Submitted to: Contest #307

The Order of the Saffron Veil

Written in response to: "Write a story about a secret group or society."

Funny Mystery Suspense

The night draped the countryside in a heavy shroud, fog swirling like restless spirits around the twisted, skeletal trees lining an unmarked dirt road. An owl’s mournful hoot sliced through the damp silence, reverberating as Evelyn’s sedan inched forward, headlights swallowed by the mist. Her hands gripped the wheel, knuckles pale, her breath fogging in the chill. On the passenger seat lay a crumpled parchment, its edges curling with age: Left at the gnarled elm, right at the weeping stone. Trust the saffron seal. The note, stamped with a faint saffron bloom, had arrived unsigned. Marge, her friend of decades, had slipped it to her over tea, whispering, “You’re sixty, Evelyn. It’s time.” Time for what? Marge’s sly smile offered no answers

Evelyn wasn’t built for riddles, her days were stitched with book club chatter, rose pruning, and Sunday potlucks. Yet here she was, pulse hammering, drawn into the unknown. Her car joined a huddle of vehicles in a misty clearing, sedans, a dented pickup, an SUV, their drivers emerging in dark, hooded robes. Evelyn tugged on the musty cloak Marge had pressed into her hands, its fabric stiff and ancient. The figures moved wordlessly, shadows in the fog, and she followed, her sensible loafers sinking into the sodden earth. The air thrummed with a strange gravity, her mind spinning tales of secret societies and midnight pacts.

Before them rose a decaying manor, its jagged outline clawing at the starless sky. Ivy strangled its weathered stone, its sagging eaves drooping like a tired sigh. Dark windows gaped, hollow and unblinking, as a creaking door parted the brambles. Evelyn’s skin prickled, picturing specters behind the walls. The group assembled, and a figure rapped on the wood: three slow knocks, two sharp. The door yielded, revealing a staircase spiraling into shadow. A warm, savory aroma drifted up, rich, almost homely, yet laced with an odd note. Evelyn’s stomach churned, what had she stumbled into?

They descended, robes brushing damp stone, the air growing thick. Evelyn’s breath hitched as the stairwell opened into a chamber lit by flickering candles, their flames dancing across faded tapestries. A cauldron bubbled at the heart, steam curling upward, tended by a tall figure in a black robe trimmed with gold. The group formed a ring, heads bowed, and Evelyn mirrored them, knees protesting. This was no book club night, it felt like a descent into the arcane.

“Children of the Saffron Veil,” the leader’s voice boomed, deep and commanding, “we gather beneath the veil to shield what must remain hidden. We stand at the threshold, keepers of the old ways. Let none waver, lest the balance break.” Their hood cast shadows over their face, revealing only a glint of eyes.

“We stand firm,” the group intoned, their chant vibrating through the stone. Evelyn mumbled along, eyes darting to the cauldron. Was that broth? The thought clashed with the scene’s weight.

The ritual unfolded. The leader stirred the cauldron with a carved spoon, murmuring words like terra viva, sanguis ignis, lumen quintum. Chills raced down Evelyn’s spine. One by one, members approached, offering parcels wrapped in brittle parchment, vials of shimmering dust, jars of dark paste, bundles of brittle leaves. The leader accepted each with a nod, intoning, “The fivefold essence binds us,” as they scattered a pinch of crimson powder into the cauldron. It hissed, releasing a scent of spice and earth. Evelyn’s imagination flared, potions? Curses? Something beyond her quiet life?

Marge nudged her, voice low. “Your turn, love.” Evelyn’s fingers trembled as she drew out her parcel, a recipe card in her mother’s spidery hand, Stuffed Bell Peppers. She’d chuckled when Marge gave it to her, assuming it was a potluck gag, but Marge’s gaze had been steel. Stepping forward, Evelyn offered it, the symbols glowing faintly underfoot. The leader placed it in a wooden chest carved with saffron whorls. “The chain holds,” they said, voice solemn.

A chalice circulated, its contents steaming with a fragrance of herbs and warmth. Evelyn hesitated, poison? A spell?, but Marge’s encouraging nod urged her on. She sipped, the liquid smooth and familiar, a trace of something elusive, cinnamon? Sage? Her brow furrowed as the chanting swelled. The leader opened a leather-bound tome, its pages crackling. “From root to flame, from hand to hand, the secret endures. The hearth’s fire, the soul’s root.” The candles flared, and Evelyn’s head buzzed. Was this real power?

The cauldron bubbled fiercely, the chants peaking. A member tossed in a sprinkle of green, dried flakes, and the steam thickened with notes of garlic and onion. Evelyn’s mouth watered, her fear warring with hunger. The leader snapped the tome shut. “The Saffron Veil endures!” they proclaimed. “Depart in silence, and hold the truth close.”

The group ascended, robes trailing. Evelyn lingered, glancing at the chest. What secrets lay within? The leader’s hand rested on her shoulder. “Courage, Evelyn. The burden is yours now.” Their eyes pierced hers.

Climbing the stairs, she caught a murmur: “Pick up some basil tomorrow, my patch is wilted.” It snagged in her mind, out of place.

Morning peeled back the fog, unveiling rolling hills and a cozy farmhouse where the manor had loomed. Its eaves were quaint, its windows framed with lace, geraniums spilling from pots. The stone was a low garden wall, the ivy a trellis. Inside, the chamber was a dining room, tapestries now floral curtains, a checkered cloth on the table. The cauldron was a stockpot, its stew cooling, and the chest lay open, spilling recipe cards: Marge’s Spaghetti Pie, Doris’s Enchilada Bake, Ethel’s Fried Chicken, Evelyn’s Stuffed Peppers.

The cloaked figures were gone, replaced by women in cardigans and aprons. Ethel, wiry and silver-haired, chuckled as she stirred the pot. “Gave Evelyn the full treatment, didn’t we? Nearly jumped when I added the ‘essence,’ just chili flakes!”

Marge, untangling yarn from her bag, grinned. “My grandkids think I’m at knitting circle, not playing sorceress.”

Doris adjusted her glasses. “My Enchilada Bake’s a church hit. Can’t let Linda from choir water it down with skim milk.”

Evelyn sat, dazed, clutching a mug as the pieces clicked, stockpot, recipes, aprons. Marge leaned close. “My Spaghetti Pie? Keeps my son’s wife in line. We guard these like gold.”

Ethel slid Evelyn’s peppers into the chest. “You’re in, dear. Next time’s at Marge’s, bring your mother’s chili, something with bite.”

Laughter rippled as they spooned out stew, rich and spiced. Doris sighed. “My arthritis pills cost a fortune, and the pharmacy wait? Endless. Nearly missed my bridge game.”

Marge nodded. “My cat’s vet bill was steeper than my blood pressure meds. And don’t get me started on the generic taste.”

Evelyn sputtered into her tea, eyes bouncing between the women and the chest. A grin broke free as Ethel handed her Spaghetti Pie. “Keep it safe,” she winked.

Driving home, sunlight gilding the fields, Evelyn laughed. Her peppers were her ticket in. She’d bring that chili next time, spicy enough to earn her place.

Posted Jun 17, 2025
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Nicole Moir
11:19 Jun 23, 2025

I love Evelyn, she feels familiar. Great character and story. And what a unique way to use prompt!

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