The Time Merchant

Submitted into Contest #275 in response to: Write a story about someone who’s running out of time.... view prompt

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Adventure Contemporary Coming of Age

Dr. Eleanor Chen had exactly forty-three hours, twelve minutes, and seven seconds left to live. She knew this with scientific precision because she'd paid good money to find out.

The Time Merchant's shop occupied a sliver of space between a laundromat and a defunct video rental store. Its window display consisted of a single antique hourglass, the sand frozen halfway through its journey. Eleanor had passed it a thousand times without really seeing it, until her diagnosis made time suddenly, painfully relevant.

"Welcome," the Merchant had said when she finally ventured inside three days ago. "You're right on schedule."

He didn't look like someone who trafficked in humanity's most precious commodity. Middle-aged, unremarkable in his brown cardigan and wire-rimmed glasses, he could have been an accountant or a high school science teacher. Only his eyes suggested something different – they seemed to focus both on her and through her, as if reading the timestamps of her past and future simultaneously.

"I need to know," she'd said.

"Everyone who comes here needs to know." He'd gestured to a wooden chair across from his cluttered desk. "The question is: can you afford the price of certainty?"

She could. Barely. A lifetime of careful saving, meant for a future that was now evaporating like morning dew, had bought her the exact duration of her remaining existence. The Merchant's methods were mysterious but reliable – everyone in the underground chronic illness forums agreed on that. When he gave you a number, you could set your watch by it.

Now, watching the seconds tick away on her specialized chronometer, Eleanor wondered if knowing was really better than hoping. The tumor in her brain was inoperable, but without the Merchant's information, she might have spent her remaining time believing in miracles. Instead, she had a countdown, precise to the microsecond.

Forty-three hours, eleven minutes, fifty-two seconds.

She'd already done the responsible things – updated her will, organized her research notes, written letters to colleagues and family. Twenty years of breakthrough work in quantum mechanics, reduced to a neat pile of folders on her office desk. Her younger sister would inherit her apartment and, more importantly, custody of her cat, Mr. Planck.

What remained was the impossible task of deciding how to spend her final forty-three hours.

The bucket list she'd drafted in her oncologist's waiting room months ago now seemed absurd. Sky diving? She'd just be trading one countdown for another. Paris? She'd spend most of her remaining time in transit. No, better to stay close to home, in the city she'd known all her life, where every street corner held a memory of time spent or misspent.

Her phone buzzed – another message from David. Her research partner hadn't taken her sudden sabbatical well, especially not with their breakthrough so tantalizingly close. For fifteen years, they'd worked on quantum entanglement, pushing the boundaries of what was possible with paired particles. In the last few months, they'd begun to see something extraordinary: evidence that time itself might be entangled, that cause and effect might be more flexible than anyone had imagined.

She ignored the message. What good was theoretical physics to someone who could count their heartbeats to extinction?

Instead, she went to the park where she'd first fallen in love with science. Age eight, watching a total solar eclipse with her father's old telescope. The moment of totality had seemed to stretch forever, as if time itself had been awestruck by the celestial dance above.

Forty-three hours, five minutes, thirteen seconds.

The park was empty except for an old man playing chess against himself. No – as she drew closer, she realized he was playing against a photo propped on the opposite side of the board. The picture showed a younger version of himself, smiling over the same chess set.

"Care to join us?" he asked as she passed. "Martin and I are reliving our greatest match. Though I suppose technically, he's living it for the first time."

Eleanor sat. The man introduced himself as Martin Senior and the photo as Martin Junior. "My son," he explained. "He played this exact game against me thirty years ago. Beat me in seventeen moves – the only time he ever won. We were supposed to have a rematch, but..." He gestured vaguely at the empty chair.

"I'm sorry," Eleanor said, understanding.

"Don't be. Time's funny that way. Sometimes the matches we don't get to play are as important as the ones we do." He moved a knight. "Your turn, Junior."

Eleanor watched as he played both sides of the board, each move a conversation across decades. When the game ended – differently this time, with Senior triumphant – he smiled at the photo. "Best two out of three?"

Forty-two hours, fifty-eight minutes, forty-two seconds.

She left the park and walked to her laboratory. The security guard nodded as she badged in – no one questioned a workaholic professor spending Saturday in the lab. Her office was exactly as she'd left it, equations sprawling across whiteboards, scientific journals stacked in precise chronological order.

David had left more sticky notes on her computer monitor:

"Check the new data."

"Something's happening with the entangled pairs."

"CALL ME."

She shouldn't look. Whatever they'd discovered, she wouldn't live long enough to see it published. But curiosity – the force that had driven her entire life – won out.

The data was extraordinary. The entangled particles weren't just correlating, they were... remembering. Each pair seemed to recall states they hadn't yet experienced, as if their futures were bleeding backward into their present.

Forty-two hours, forty-one minutes, seventeen seconds.

