1 February 2024
Dear Diary,
Today, I picked out my wedding dress. In the blinding ivories and lily whites in silk, lace, taffeta, and tulle, I transformed into a bride.
Then again, from the very moment I met him, I knew I was meant to walk down a flower-lined aisle towards Florian’s tearful earth brown eyes. As soon as he extended his hand, the aquarelle rows of vibrant blooms at the Keukenhof Tulip Gardens seemed to fade in colour. At that moment, the only thing planted in the soil of my memories of my holiday in the Netherlands was his quip about the copy of the Secret Garden in my hands and his sunbeam smile. When he asked me out for coffee, every word scrupulously chosen like hands tending to a seedling, it was so easy for me to say yes.
And now, I’ve chosen the sumptuous gown signifying the ripening of our love. I don’t know what he’d say about this frothy blush masterpiece, honestly. (I do hope he calls me ‘My Peony’ again.). All I know is my desire to marry this man can never be uprooted.
In the budding of her future,
Bryony
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1 February 2024
Dear Diary,
Today, I got my suit fit, a navy three-piece number on the lapel of which I plan to pin a single peony. All that sprouts in my thoughts, though, is imagination-painted pictures of Bryony in her frock; just how will the woman who perfumes my world with her kind cornflower eyes and butterfly wing touches enrapture me as she walks towards an altar?
The memory of us locking gazes on each other is as fresh as yesterday morning’s dewdrops for me. Oh, how my friends back home in Paris found my decision to start a medical practice in Amsterdam as confusing as an overgrown shrub. However, all doubts about moving, all thorns pricking at my will dissolved as soon as I spotted that lovely tourist in the lavender sundress. Just one hello in that spring breeze of an English accent and a seed of love and happiness was buried deep in me.
If I were a sunflower, Bryony would be the morning rays. I truly need her light to make my life verdant.
Happily lost in a rainforest of love,
Florian
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20 May 2024
Dear Diary,
You know what? I might actually go ahead and pick out that lemon elderflower cheesecake from the tasting when we head back to the baker’s. After all, that bright, mellow taste reminds me of the meadows of Bryony’s beauty.
Gosh, once more, my consciousness travels to that cloudless afternoon at The Garden Café in Soho. The bright murals of large, golden daffodils on the walls withered in my eyes compared to the warm blue regard and the cheeky grin blossoming on her lips as she urged me to try her favourite citrus pie. As I smiled to show her my approval, nectar seemed to flow from Bryony’s countenance. Three hours of us two droning on and on like bees about nothing and everything passed, yet none of us noticed.
Oh, the thought of her clinging on to me like ivy in bed brings about a potpourri of gladness in my heart right now.
Drinking in the honey-sweet thoughts of Bryony’s presence,
Florian
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20 May 2024
Dear Diary,
You know what? I might actually go ahead and pick out those rose and pistachio macarons for the sweets buffet when we head back to the baker’s. After all, that heady, rich aroma ties me to Florian’s gentle soul.
Oh, what would I give to transport myself back to that honeycomb moon of that Parisian night. From the moment Florian picked me up from my hotel, a sprig of cheekiness floating in those cocoa pools he stared at me with, I knew that I could walk across a treacherous jungle to have a repeat of his petal-soft voice thoughtfully pointing out every landmark on the métro. When we arrived at a little pâtisserie whose jewel-toned walls made me recall a poppy field, he simply nodded and out came a small millefeuille cake. When I took a bite, the rosewater hit my tongue and attempted to transport me to Versailles greens. However, it was no match for the way Florian cupped my cheeks as if it were the most delicate lotus and planted a soft kiss on my mouth.
To think I’m this close to savouring those efflorescent kisses forever brings a drizzling of tears on my cheeks now.
Hungry for Florian’s kisses to make tenderness burgeon in me,
Bryony
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19 October 2024
Dear Diary,
I was practically crowned the Queen of All Fields today at my hen do. However, why is it that all I wanted was just ten minutes of just gazing at my Florian, a bundle of asters in his hand and those brown eyes misty?
As soon as I opened the door to Ivy’s flat, I was welcomed by the scent of jasmine and my friends in marigold frocks hugging me. A silver tiara with jewel-encrusted gardenias on my head, the girls and I bonded with games, movies, and sips of that moscato I liked with the spritely bouquet.
And yet, all that time, my insides were a desert craving for the refreshing showers of Florian’s embrace. Just how I managed to appear solid as pine whilst away from my love, I do not know.
Just a couple of months until he and I meet at the altar, I suppose.
Wilting without my Florian,
Bryony
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19 October 2024
Dear Diary,
Just what is this sensation of my heart feeling like a daisy, its mane of white stripped off by grubby hands, even in the middle of my stag do? I suppose it’s further proof that only Bryony and the way every move of hers is perfumed in delight are what can make joy stand tall, mighty as an oak.
