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Submitted into Contest #55 in response to: Write a story about an old family secret surfacing generations later.... view prompt
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You have quite an imagination and a knack for writing adventurous type genre. My recommendations echo the comments from Mustang Patty regarding sentence and paragraph structure. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! It is much appreciated.
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Hi there, A sad tale, and a familiar theme in this week's contest. So many grandparents had deep, dark secrets. I did notice some errors in sentence and paragraph structure, as well as issues with the comma. Just a few techniques I think you could use to take your writing to the next level: READ the piece OUT LOUD. You will be amazed at the errors you will find as you read. You will be able to identify missing and overused words. It is also possible to catch grammatical mistakes – such as missing or extra commas if you read with ...
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Thank you so much for the feedback! I will definitely check out your website and would love to read a few of your stories!
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