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CW: This story contains themes of physical violence and suicide.



The following is the transcript of the cockpit conversation captured by the onboard black box recorder, which was recovered following the crash of Delta 928 in Denver, Colorado on June 16, 2025. The National Transportation Safety Board will include this as a key exhibit in the incident file and it will very likely have a significant bearing on issues related to causation and legal liability. We caution you in advance that this transcript is highly disturbing in nature.


Captain David Starnes: Morning, Pete. How are you doing today?


Co-Pilot Peter Markley: Oh, I’m good. Just glad I made it on time. Traffic was a bitch this morning. How are you, Captain?


Starnes: Feeling just fine. Once I fly this turn I have the next three days off and me and Jenny are going out to Sedona to play some golf and enjoy the spa at the Hilton.


Markley: Sounds nice. I’m on for the next four days at least.


Starnes: Hey, do me a favor. I have to call home real quick. Ask Marcy to bring up some coffee for us and then we can start with the pre-flight routine. We’re scheduled to be nose-up in about twenty.


Markley: Will do, Captain. (Pause) Hey Marcy? Can you please bring up two cups of coffee? (Muffled response) Thanks. Get one for yourself too. It’s on me.


Starnes: Hey Jenny, I just wanted to let you know that I didn’t have time to get the laundry into the dryer. The washer was still running when I had to leave. Just wanted to let you know. I’ll call you when we touch down in Chicago. Love you.


Markley: Well ain’t that sweet!


Senior Flight Attendant Marcy Nichols: Here you are gentleman. Can I get you anything else?


Starnes: Thanks. I’m good.


Markley: Same here. Thanks, Marcy. How are we looking back there?


Nichols: We’re almost ready. Just a few more passengers getting settled. We should be able to do the final cabin walk-through in the next five to ten minutes.


Markley: Sounds good. We’ll be right here waiting for your thumbs up.


Nichols: Be back soon.


[Dead Air for 32 seconds, with the exception of a brief cough.]


Starnes: All right, let’s check it down. Auxiliary fuel pump?


Markley: Off


Starnes: Flight controls?


Markley: Free and correct


Starnes: Instruments and radios?


Markley: Checked and set


Starnes: Landing gear position lighting?


Markley: Checked


Markley: Altimeter


Starnes: Set


Markley: Directional gyro?


Starnes: Set


Markley: Fuel gauges?


Starnes: Checked


Markley: Trim?


Markley: Set


Starnes: Magnetos?


Markley: Checked


Starnes: Engine idle?


Markley: Checked


Starnes: Flaps?


Markley: In position


Starnes: Seat belts, shoulder harnesses?


Markley: Fastened


Starnes: Parking brake


Markley: Off


Starnes: All right, we are good to go.


[24 seconds of dead air]


Markley: You heard the latest on Kendall?


Starnes: What a mess. It wasn't just alcohol you know. He tested positive for cocaine too, and they found some in his suitcase.


Markley: I heard his wife left him after Delta shit-canned him. What the hell happened to that guy?


Starnes: Who can say? Kendall was a solid pilot and a good enough guy most of the time, but he definitely has a short fuse and he likes to drink. I saw him deck a guy in the bar at the Sheraton in Atlanta one night over something that was really nothing at all. I kept my distance from him after that. I wasn’t really too surprised when everything blew up that day, to be honest. Seems like he’s just in a tailspin now. He was in jail until just a couple of days ago. Out on bail now I heard.


Markley: Yeah. I feel bad though. He seemed like a decent guy to me but I couldn’t let him take off that morning. He literally stumbled into the cockpit wreaking of booze, slurred speech…he fell asleep about a minute after he took his seat. Miranda was the Senior Flight Crew Member that day and she noticed it right away.


Starnes: You did the right thing. I wouldn’t give it a second thought.


Markley: Yeah, I know. I just feel bad for the guy.


Starnes: Don’t. Not your problem. How we looking back there?


Markley: Marcy’s walking this way now. They look like they’re all settled in.


Nichols: Ok guys, we are all set.


Markley: Thanks, Marcy. Ready for takeoff.


Starnes [over cabin intercom): Hello ladies and gentlemen. Welcome aboard Delta Airlines flight 928 from Phoenix to Chicago O’Hare. Our flight time today should be three hours and twenty two minutes. The weather looks good the whole way so it should be a smooth flight but we will notify you if we expect any turbulence. Your flight crew members will be coming through the cabin with an assortment of snacks and beverages once we level off. We’d like to thank you for flying Delta Airlines. We are third for takeoff and we should be in the air shortly.