The lads had prepared an afternoon at Le Chrysanthème Bar today. Gosh, how they made me consume pints and pints of ale made my mouth taste of nothing but barley and hops. Then, us olive-shirted mates watched a play at the newly-opened Théâtre de la Tulipe Jaune, the actors budding with promise.
All of that meticulously planned fun could have been buried in the soil, though, as the entire time I wished I were a vine crawling my way to Bryony’s side. How did I ever pretend inside me, there wasn’t tumbleweed blowing inside? I’ll never know.
Florian, just you wait. You will see her as a bride in just a few months.
Feeling as if weeds choked me,
Florian
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13 February 2025
Dear Diary,
Tomorrow is my wedding day. Tomorrow, I shall shame a garden hose with the copious amount of tears that shall flow as I see my Bryony in white, a gossamer veil embroidered with peonies covering her beautiful face. It’s actually happening!
It seems like only yesterday that she dyed my soul in the indelible indigo of her colours all the way in the Netherlands. Now, I’m only a day away from basking in the dahlia glow of bewitchment at that first bridal smile. I shall take her hand, gently as a lily, and slip on that gold band with the words ‘You make my heart bloom’ engraved on the inside. Oh, how I await for the minister to declare her my wife, the only blossom I will cherish and nurture.
Now, our future shall grow strong and proud like the towering trees of the Black Forest. We shall build a cosy home, one where I’ll hold her hand whilst she sips the chamomile tea I’d prepare for her every morning. Our love shall bear fruit; how I yearn for a little floret of a girl bearing her Mummy’s cornflower eyes and showering me with butterfly kisses. We will marinate in la vie en rose until it is time to return to the ground like autumn leaves.
Oh, tomorrow can’t come soon enough.
With excitement taking root,
Florian
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13 February 2025
Dear Diary,
Am I really going to be a bride tomorrow? Just the thought and a well of tears, enough to irrigate a field, begins to form.
How did we get here, from the tulip fields near Amsterdam to the lush greens of a future with Florian? As I await the day I take step after step on an aisle lined with calla lilies, a ds, and peonies, the rainforest of my mind yawns with images of our future.
Oh, how it thrills me to picture us tending to a dinky backyard where we’d grow the herbs we’d cook together. How it thrills me to picture a darling daughter, a new branch in our family tree, with Florian’s ebony curls and earthen regard (although, he would probably insist our children look like me). How it thrills me to picture a joyous life firmly rooted by Florian’s side, ready to face the rains and the droughts of existence with him.
One more day, and he will be in front of that altar.
Flourishing at the thought of marriage with my darling,
Bryony
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The Woodgrove Gardens
Events:
Carnation Garden: Florian Dupré - Sandra Weedlam Nuptials -
Hyacinth Garden: Pierre Rocher - Bryony Greendale Nuptials
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14 February 2025
Dear Diary,
I’m married… and so is Florian. Through the little gaps in the hedges of the Hyacinth Garden, I had to watch him beam like a pure stream of sunlight on blades of grass. Meanwhile, my heart just about shrivelled up like a plant without water.
Beautiful Sandra with her eyes the colour of the Amazon standing out against the snowdrop white of her gown. Beautiful Sandra and her voice, sweet as vanilla. Of course, my best mate would choose her to offer a lifetime of bouquets to. Why did I ever water that tiny sprig of hope that he’d see me?
Oh well. At least, in my imagination, it’s me who gets to entwine myself to him like a vine.
With insides withering,
Bryony
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14 February 2025
Dear Diary,
I’m married… and so is Bryony. She was so beautiful in that little glimpse I had of her before she went into her wedding venue, as if she’s the most fragrant of all the flowers.
She’s Pierre’s peony now. I don’t blame my best friend, though. Golden waves the colour of fresh wheat, a smile that would rival the most delectable honey, a deep desire to nurture her like a rare camellia – of course, she’d choose Pierre. Why did I ever water that tiny sprig of hope that she’d see me?
Oh well. At least, in my imagination, it’s me who gets to entwine myself to her like a vine.
In an eternal dry spell,
Florian
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Such mastery of imagery and romantic longing expression. Alexis, you really know how a hopeless romantic thinks and gets lost in their own fantasies. Sometimes the fantasy of another is all that can fuel us when true love yet escapes our grasps.
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Hi, Maxwell! I'm so happy you liked the longing and romance. I admit to being an unapologetic romantic, so there's that. Hahahaha! Thanks for reading!
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Your garden of flowery descriptions supports the theme and flair of this story very well! I'm impressed by how many floral/plant-like metaphors you were able to embed in the writing. The ending was unexpected and had me combing back through for any hints that they would not be choosing each other. I wonder if a subtle phrase or two of foreshadowing might make the ending hit more powerfully?
Great job with the creative and rich language. Your bright personality certainly comes through :)
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Hi, lovely Aeris! I'm beyond thrilled you liked the descriptions. I...may have a thing for flowers (not growing them, but admiring them). Hahahaha! As for the twist, perhaps, I should have added a tiny clue. Thank you for reading!
