagan rituals, of restless spirits, and of a malevolent energy that permeated the very soil. It was a place most people avoided, especially after dark.

But I had no choice. If Eldridge’s theories were correct, and I was beginning to fear they were, then I had to stop whatever he had started. I had to find the stone circle and prevent the ritual from being completed.

The next evening, armed with Eldridge's notes, a flickering lantern, and a heart pounding with dread, I ventured into the Blackwood Forest. The air was thick with the smell of damp earth and decaying leaves. The gnarled branches of the ancient trees clawed at the sky like skeletal fingers, their shadows twisting and distorting in the lantern light.

The deeper I went, the more oppressive the atmosphere became. An unnatural silence settled over the forest, broken only by the rustling of unseen creatures in the undergrowth and the frantic beating of my own heart. I felt like I was being watched, scrutinized by unseen eyes.

After what seemed like an eternity, I stumbled upon the stone circle. Seven ancient monoliths stood sentinel in a clearing bathed in the pale light of the rising moon. The energy emanating from the stones was palpable, a vibrating hum that resonated deep within my bones.

I saw it then, a figure standing in the center of the circle, bathed in the moonlight. A tall, gaunt figure cloaked in shadow.

For a moment, I thought it was Eldridge, somehow resurrected, returned from the grave. But as the figure turned towards me, I saw that it was someone, or something, else entirely.

Its face was obscured by shadows, but I could sense its malevolence, its overwhelming power. It held the obsidian amulet in its outstretched hand, its fingers long and spindly, almost inhuman. It was chanting in a language I vaguely recognized from Eldridge’s notes, a guttural tongue that seemed to vibrate the very air around me.

“You shouldn’t be here,” the figure rasped, its voice a low, sibilant whisper that seemed to crawl into my mind. “You cannot stop what is about to happen.”

Fear threatened to paralyze me, but I forced myself to move, to act. I lunged forward, desperate to seize the amulet, to break the ritual.

The figure moved with unnatural speed, sidestepping my attack with ease. It raised the amulet, and the symbols on its surface began to glow with an eerie, pulsating light. The air crackled with energy, and the ground beneath my feet trembled.

“The gateway is opening,” the figure hissed, its voice filled with a chilling triumph. “The ancient ones are returning.”

I didn’t understand where this figure came from, how it knew of the amulet, or even how it learned the ritual. I just knew I had to stop it.

Suddenly, the ground buckled beneath us, and a swirling vortex of darkness began to form in the center of the circle. The air grew thick and heavy, and a bone-chilling wind swept through the clearing, carrying with it the stench of decay and something else, something indescribably foul.

I knew, with a certainty that chilled me to the core, that something terrible was about to emerge from that vortex. Something that would change the world forever.

Driven by a surge of adrenaline and a desperate will to survive, I tackled the figure, knocking it to the ground. The amulet slipped from its grasp and clattered against the stones. The chanting stopped, and the vortex began to flicker and shrink.

The figure, enraged, lashed out at me with surprising strength. We wrestled on the ground, locked in a desperate struggle for survival. I managed to land a blow, connecting with its face. The figure recoiled, and for a brief moment, I caught a glimpse of its features. They were…wrong. Distorted, unnatural, as if its face was a poorly crafted mask concealing something truly horrifying beneath.

I pressed my advantage, raining blows upon the figure. Finally, with a desperate heave, I managed to dislodge it from on top of me. I scrambled to my feet and grabbed the amulet. The symbols on its surface pulsed with a frantic energy, as if sensing the disruption of the ritual.

I didn't know what to do, but I knew I had to do something. I remembered something Eldridge had written about the amulet: that it was a two-way conduit, a means of not only opening a gateway but also of closing it.

With trembling hands, I held the amulet aloft and focused all my will, all my energy, on closing the vortex. I pictured the gateway shrinking, collapsing in on itself, sealing the ancient ones back in their terrifying realm.

The amulet pulsed with a blinding light, and the vortex began to shrink rapidly. The air grew still, and the wind subsided. The chanting stopped, and the figure let out a scream of pure frustration.

Finally, with a final surge of energy, the vortex vanished, leaving behind only a faint shimmer in the air. The amulet went dark, its symbols fading into insignificance.

The figure collapsed to the ground, its body convulsing violently. Then, just as suddenly, it went still. I cautiously approached it, my heart pounding in my chest. I reached out and touched its face, pulling back the hood of its cloak.

What I saw sent a wave of nausea washing over me. It wasn't human. It wasn't anything I could comprehend. Its face was a grotesque parody of humanity, a twisted mockery of flesh and bone. Its eyes were black and empty, devoid of any light or life.

I stumbled back, horrified by what I had witnessed. I didn't understand what it was, where it came from, or what its purpose was. All I knew was that it was gone.

Exhausted and shaken, I stumbled out of the stone circle and back into the forest. I didn't stop running until I reached the edge of the woods and collapsed onto the familiar, comforting ground.

The police eventually found the body in the stone circle. They ruled it an animal attack, citing the strange wounds and the distorted features. They never found the amulet.

I never told anyone about what happened in the Blackwood Forest. Who would believe me? I knew that Eldridge's death was not a random act of violence, and whatever was happening had something to do with the amulet.

I returned to Eldridge's study. The gas lamp still flickered, casting the same elongated, dancing shadows. But now, the room felt different. Cleaner. Lighter. As if a great darkness had been lifted.

I closed Eldridge's notebooks, placing them back on their shelf. I still don't understand everything that happened, but I know that I did the right thing. I stopped something terrible from happening. I avenged my mentor's death.

And I know that, for the rest of my life, I will never forget the horrors I witnessed in the Blackwood Forest. The whispers in the darkness, the chilling presence, the face of the thing that was not human.

I don’t understand, but I know I will never stop trying to. Sometimes, the darkness answers back. And I am afraid of what it might say.

Posted May 11, 2025
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Tricia Shulist
16:10 May 17, 2025

Great story! Very gothic. Your writer’s voice is spot on. As well, your descriptions were very visual. Two questions—how did the beast in the forest get the amulet? And what did the main character do with it afterwards? Just wondering. Thanks for sharing.

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