Submitted to: Contest #316

Sailor With a Secret

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of someone who’s hiding a secret."

Adventure Crime Drama

Sailor with a Secret

After checking over my shoulder I steered my 30-foot sailing yacht into the small, safe looking harbor. I hoped it would be a big enough to provide all I needed. Finding an empty slip in the public sector proved easy enough. Question was if they had a refilling/dump station. It was standard at all but the tiniest ports. At least I could restock a few items and be on the open water again until I found a bigger port of call. I noticed a bar-restaurant nearby so decided to tie up and go ask some questions. My charts, GPS and the name of the establishment confirmed my location. Since I traveled without a destination it really didn't matter if all supplies weren't available here. I would simply move on.

Palm trees swayed in the salt breezes as I found my land legs again. So I was far enough south for balmy weather. If the stars aligned maybe I would stay awhile. Depended on what I found. Cautiously I pushed open the door to Crusty's Coral Cove Cuisine, removed my sunglasses and allowed my eyes to adjust to the dimmed lights so I could take a better look around.

“Ahoy, Sailor!” A friendly voiced hailed to me. “Come on aboard and sit a spell. Were you looking for someone?”

“Ah, no, no. Only admiring the beach décor.”

“What'll you be drinking today?”

“I'll start with an ice water with lemon, please. And a menu.”

“Comin' right up.”

When the waitress returned she recommended, ”Might I suggest the catch of the day. It is very fresh and served with Crusty's famous slivered almond marinade.”

“I've had a diet of my own catch of the day for a few weeks and am really craving some crisp green salads with fruit.”

“We can do that.”

“Oh, and can you tell me if there is a filling/dump station here in the harbor? And maybe a good mechanic?”

“Sure, Skipper's is right around the bend. You can't miss it. He can take care of all your needs.”

“Wonderful! I must have missed the sign. Thank you.”

“Where ya hail from and where ya headin' to in that fine sailing vessel.”

“From the north and heading south is about all I can tell you at this point.”

“And you're traveling all alone? We just don't see pretty young women sailing around by themselves much around these cays. Hope you can stay awhile in our hidden little cove. Lot's of nice people here.”

“So I see. Thanks. That may be an option. And, yes, I'm by myself.”

“My name is 'Carmen', by the way.”

“How do you do, Carmen by the way? Mine is 'Catalina'.”

“You mean like your boat?”

“Just a coincidence, I assure you. Friends call me 'Cat'.”

“Oh, may I? Thanks, Cat.”

“No problem. Nice to meet a friendly person. May I ask you a couple of questions?”

“We're not busy right now so sure.”

“If I did stay around here for a time are there many job prospects? Does Crusty need more help? Or are there any charter fishing or sailing businesses here in the harbor? Maybe dinner cruises on my yacht catered by Crusty? Something like that?”

“Wow! That would be totally awesome, Cat! Want me to go get him so you can talk it over?”

“Well, first I better check out the town a little more to see if it meets all my must haves, okay. I only wanted to feel out the possibility right now. I would have to live on my boat, too. I'll enjoy my salad while you wait on others then maybe you can tell me more about the town over a drink.”

“Sounds perfect. See you later.”

After I finished my lunch, I walked over to Skipper's and told him my concerns. He said bring the yacht over and he would handle all my issues this afternoon. That solved a lot of my problems.

Then I took a stroll around the village of Coral Cove looking for all my favorite things. A library, a bookstore, a florist, a coffee shop, a branch of my bank, a jogging path and a peaceful park. These amenities certainly held promise. Maybe I could escape my past and start fresh.

I returned to Skipper's and asked about renting a slip in the marina. The amount was reasonable still I knew to stay I must supplement my savings with a viable income stream. I bounced the idea of chartering out my sail boat or offering sailing lessons off the old salt.

“I think you've got a fabulous idea. She sure is a classic beauty! Some may like to simply step aboard for a tour. No one else offers anything like that here and there should be enough interest with the locals and the tourists.

“Of course, you'll have to have a charter license but that's easily obtained if you have experience.”

“Oh, I have experience!” I assured him. “Do you get a lot of tourists?”

“Not like the big ports. We're tucked away so hard to find which suits some folks fine. How's the new name look to ya?”

“ 'Cataluna' fits it better than 'Endless Honeymoon' don't you agree? Looks great! Thanks.”

“No problem. Used water tanks are emptied, fresh water and fuel filled. Engine checks out fine, too. You're good to go.”

“Thanks so much.” I paid him from my dwindling cash reserves.