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Hey Alexis,
Entwined Flowers was absolutely beautiful—and heartbreaking in the best way. I loved how the floral imagery tied everything together so gently, and that ending completely caught me off guard. Such a moving piece. Really well done!
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Hi, Elizabeta! So happy the emotions resonated with you and you liked the imagery. For some reason, when I saw the prompt, I thought of two people deeply in love with each other but don't get to say how they feel. Since one of my dreams is to get married in a city park, the flowers came to mind too. I'm thrilled you liked the story. Thank you for reading!
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Oh my, the twist certainly got to me! How bittersweet. lovely imagery.
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Hi, Kayla! So happy you liked the twist and the imagery. Thank you for reading!
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Wonderful flowery imagery as always, I knew there was a twist coming, and this was better than some of the others I imagined ;)
Great story!
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Hi, Marty! What can I say? I do like torturing my protagonists in love. Hahaha! I'm happy you liked the imagery. Thanks for reading!
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So glad to see you writing again. Excellent work!
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Hi, Jim! I've been quite busy, I know. Actually, I have been writing still. Just not here. Thank you for reading!
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Fine move with this entry, it seems as if one story ran the world week, no other thing within the week? They say variation is spice of life. Fine work.
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Thank you, Philip! It's good to be bac!
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Sure.
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Alexis...I kept checking to see when your story would show up! As soon as I saw the prompt, I knew this was going to be your jam, and I was dying to see what you'd written. This was a beautiful and heartbreaking story. You didn't disappoint. Truly enjoyed! Loved all the flowers--very evocative. Nice work!
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Hi, Elizabeth! Well, I do love my epistolary format! Hahaha! I'm so happy you liked the story and found it beautiful. Thank you for reading!
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I like the way you combined the story as a two dairy perspective. 😁
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Hi, Lou! I'm so happy you liked the dual perspective. Thanks for reading!
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Ich gebe dem Holländer die Schuld! He should have tried harder!
Between you and Trudy Jas I am going to gain like 7 pounds of pastry weight due to your stories this week. Maybe next week you guys can write some stories centered around kale salads?
Great story, Alexis. As always.
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Mais, ben, ils ont cru que l'autre était amoureux d'un autre. Hahahaha! Je blague !
Hahahaha! Sorry for the vivid pastry description. Glad you liked the story, though!
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Do we have to go to war over the Rheinland again? He should have tried harder!
Next week maybe you and Trudy can write stories about intermittent fasting? I am easily influenced. Not a lot going on upstairs here.
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Unexpected twist at the end. However, you nailed it with the diary entries. Perfect! The descriptions of the food and flowers! I tasted and smelled at the same time!
Good job.
Thanks for taking time to read mine!
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Hi, LJ! Glad you liked the way I used the diary prompt and found the imagery vivid. Thanks for reading!
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Wonderful! Packed full of floral metaphor and description, beautifully told. Sad twist to the end but you never know, it might happen one day! Lovely writing as usual Alexis!
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Hi, Penelope! So very happy you liked the metaphor and description. You know I agonise over my imagery. Who knows? Maybe, Bryony and Florian's love will one day bloom. Thanks for the read!
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There’s a wistfulness to the diary entries, a longing that comes across. Beautiful imagery. So near and yet so far. Unexpectedly sad ending. A good thing as I think it makes the story richer.
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Hi, Helen! I'm happy that longing came through in the piece. You know me. Emotions are paramount to me when writing a story. I'm glad you liked the ending too. Thanks for reading!
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Unsurpassed in all the flowery details and descriptions but who could have guessed they were meant for others.
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Hi, Mary! You know I love my little unrequited love stories. Glad you liked the details. Thanks for reading!😊
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Beautiful imagery. Loved the twist, which made the expected quite unpredictable.
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!Thank you so much, Linda!😊
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All I can say is: What happened? I was already to see these two compatible people walk hand-in-hand into the sunset and they both say: Oh, well.
Oh, well.... c'est la vie.
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What happened? Just me and my love of unrequited love stories. Hahaha! Thank you for reading!
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LOL. Of course, almost forgot.
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Like the prompt was just for you :) Wonderful, vibrant imagery and excellent use of mirroring language to bring these two not quite close enough
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Hahaha ! I couldn't resist the prompt! I'm happy you liked the story. Thank you for reading!
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Hi Alexis, I'm reading along and then I saw the words, "I suppose," and I thought, "Uh-oh." What a great foreshadow that something is up. That created tension and foreboding. I really liked how the Bryony and Florian's diary entries each started the same, "Today" and "You know what," etc. Clever and intriguing. It made me wonder if the diary was going to become a character because it knows all. The diary entries became an unreliable narrator as Bryony longed to marry her darling, an interesting twist that we don't figure out till BAM we see the event board. What a twist! Thanks for the beautiful imagery throughout and then the amazing ending. ~Kristy
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Hi, Kristy! It is true that I tend to favour the 'All is well until it's not' kind of plot. Ooh, I love the idea of the diary being a character! I'm very happy you liked the story. Thank you for reading!
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