"Beautiful,"
whisper the stars
"You are beautiful."
"But how can you say that?"
I whisper back.
"Because, child, it is the truth,"
the stars sing into my ears.
"Surely-- surely you are more beautiful than I?"
I ask, my words carried on the wind to the heavens.
"Nay, we are but lights in the sky,
lights that disappear,"
they laugh, their voices soaring through the night.
"But you are so beautiful, so bright, so- so..."
I am at loss for words,
unable to express their beauty.
"We only come out at night,
and sometimes we are not there,"
the stars tell me, as if they know
something that I don't.
"I know that, but people still love you."
I tell them, crestfallen, for I know
something they do not.
"Ugly."
"Stupid."
"Dumb."
"Trash."
Words that hurt, words that sting,
Swirling in the air around me.
"Useless."
"Dramatic."
"Self-centered."
"Clumsy."
"Child, why do you keep thinking of those words?"
the stars ask, concerned.
"How did you know I was thinking of them?"
I reply, startled.
"We know your heart, love, we know your heart,"
they say, voices blending into one.
"Don't listen to people who can't show kindness,"
the stars tell me, their voices smooth and soothing.
"You are a beautiful light, brighter than any other,"
they whisper comfortingly.
"N-no I'm not.
I'm not beautiful.
I'm not a light,"
I cry, my voice cracking and trembling.
"You do not believe us?
Then we will show you."
Suddenly the sky is bright,
The stars shine like candles,
And I am swept off my feet.
"Where are you taking me?"
I cry, scared and shaking.
"We are making you the
brightest star in the world,
the one that everyone
will see no matter what,"
the stars sing with voices like angels.
"But how?
How will I be the brightest star?
I'm not good enough,"
I tell them, my mind full of doubt.
"Yes you are, child.
You were born for this.
This is your destiny,"
they sing to me, as they place me among them.
I can see the whole world,
All the planets and other stars.
I look down to see that I am glowing.
"What's happened to me?
Why am I here?
Why am I like this?"
I ask, my voice filled with fear.
The stars laugh, a tinkling, bell-like sound.
"You, child, are the North Star.
People will look to you for an eternity.
And do you know why?"
I shake my head.
"It is because you are beautiful."
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You managed to convey a lot, very compelling. The star's and the child's conversation is superb. Such a beautiful poem, loved it!
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:) Thank you so much for reading it and for giving me feedback! I'm glad you liked it!
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My pleasure, Missa. Beautiful name btw
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😊 thank you, it's just one of my many nicknames, along with Mis, Miss Mis Missa, Rissa, SaSa, Salsa, Rice, and the newly appointed one, Ritz.
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You've got so many cool nicknames! Man, that's my dream (don't worry I've got many other strange dreams haha)
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Thank you! I came up with all of them except Miss Mis Missa, Mis, Rissa, and SaSa. Which is pretty much just three. I'm pretty sure I have more, but i can't remember them. And I'm a pro at nicknames, if I do say so myself, so I could give you some! (and I'm worrying- not about your dreams, but about mine. i've had plenty of strange dreams, perhaps stranger than yours!)
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Awwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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=D (how else are you supposed to respond to "awwww!!!!"?)
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With an AWWWWWWWWWW? Idk...;)
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hmmm, maybe.... or ig i did ok, since you responded :)
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Yeah you did!
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:) my blog is all messed up now TvT I changed the theme bc I didn't like how the other theme was full page, and now I don't know what to do 😭😭😭
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New story with YOUR character!
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Hey Missa. :)
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Hey missa! This was such a beautiful story that really brought a smile to my face. I love the way you formatted the story in a poem like script and the elegance of your writing style is unmistakable! I especially admire the line “‘You, child, are the North Star. People will lookto you for eternity.’” It’s so poetic and beautifully done! Can’t wait to read more of what you have to write :D -liv
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girl i listened to your voice recording!! YOU ARE SO GOOD LIKE WHAT
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👓📖👍 Amazing poem, you never cease to amaze me Missa.
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