Submitted to: Contest #320

Hidden Paths and Sacred Spaces

Written in response to: "Center your story around a character discovering a hidden door or path."

Adventure Fiction

As children, our imaginations run wild and free, carrying us into worlds of our own design. We slay dragons, sink the game-winning shot, or mix potions that cure every ailment.

For Thomas, that dream world was the dense forest stretching from the edge of his backyard into what felt like infinity. As soon as he was old enough to wander on his own, always with a loyal dog or two at his side, he explored those woods like a seasoned adventurer.

The trees loomed as tall as giants, their roots twisting into labyrinths. Ravines and creek beds carved through the earth as if they were canyons fit for another world.

It was during one of those endless afternoons of exploration that Thomas first noticed it. A narrow break in the undergrowth, so faint it could have been mistaken for where deer slipped through. He’d passed that stretch of woods a hundred times before, but something about it that day tugged at him — a sense that it was waiting.

Curiosity overruled hesitation. With his dog bounding ahead, Thomas pushed through brambles and low branches until the world around him seemed to quiet. The air grew cooler, the light softer, as if the forest itself had shifted.

The path wound deeper than he expected, curling between mossy stones and weaving beneath arching limbs, until it opened suddenly into a hidden clearing.

At its heart lay a pond, perfectly round, its surface still as glass. Sunlight dappled across it in fractured beams, making the water shimmer as though it held its own light. No road or trail map had ever hinted at its existence.

Thomas stood at the edge, heart pounding. It felt as if he’d stumbled onto something meant to remain secret.

And though every instinct urged him to run back and tell someone, his parents, his friends, he didn’t. Something inside whispered that this place was not meant to be shared.

So he kept the pond as his own. His refuge. His secret.

Over the years, as Thomas grew from childhood into adolescence and beyond, the pond remained a secret he guarded close to his chest. It was his refuge, a place that belonged only to him when the rest of the world pressed too hard. A clearing where the noise of school, family, and growing pains couldn’t reach.

He didn’t visit every day. Sometimes weeks would pass before he returned. But without fail, he always found his way back. And whenever he did, the pond seemed to greet him as though no time had passed at all — the water still glassy, the air hushed, the same dragonflies skimming the surface.

On summer afternoons, he would lie in the grass and trace shapes in the clouds while his dog splashed at the edges. In the fall, he watched scarlet leaves drift across the water, catching on the surface before sinking into the depths. In winter, when the woods fell silent and the pond froze into a mirror, he would stand at its edge and imagine what might be sleeping beneath.

No matter how old he grew, the pond felt untouched, eternal — as though it lived outside the bounds of ordinary time.

And though there were moments when he thought of showing someone such as a friend, a crush, even his parents, the idea never sat right. The pond wasn’t meant to be shared. It was meant to be kept.

And so Thomas kept the place his secret, even long after he left his childhood home. Life carried him elsewhere, college, work, friends, relationships, all of it keeping him far from the woods he once knew so well.

But the pond never left him. It lingered in the quiet corners of his mind, rising unbidden in daydreams. He would find himself recalling the long summer days stretched out on its shore, or the sharp crispness of the air as seasons shifted.

He could no longer smell the honeysuckle that drifted each spring, nor feel the cool moss beneath his palms. But memory kept it alive, stubborn and vivid, as if refusing to fade.

Years slipped by. Visits back to his childhood home grew rare — a weekend here, a holiday there — until eventually even those dwindled. The woods became a place of memory more than reality, sealed away in the past.

But then life shifted. His parents were older now, the house quieter. Thomas found himself returning for longer stretches to help with repairs, or simply to be present. On those visits, the forest always tugged at him, though he told himself he’d never find that hidden path again. Too much had changed. The trees would have swallowed it whole.

Or so he thought.

One autumn morning, leash in hand, he set out with his dog along the familiar tree line. The air carried the sharp tang of leaves and earth, the forest alive with the chatter of jays. He hadn’t gone far before something in the undergrowth caught his eye, a break in the green, narrow and winding, almost invisible unless you were looking for it.

He stopped. His heart skipped.

It couldn’t be.

But his dog tugged eagerly forward, nose low to the ground, as if he knew the way.

And just like that, Thomas was ten years old again, standing at the mouth of a secret trail that had waited all these years.