[Sound of jet thrusters increasing and decreasing for next six minutes and 14 seconds. Muffled dialogue between pilot and co-pilot.]


PHX Tower Air Traffic Controller Mike Reynolds [over radio]: Delta 928 you are clear for takeoff.


[Sound of increased volume of jet thrust for next 12 minutes and 35 seconds.]


Starnes: All right, we are up and running. Activating auto-pilot.


[Dead air for next 2 minutes and 43 seconds.]


Reynolds [over radio]: Delta 928 please adjust your altitude to 32,500 feet.


Markley: Copy. Descending to 32,500 feet.


[Dead air for next 2 minutes and 32 seconds.]


Markley: How’s that course at the Sedona Hilton? I’ve played a few of those courses out there but not that one.


Starnes: Ah, you know. They’re all kind of the same? Pretty wide open. The greens are usually pretty fast though, so that can hurt you. It’s nice though. Well maintained.


Markley: I gotta get out there next time. Haven’t played much this year. I’m scared to find out where my handicap really is right now. At least an 18.


Starnes: (Chuckling) I brought in a 78 with 4 birdies at Sun Valley last week.


Markley: Nice shooting. You gotta teach me how to keep it in the fairway. My drives are all over the place. I swear.


[Dead air for next 54 seconds.]


Starnes: This is my third turn in the last 24 hours. Alright with you if I catch a little shut-eye for a while?


Markley: No problem, Captain. I’ll rouse you back up if necessary.


Starnes: Thanks, Pete.


[Dead air for next 54 minutes and 22 seconds.]


[Sound of knocking on cabin door. Sound of door opening.]


Nichols: (Gasping and speaking quietly) I’m so sorry. He made me open the door. He has a knife.


Former Delta Airlines Pilot Marcus Kendall: Enough! You’ve done your part. Just give me all those little whiskey bottles and get back there and keep everything cool. If I hear one sound near that cabin door everyone is going to regret it quickly. Remember, if I kill these two then I’m the only one left to land this plane. [Overlapped with sounds of motion as well as inaudible comments from Starnes and Markley, followed by the closing of the cockpit door.]


Starnes: Marcus, what the fuck? What is this?


Kendall: This has nothing to do with you, Dave. I'm here to see Pete. Here, take this though.


[Sounds of a struggle followed by painful gasps, cries and heavy breathing for next 18 seconds from Starnes. Shouting from Markley.]


Markley: Jesus, Kendall! What the hell are you doing? Stop.


Kendall: You better get back into that co-pilot seat before you get hurt, Pete. I think we both know how a fight between me and you would end even if I didn’t have this knife. And Delta suspended the Federal Flight Deck Program three months ago after that incident in Salt Lake City so I know you don’t have a gun in this cockpit. Besides, I’m here to speak with you. This doesn’t involve Dave. He was an asshole anyway. I need this seat.


[Sounds of seat belt unclicking, followed by a thud.]


Kendall: Shit, look at all the blood in this seat. Give me your jacket. I gotta wipe this up a little.


Markley: How did you even get on this flight? How did you get a knife onboard?


Kendall: I worked for this airline for 17 years, Pete. You don't think I know how to get around? You don't think I know some people who will help me out if I hand them five hundred cash? Baggage handlers make shit for pay, you know? It's a pretty thankless job. Those guys aren't exactly rocket scientists.


[Dead air for next 16 seconds.] 


Markley: Christ, Marcus. What are you doing?


Kendall: I came to talk to you, Pete. About what you did. And don’t even think about triggering that handset. God help me, if I hear a 7500 squawk come out of your mouth I’m gonna cut off your right thumb. Don’t test me. Look at Dave down there. You think I’m fucking around?


Markley: I won’t. I swear I won’t.


Kendall: Good. This won’t take long here. Looks like we will be over Denver in just a few minutes.


Markley: Why Denver? Are you gonna land us at DIA?


Kendall: Not exactly, but close. We’ll get to that. First, let me ask you something. You are a licensed and qualified pilot with plenty of experience flying the Boeing 737, yes?


Markley: Yeah, sure. Not as much as you, but yeah.


Kendall: So, on that morning when you called security to come into the cockpit to wake me up and drag me away, leading to me ending up in jail and losing my job along with my wife and two kids, you could have just…covered for me. Right?