Her phone buzzed again. David.

"Where have you been?" he demanded when she finally answered. "Did you see the results? The particles are–"

"Time traveling," she finished. "Or at least, information is."

"This changes everything, Ellie. We need to run more tests. I've already submitted the grant extension–"

"I won't be here for that," she said quietly.

"The sabbatical can't be that long. Just delay it–"

"I'm dying, David." The words felt strange in her mouth – she hadn't said them aloud before. "Brain tumor. Inoperable. I have about forty-two hours left."

The silence stretched between them like a rubber band about to snap.

"How can you know that exactly?"

She told him about the Time Merchant, about the countdown, about the certainty that was both blessing and curse.

"That's impossible," he said. "Time doesn't work that way. It's not deterministic, it's–" He stopped. "The lab. Now. Bring the chronometer."

Forty-two hours, thirty-three minutes, five seconds.

David was already setting up equipment when she arrived. He looked like he hadn't slept in days, his dark hair standing up in academic tufts.

"What if time isn't just flowing forward?" he said without preamble. "What if, like our particles, it's entangled with itself? Past, present, and future all correlating, all influencing each other?"

"David–"

"The Merchant didn't sell you information," he continued, calibrating sensors with shaking hands. "He sold you certainty. He collapsed your quantum wave function. But what if we could re-expand it?"

"That's not how it works."

"How do you know? Has anyone ever tested it? Has anyone with our equipment, our understanding of quantum mechanics, ever tried to uncollapse a human timeline?"

Forty-two hours, twenty-eight minutes, fifty-two seconds.

They worked through the night, repurposing their quantum entanglement apparatus to scan Eleanor's chronometer. The data was unlike anything they'd seen before – patterns that suggested the device wasn't just measuring time, but actively fixing it in place.

"It's like a quantum observation machine," David muttered, staring at the readouts. "As long as you're wearing it, your timeline stays collapsed. But if we could interfere with the observation..."

"We'd be fighting the universe's basic principles," Eleanor said. "The observer effect isn't just a theory, it's–"

"Neither is quantum entanglement, but our particles are doing impossible things every day. What's one more impossibility between friends?"

Forty hours, twelve minutes, thirty-seven seconds.

They tried everything – electromagnetic pulses, quantum field generators, even placing the chronometer in their particle acceleration chamber. Nothing changed the inexorable countdown.

"I need coffee," David announced around dawn. "And donuts. Definitely donuts."

While he was gone, Eleanor stared at their latest failed attempt. The mathematics were beautiful, even if they weren't working. Quantum superposition at a macro scale, time itself acting like Schrödinger's cat...

The cat.

She was scribbling equations when David returned with breakfast.

"What if we're thinking about this wrong?" she said, grabbing a donut. "We're trying to uncollapse my timeline, but what if we need to entangle it first? Like our particles – they can't influence each other until they're paired."

"Entangle it with what?"

"Not what. Who."

Thirty-nine hours, forty-five minutes, thirteen seconds.

The Time Merchant wasn't surprised to see them.

"Ah," he said, adjusting his cardigan. "The partner who would break the rules of causality. Right on schedule."

"You knew we'd come?" David demanded.

"I know when everyone comes. It's rather the point." He turned to Eleanor. "The chronometer is functioning perfectly, Dr. Chen. Your time remains exactly what you paid for."

"We want to buy another one," she said. "For him."

The Merchant's eyes glittered. "Interesting. You think you can use quantum entanglement to create a temporal paradox. Very clever. Also quite impossible."

"Like receiving messages from particles in the future?" David countered.

"Ah. You've been doing interesting work in your laboratory." The Merchant smiled. "Very well. The usual price."

David reached for his wallet, but Eleanor stopped him. "Terms first. What exactly are we buying?"

"The same thing as before – certainty. Whether that certainty can be changed... well, that's rather up to you, isn't it?"

Thirty-nine hours, thirty-two minutes, eight seconds.

Back in the lab, they synchronized the chronometers. David's showed forty years, three months, seventeen days remaining. The disparity should have been depressing, but Eleanor found it oddly motivating.

"Ready?" she asked, making the final adjustments to their quantum field generator.

"To create a temporal paradox that either saves your life or breaks the universe? Absolutely."

They activated the generator. The chronometers began to glow with an impossible light. On the monitors, data streamed in patterns that shouldn't have existed.

Thirty-nine hours, twenty-nine minutes, forty seconds.

Thirty-nine hours, twenty-nine minutes, thirty-nine seconds.

Thirty-nine hours, twenty-nine minutes, thirty-nine seconds.

The countdown had stopped.

"It's working," David whispered. "The timelines are correlating, just like our particles. If we can maintain the field–"

The lights went out. When emergency power kicked in, the chronometers were counting down again – but differently. Both now showed the same time:

Thirty-nine hours, twenty-nine minutes, thirty-seven seconds.