Thomas stood at the mouth of the trail, his dog already nosing into the brush ahead. Excitement rose in his chest, sharp and boyish, the same rush he used to feel when he’d first dared to step beyond his backyard fence. He almost laughed at himself, here he was, a grown man, heart racing at the thought of a forgotten path in the woods.

But something deeper pressed at him too, a tug low in his ribs, steady as a heartbeat. As if the trail itself was calling him forward.

He hesitated, glancing back at the open yard behind him. It had been decades since he’d last walked this way. Trees grew, trails faded. Places he swore he’d never forget had vanished with time. And yet this one… this one was here, waiting.

Skepticism needled at him. Maybe it only looked familiar. Maybe nostalgia was playing tricks. But the moment his boots pressed into the narrow track, a current seemed to run through him, undeniable and strange.

The dog pulled ahead, tail wagging, unbothered by the thorns and shadows. Thomas followed, breath quick, the woods growing quieter the deeper they went. Just as it had in his memory.

And when the trees finally broke, and the clearing opened before him, he saw it — the pond.

Exactly as he remembered.

The surface lay still as glass, reflecting the canopy overhead. Sunlight pierced through gaps in the branches, scattering gold across the water. The air smelled faintly of honeysuckle, though he knew the season had long since passed.

Thomas stopped at the edge, chest tight. It was impossible. No pond should look this unchanged after all these years.

And yet it did.

Despite his earlier skepticism, Thomas felt as though the pond was welcoming him back like an old friend. With each breath of cool, leaf-scented air, the weight of the years seemed to slip from his shoulders.

He unclipped the lead from his dog’s collar and gave a small nod of permission. Normally the animal would have bounded straight into the water, but today he paused, sniffing the air, taking in the clearing with the same reverence Thomas felt. At last, the dog waded in joyfully, splashing up to his chest before turning back with bright eyes, as if to share the moment.

Thomas couldn’t help but smile. He let his feet carry him slowly around the edge, drinking in every detail. The trees that had once been saplings now towered over the pond, branches heavy with the first orange leaves of fall. The familiar crunch underfoot stirred memories so sharp he almost ached with them.

But it wasn’t just memory. There was something else here, something waiting to be found.

As Thomas circled the pond, his hand brushed the rough bark of a maple, its trunk thickened since his boyhood. Something caught his eye. Faint lines, smoothed by weather but still visible. He leaned closer.

Carved into the bark were initials, neat and deliberate: J.R.

Not his own.

He traced them with a fingertip, frowning. He’d been so sure he was the only one who knew this place, the only one who had ever claimed it. But the cuts were old, older than he was. Whoever had made them had stood right here once, feeling the same tug he felt now.

As he stepped back, a glint caught his eye in the hollow at the tree’s base. Kneeling, he reached into the dark space, fingers brushing something cool and solid. He pulled free an old pocketknife, its handle worn smooth, its blade rusted but intact.

It wasn’t his. He’d never owned a knife like this, not one this heavy, this old-fashioned. The design was simple, nothing modern about it, as though it had been carried by someone decades ago.

Thomas turned it over in his palm, unease prickling along his skin. The knife seemed impossibly out of place — and yet, at the same time, it felt like it belonged here, like it had been waiting for him.

Behind him, his dog barked once at the still water, then went quiet.

Thomas closed the blade gently and looked back at the initials on the tree.

Maybe the pond had never been his secret after all.

Thomas sank onto a fallen log, the pocketknife heavy in his hand. The initials on the tree across the pond caught the fading light, and he wondered who J.R. had been. Someone like him, maybe — a boy who found the place by chance, then grew into a man who never forgot it.

It struck him that the pond wasn’t just his refuge. It had been that for others, too. A place outside of time, waiting to be discovered when it was needed most.

He stood and chose a tree near the water’s edge, the bark smooth and unmarked. With steady hands, he carved his initials, the letters shallow but clear. His dog padded up beside him, watching silently as if recognizing the gravity of the act.

When he was done, Thomas knelt by the hollow at the tree’s base. He placed his own pocketknife inside — newer, lighter, with a bit of wear from years of use. He closed it carefully, as though tucking away part of himself, and left it there. A gift. A marker. A hope that whoever came next would feel the same peace, the same belonging.

He took one last look at the pond, its surface still and shining, before turning back toward the path.

Some secrets weren’t meant to be kept. They were meant to be carried on.

Posted Sep 14, 2025
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