Markley: Hey, you know the airline’s policies. Plus the flight crew already knew you were in no condition to fly. If they call security before I do, then I’m in it with you.


Kendall: Yeah, so you just decided to ruin my life instead of taking that chance. That’s what I thought. You are a little pussy, Pete. Do you know that? I bet you’ve been a little pussy for your whole life.


Markley: Marcus, we’re losing altitude fast. We are well below 20,000 feet and we are way off our flight path.


[Dead air for next 22 seconds.]


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 15,000 feet.


Markley: Marcus, we need to pull up right away.


[Dead air for next 14 seconds.]


Kendall: You know what, Pete? I don’t really care what you have to say. I just wanted to be here with you for the end. I was originally planning to fly us straight into one of those high sheer cliffs up in the Rockies, but then I came up with a better plan.


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 12,000 feet.


DIA Tower Air Traffic Controller Miles Cordrey: Delta 928. We are showing you coming towards downtown Denver and descending below 10,000 feet. Are you in distress? Do you need us to clear a runway for you at DIA?


Kendall: Kill that speaker.


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 8,000 feet.


Kendall: I know you can’t kill that one. Anyway, rather than just pushing us into a mountain face I decided it would be more fun to do this. 


[Sound of increased wind sheer, muffled screaming coming from the cabin.]


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 6,000 feet.


Markley: Jesus, Kendall! Please pull up on that stick. We are almost nose-down and we won’t be able to pull out of this dive if you don’t do it now. Please. Don’t do this!


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 5,000 feet.


Kendall: You see that down there, Pete? You see that? I timed it pretty damn good, didn’t I? That’s downtown Denver right there. I don’t know if I should target one of those tall buildings or try to put us down on a busy street. I guess I’ll just have to play it as a last-minute decision. You got a preference?


Markley: DEAR GOD, MARCUS! NO!


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 3,000 feet.


Kendall: I was considering it and I just thought it would be better to put us down here rather than up there in the mountains. This way there will be some good collateral damage and lots of great fiery video reels for the news. People love watching other people die in horrific ways when they watch the news, ya know. That’s basically what they tune in for mostly, Pete. Let’s give the people what they want today.


Markley: Hail Mary, full of grace, the lord is with thee, and blessed are…


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 2,000 feet.


Kendall [over cabin intercom]: Uh, people you might want to buckle up and return your seats to the upright position. We will be making an unscheduled landing in downtown Denver in about 30 seconds and I think it's gonna be a rough one.


Markley: ...and blessed, uh blessed, are thou among [gasp] women and blessed is the fruit of…


Automated Voice from Instrument Panel: Warning! Altitude. Warning! Altitude. 1000 feet.


Kendall: Open your eyes, Pete. Open your eyes! You don’t want to miss this! Look at all those cars and people down there. We are gonna be front page news! Here we go. Here we go, Pete! Count it down with me. Come on now! Three…Two...ONE!!!


THE END


December 08, 2024 00:32

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20 comments

Rebecca Hurst
14:29 Dec 12, 2024

That was a good read, Thomas! It's very liberating to write in this style, for both the reader and the writer. I'm personally fond of the Armageddon themes - can't always be rainbows and redemption. Top darts!

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Thomas Wetzel
18:19 Dec 12, 2024

Thanks, Rebecca! I appreciate your compliments. Occasionally I find ways to write non-Armageddon stories, but it's basically my default setting. I'm not very good with other genres most of the time. I read a lot of dark fiction growing up so I guess it's just what I know best. Happy to hear that you enjoy my stories. Thanks so much for reading. Hope you are well.

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Rebecca Hurst
19:42 Dec 12, 2024

I am very well, thanks. Nope, you keep up with the armageddon. It's so much better than all the personal shlock that I am more than capable of ! I struggle with action, romance ... jeez, the list is endless !

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Trudy Jas
13:11 Dec 08, 2024

Oof! That's a rough landing. Well done. The tension builds nicely from casual chit-chat to imminent death.

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Thomas Wetzel
02:13 Dec 09, 2024

Thanks, Trudy. I kind of struggled with this week's prompts but I liked the idea of telling a story of death and destruction via a black box recorder. I think it's fundamentally creepy. If you have to recover and listen to one of those recordings, things definitely didn't end well. I don't think anyone at the FAA or NTSB ever says, "Hey, remember that uneventful flight from Atlanta to Miami last month? Let's pull up the black box and see what the pilots chatted about along the way. Those two are just delightful."