That night nestled alone once again into the double bed at the bow of the gently rocking modest yacht with moonbeams shining in though the skylight I thought about my sailing experience. Those two years right after college while I was a struggling journalist with my charming older suitor as he seduced me into believing I was everything he could ever want in a woman. He taught me all the ropes and the knots sailing off of Martha's Vineyard, luring me into an unaccustomed to luxurious lifestyle. Three years of blissful marriage as we sailed the oceans. Then being tossed out like gray water from the holding tanks so he could be with his new plaything. The past months running from him. Yes, of course he gave me sole ownership of the vessel if he never had to see me again. Believe me, somewhere I must have the paperwork proving it is all mine. Now I only wish to put the past behind me and turn his gift into good for the sake of my soul. I can make my living off this beautifully restored aging yacht, somehow. Sure I have experience. Oh, please, Lord, don't let him find me.

Over the next few weeks I cultivated new friends: a writing group meeting at the library, the bookstore owner and some of the customers there, a young barista that made the best coffee, the florist that kept fresh flowers on my dining table whenever I hosted dinner cruises, a handsome jogger, some moms and their children at the park, even people at the laundromat and, of course, Carmen and other waitresses, Crusty, Skipper and a host of sailors and customers.

Yes, Coral Cove proved to be a safe harbor for this sailor with a secret. So far!

Posted Aug 21, 2025
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Thomas Wetzel
22:52 Aug 28, 2025

What's the damn secret??? I know, it's a secret, but still...you can tell me. I won't say anything.

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Mary Bendickson
02:00 Aug 29, 2025

She thinks she is being followed. Does the yacht actually belong to her? Did something nefarious happen to her husband?

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Thomas Wetzel
04:42 Aug 29, 2025

Oh, I assumed all of that. Details, Mary. Details! The Devil is always in the details, and I think you know about my affinity for His Infernal Majesty. (And yes, you have to capitalize it like that. Otherwise its sacrilegious. Lucifer knows how to hold a grudge and I'm not spending any more time than necessary in the lake of fire. Not a big fan of pitchfork-wielding demons either. When you're going where I'm going you gotta play your cards carefully. I'm hoping to be an Underboss Devil or something like that. I want my own pitchfork.)

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Mary Bendickson
12:19 Aug 29, 2025

You'll no doubt earn a golden plated one.😈
Maybe I should have you wrote the sequal.

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LeeAnn Hively
21:32 Aug 27, 2025

You've created a strong sense of place with Coral Cove feeling like the kind of small coastal community where people could genuinely disappear and start fresh. What a lovely read!

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Mary Bendickson
21:43 Aug 27, 2025

Thanks:)

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Susan Gould
20:51 Aug 26, 2025

Once again, Mary givers us a rich setting, interesting characters, and a storyline with a CLIFFHANGER! Great!

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Amelia Brown
03:12 Aug 25, 2025

I really enjoyed how this story blended the practical details of sailing life with the emotional undercurrent of escape and reinvention. The harbour and townsfolk felt welcoming and vivid, but the shadow of Cat’s past gave it just the right tension. A lovely mix of hope and suspense.

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Mary Bendickson
03:31 Aug 25, 2025

Thank you so much. Short on time right now. Will read one of yours soon.

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Rebecca Lewis
17:55 Aug 24, 2025

I like how this story turned out. The setting feels real and cozy — Coral Cove seems like the kind of place Cat would want to start over in. The dialogue with Carmen and Skipper works well too; it doesn’t feel forced, and it lets us see Cat’s situation without her having to spell it all out. I also like the hopeful tone at the end. After all she’s been through, it’s nice to see her building connections and imagining a future. It’s a great start. The place is charming, the main character is likable, and there’s just enough mystery to make me want to know what happens next.

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Mary Bendickson
18:15 Aug 24, 2025

Thanks. Any follow up will depend on prompts.😄

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Helen A Howard
14:43 Aug 23, 2025

A great character and a chance to start afresh. Nicely done, Mary.

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Mary Bendickson
14:52 Aug 23, 2025

Thanks. Where shall we sail to?

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Helen A Howard
14:53 Aug 23, 2025

Somewhere tropical with palm trees 🌴

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Mary Bendickson
15:06 Aug 23, 2025

Yes, please.😍

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Jo Freitag
01:51 Aug 23, 2025

Love it! Thank you for liking my stories too.

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Mary Bendickson
02:08 Aug 23, 2025

Thanks and NP. Got an epic story going on.😄

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