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Submitted to: Contest #55
Written in response to: "Write a story about an old family secret surfacing generations later."
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You have quite an imagination and a knack for writing adventurous type genre. My recommendations echo the comments from Mustang Patty regarding sentence and paragraph structure. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! It is much appreciated.
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Hi there,
A sad tale, and a familiar theme in this week's contest. So many grandparents had deep, dark secrets.
I did notice some errors in sentence and paragraph structure, as well as issues with the comma.
Just a few techniques I think you could use to take your writing to the next level:
READ the piece OUT LOUD. You will be amazed at the errors you will find as you read. You will be able to identify missing and overused words. It is also possible to catch grammatical mistakes – such as missing or extra commas if you read with emphasis on punctuation. (If you use Word, there is an option to ‘Read Aloud,’ in later versions.)
Next, at a minimum, use some form of spell-check. While it is true that spell check only looks for misspelled words, and not incorrect word choices, it helps eliminate basic mistakes. *
Grammarly has a free version. Using the free program forces you to learn the basics because it is not foolproof. If you struggle with sentence structure and word choice, this is a good step for you to incorporate into your editing routine. (The upgrade to Grammarly costs about $100, but it can be customized for your needs.)
My website, www.mustangpatty1029.com, deals with information for new writers, grammar, and the short story.
I suggest using a Style Guide - the most widely used is the Chicago Manual of Style - available in hard copy or an online version, but a good, inexpensive book to have on hand is ‘Elements of Style 2017.’ It’s well organized and tackles many of the problems I mentioned.
Thank you for sharing and above all - KEEP WRITING!!
~MP~
*If you would be interested, I'm currently taking short stories from new writers for publication in an Anthology - due to come out in late November. Check out my website, www.mustangpatty1029.com for details.
~MP~
PS: Would you mind reading one or two of my stories? I would love to have your feedback.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! I will definitely check out your website and would love to read a few of your stories!
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