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Trudy Jas
02:15 Dec 09, 2024

Good point. And right up your alley. :-)

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Mary Butler
00:33 Dec 15, 2024

Thomas, your story is incredibly gripping and haunting, showcasing your talent for creating a chilling narrative. The line, “I just thought it would be better to put us down here rather than up there in the mountains... lots of great fiery video reels for the news,” hit me like the kool-aid man bursting through a wall. It starkly encapsulates Kendall's unraveling psyche and his twisted rationale, heightening the tension to an unbearable crescendo. Your pacing and use of realistic dialogue make the situation feel disturbingly authentic, pull...

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Thomas Wetzel
01:44 Dec 15, 2024

Thanks so much, Mary. You always get me motivated for the next story. I know this one was pretty brutal but I was primarily aiming for intensity. I thought the altitude warning from the instrument panel could serve as a good metronome to pace the final beats of the story amidst the rest of the dialogue. Kind of refreshing to write a story with zero room for descriptive language and I thought the black box transcript would set the general tone right from the start. (Recovered black box recordings don't have happy endings. They just never do.)...

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Mary Butler
12:37 Dec 15, 2024

Thomas, your reply just shows how much thought and precision you put into your storytelling, and I have to say, you absolutely nailed the pacing. Using the altitude warning as a metronome was brilliant—it created an almost unbearable rhythm that mirrored the inevitability of the crash, driving home the tension. The black box format really did set the tone perfectly, as it strips away any illusions of hope and delivers raw, unfiltered moments of chaos. Thank you for your kind words—I’m always inspired by your work, and this piece was no exce...

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Tucker Sloan
17:38 Dec 21, 2024

Loved this! One of my worst fears is dying in a plane crash. This was intense! I especially liked, “God help me, if I hear a 7500 squawk come out of your mouth I’m gonna cut off your right thumb.” Great dialogue throughout! Realistic, not stilted. Well done! I enjoyed this one!

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Thomas Wetzel
20:33 Dec 21, 2024

Thanks so much, Tucker. I really appreciate your support. Intensity was the goal in this one and I have been thinking about writing a black box story for a while. (You ever heard any? Flight crew members sobbing and saying goodbye to their families and pilots freaking the fuck out trying to get things under control. People in the back screaming. It's highly intense and terrifying stuff. There are no happy endings to the black box stories.) And I assume you already know but a 7500 squawk is the radio signal for a pilot to signal air traffic ...

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David Sweet
19:30 Dec 20, 2024

That is intense! Hopefully, you remain in the realm of storyteller rather than prophet.

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Thomas Wetzel
22:20 Dec 20, 2024

Yeah, if there is a plane crash in Denver on June 16 next year I'm gonna have to do some heavy drinking in order to get some sleep that night. Hopefully it all just remains fiction. (But I am definitely not boarding any flight departing PHX that day. That's just tempting fate.) Thanks for reading, David! I appreciate your time. Happy Holidays!

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David Sweet
12:18 Dec 21, 2024

The power of story: I had a dream about taking pictures of a plane crash in order to re-create a 3-D model of the crash. I have no doubt it was your story! Thanks again for your creativity. Hope you have a great holiday season and a prosperous New Year.

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Thomas Wetzel
20:43 Dec 21, 2024

Funny how our waking experiences find a way to enter our dream state like that, or even sensory inputs while we are sleeping. I remember one night back when I was in high school I was having some dream (don't even remember the details) but suddenly I was on a roller coaster getting bounced around. I woke up a few seconds later and then went back to sleep. The next morning I learned there was a minor earthquake during the night.

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Mary Bendickson
18:44 Dec 09, 2024

Cockpit chit-chat. At least they know why the guy went off the deep end. 9-11 vibes. Not good. But writing top flight.

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Thomas Wetzel
21:25 Dec 09, 2024

Thanks for reading, Mary. I'm just trying to spread some holiday cheer. I appreciate your support and hope you are well. I will check out your latest today.

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Mary Bendickson
21:35 Dec 09, 2024

Intentional plane crashing not too cheerful. Just saying...

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Thomas Wetzel
04:06 Dec 11, 2024

I make a different type of eggnog. I know it's not for everyone.

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Thomas Wetzel
03:10 Dec 18, 2024

Four glasses, please.

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