"No," David said, staring at his display. "No, no, no."

"You entangled our timelines," Eleanor realized. "Now we're both counting down to my deadline."

"We'll try again. We'll–"

"David, stop." She took off her chronometer. "Some things shouldn't be changed."

"But we were so close!"

"Were we? Or did we just prove the Merchant right about certainty?"

David looked at his chronometer, now showing less than forty hours of life remaining. "What do we do?"

"We finish our paper. Together. One last contribution to science."

"That's not enough time."

Eleanor smiled. "Then we'd better stop wasting it."

Thirty-nine hours, twenty minutes, fifty-two seconds.

They wrote like possessed things, fueled by coffee and desperation and the pure joy of discovery. The quantum entanglement of time, the correlation of particles across temporal boundaries, the possibility of information transcending causality – it all flowed onto the page in a rush of equations and insights.

Somewhere around hour thirty-five, Eleanor realized they were writing something revolutionary. Not just a paper, but a whole new understanding of how time itself worked. Their entangled particles hadn't been remembering the future – they'd been creating it, reaching across time to ensure their own existence.

"Just like us," she said, looking at their synchronized chronometers. "We created this paper because we knew we only had forty hours to write it. And we only knew that because we wrote it."

"A temporal loop," David agreed. "Beautiful."

Twenty-seven hours, thirteen minutes, four seconds.

They submitted the paper at dawn. "Time's Arrow: Quantum Entanglement and Temporal Causality" by Chen and Morrison. Eleanor insisted David's name go last – he'd have to handle the peer reviews and conferences alone.

"What now?" he asked as the sun rose over the campus.

"Now we do what everyone does." She showed him her chronometer. "We make the most of the time we have left."

They spent their remaining hours in the park, playing chess against themselves, watching the sun trace its arc across the sky, talking about everything and nothing. When the chess master with his son's photo joined them, they played a game that existed in multiple times at once – past, present, and the future they'd glimpsed in their entangled particles.

One hour, six minutes, eighteen seconds.

"I lied," the Time Merchant said, appearing beside their bench as the sun began to set. "It wasn't impossible. Just highly improbable."

"What wasn't?" Eleanor asked.

"Creating a temporal paradox. You didn't change your timeline, but you did something rather more interesting – you proved that time itself is entangled. Past affecting future affecting past, all happening simultaneously." He smiled. "Rather like a quantum particle."

"Did we break the universe?" David asked.

"No more than it was already broken. Time was never as linear as people thought. You just proved it mathematically." He reached into his cardigan and produced a small hourglass – the one from his window. "A gift, Dr. Chen. For services rendered to our understanding of temporal mechanics."

The sand in the hourglass wasn't frozen anymore. It flowed both up and down simultaneously, defying gravity and logic in equal measure.

Forty-three minutes, twelve seconds.

"Was any of it real?" Eleanor asked. "The countdown, the certainty?"

"As real as time itself," the Merchant said. "Which is to say, both absolutely real and completely mutable, depending on how you observe it."

He vanished between one blink and the next, leaving them with the impossible hourglass and their synchronized chronometers.

Fifteen minutes, seven seconds.

"I don't want to watch," David said.

"Then don't." Eleanor took his hand. "Tell me about the future instead. What happens to our particles? Where does the research go next?"

He talked until their time ran out, spinning theories and possibilities like golden threads into the gathering dark. The last thing Eleanor saw was the hourglass, its sand still flowing in both directions at once, suggesting that perhaps time, like quantum particles, never really ends – it just changes how it's observed.

Zero hours, zero minutes, zero seconds.

Three days later, "Time's Arrow" was accepted for publication in Physical Review Letters. The reviewers noted its unusual composition – as if it had been written by authors operating under different temporal constraints. They recommended immediate publication.

One week later, the Time Merchant's shop disappeared from between the laundromat and the video store. In its place was a small park with a chess table. The only evidence it had ever existed was a single hourglass, left in David Morrison's office, its sand eternally flowing both up and down, marking time in all directions at once.

And somewhere, in the quantum foam of possibility, two particles remain eternally entangled, their states correlating across past and future, proving that some things – like time, like love, like scientific discovery – never truly run out. They just transform into something new, something that exists in all moments simultaneously, waiting to be observed.

November 04, 2024 03:50

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Rabab Zaidi
02:18 Nov 10, 2024

Very well written. Thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Todd Beller
23:11 Nov 10, 2024

Thanks much, that means a lot.

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Kristi Gott
16:20 Nov 04, 2024

I love this story! I read in the news about the quantum entanglement experiments in physics. The creativity of using the concept in a time story is super. I also enjoyed the positive note of hope at the end, transforming into something new. Interesting, enjoyable read, and very unique!

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Todd Beller
18:16 Nov 04, 2024

Thanks for the lovely comments. I am glad you enjoyed reading this story. I sure enjoyed writing it

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