Submitted to: Contest #293

This is the valley of Whispering Stones

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with someone looking out a car or train window."

Adventure Fiction

Please close your eyes for a moment. Truly, shut them tight, and let me guide you through a world you can’t see but can feel, hear, and perhaps even taste. This is the valley of Whispering Stones, and I want you to experience it as vividly as if the sun were warming your face.

Imagine first the air. It's thick, not heavy, but laden with the scent of sun-baked earth and wild thyme. The wind carries a sweetness that clings to the back of your throat, a hint of wild berries ripening on thorny bushes. In the early mornings, a damp coolness rises from the river, carrying the earthy smell of moss and river stones worn smooth by centuries of rushing water. Feel it on your skin—a gentle coolness that quickly surrenders to the warmth of the day.

Now, picture this valley not as a flat expanse but as a cradle, a gentle dip in the earth held in the arms of towering, ancient peaks. These aren’t jagged, hostile mountains, but old, weathered giants, their slopes softened by time and covered in a tapestry of textures.

Reach out your hand. Imagine running it along the base of one of these mountains. The lower slopes are covered in a thick carpet of heather and gorse. Feel the springy resistance of the heather, the tiny, needle-like leaves tickling your palm. The gorse, even without its vibrant yellow flowers, announces itself with its sharp, prickly thorns. Be careful, but don't shy away. It's a reminder that even in beauty, there can be a touch of defiance.

As you move upwards, the heather gives way to rougher grasses and patches of exposed rock. The texture changes, becoming colder, harder. Imagine the rough, granular feel of granite beneath your fingertips, the tiny crystals catching the light even though your eyes are closed. Feel the lines etched into the stone by wind and rain—the story of the mountain written in the language of touch.

Higher still, the rock becomes dominant. The wind here is stronger and more insistent, whipping around the peaks, carving out hollows, and shaping the stone into fantastical forms. Listen to the wind. It's not a constant roar, but a chorus of whispers. Sometimes it sighs through the crags, a deep, mournful sound. Other times, it shrieks and whistles, a playful dance among the peaks.

At the very summit, there is only ice and snow, hard and unforgiving. Imagine the biting cold that emanates from those icy peaks, a stark contrast to the warmth of the valley floor. You can almost taste the purity of the air, crisp and clean, untouched by the world below.

Now, let us descend back into the valley. Imagine walking through a field of tall grasses. Feel the tickle of the seed heads against your legs, the way the grass bends and sways in the breeze, creating a rustling symphony. Listen to the buzzing of bees, drunk on the nectar of wildflowers hidden among the grasses. Can you smell the sweetness of the honeysuckle that climbs the ancient oak trees bordering the field?

In the heart of the valley, a river winds its way through the landscape like a silver ribbon. Step closer. Dip your hand into the water. It's surprisingly cold, even in the summer heat. Feel the smooth, rounded stones beneath your feet, worn smooth by the constant flow of water. Listen to the babbling of the river, a constant, soothing melody that fills the valley with its song. It chatters and gurgles over the stones, occasionally plunging into deeper pools where the water runs dark and silent.

Imagine the sounds of the valley. The constant rush of the river, the rustling of the wind through the trees, the buzzing of insects, the distant bleating of sheep grazing on the hillsides. And then, the silence. A profound, all-encompassing silence that settles over the valley in the twilight hours. In that silence, you can almost hear the earth breathing, the ancient stones whispering their secrets.

Scattered throughout the valley are clusters of trees. Not dense forests, but groves of ancient oaks and willows, their branches gnarled and twisted by the wind. Feel the rough bark of the oak, the deep furrows and ridges that tell of centuries of growth. Imagine the shade beneath the canopy, a cool, dark refuge from the midday sun.

The willows, on the other hand, are softer and more graceful. Their branches weep towards the river, their leaves rustling like silk in the breeze. Feel the smooth, supple branches and the delicate leaves that brush against your skin.

Imagine the colours of this valley, not with your eyes but with your other senses. The deep green of the grasses, the vibrant yellow of the gorse, the silver of the river, the grey of the ancient stones. These colours are not just visual sensations, but textures, sounds, and smells that blend together to create a complete sensory experience.

Think about the dwellings in this valley. They are not grand or imposing, but humble and unassuming, built from the same stone as the mountains themselves. Feel the rough texture of the stone walls and the solid weight of the slate roof. Imagine the warmth of the fire burning in the hearth, the smell of wood smoke mingling with the scent of baking bread.

And finally, imagine the people who live in this valley. They are hard-working and resilient, their lives shaped by the rhythms of the seasons. Feel the calloused hands of the farmer and the gentle touch of the shepherd tending his flock. Listen to their voices, the lilting accents that echo through the valley.

The valley of Whispering Stones is more than just a landscape; it’s a feeling, a memory, an experience. It’s the feeling of the wind on your face, the smell of wildflowers in the air, the sound of the river flowing over the stones. It's a place where the senses come alive, where the world can be experienced in all its richness and complexity, even without sight.

Now, open your eyes. Does the world around you seem different? Perhaps you can now appreciate the textures, the sounds, the smells that you might have overlooked before. You have glimpsed the Valley of Whispering Stones, not with your eyes but with your heart. And perhaps, in doing so, you have discovered a new way of seeing. Maybe you can now truly see the world for the first time. The valley remains, waiting for you to return, whenever you close your eyes and listen to the whispers. It is a place where sight is not necessary and where feeling is far more profound.

Posted Mar 10, 2025
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