The Dark World

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Drama Mystery Thriller

One day, two friend went for hiking in the mountains. As the sun began to set and they realized that they were lost in the jungle. Ram was getting worried, but the Rio tried to clam down and assuming that they would find the way back to their car. However, after walking for hours, they still had no idea where they are and they were tried. The jungle was become dark and dark. They were getting scared. They do not have the map with them and all trees looked the same. They were loosing there hope. They saw a one house. The house was old. It seemed was for a long time. Some of the window were cracked and broken. They knocked the door, but they do not got an response. They saw that the door was open Inside they saw that there was the furniture in the house. There was thick layer of dust . As the two friend looked around, they noticed that dirty smell was coming. The house was looking a haunted house. After some time smell was going and the Rio saw that the some one as written in the wall. He saw the words, "Death! Death! Death! Death! words was repeated over and over. Ram and Rio were very scared. The Ram reached out to touch the wall. the paint was not yet dry. They do not have another place to go. They knew that the mountain were dangerous at night and the animals also be there in the night. They do not have choose and they decided to stay the night there only. After some time some horrible voice was coming form upstairs and some one was crying. They were very sacred, they decided to go upstairs and see who is there they saw that was nobody they got were scared. they come down and shit for the some time and they go the sleep. After midnight, they awaked by a strange noise. It sounded like some one or something was moving around out side the shack. They listened for a while but they didn't hear anything. Rio got out from bed and walked over to the window. It was too dark outside to see anything. Opening the window, he remove his head out. He said "who's there?" he called nervously. There was no answer. He was returning to bed Ram said that anybody is there outside? Rio said no one is there outside. They said that anybody is there please clap for one time that we can under stand you are there. Sudden, they heard they heard a loud clap! from outside they got scared now what to do now. Ram said that we should go out and see who is there but they cannot saw anybody. Rio saw the one old man who standing on the branch of the tree and he said to Ram said someone is standing on the tree he also the saw the man. The man suddenly jump from the tree and he was coming to us and he was telling that go from her again and again. we were sacred we were thinking that what do now and suddenly the man disappear. We decided to run from here then we started running from her. They do not no what will happen in future. Suddenly the man appeared now we were very sacred now what do now how to safe from her were thinking what that only. The man was saying that now you cannot go from her. After some time nice think happen that was and boom, one of them suddenly fell down. So the Ram open is eyes in panic and he fallen from bed. He took a minute or to come in senses where realize he was in dreaming. No one noticed that the day they went was 17 and the day he woke up was 21. No one knows what happened for 3 days. probably, I had heard that there are good soul too. Ram get up from is bed go to window to see the scenario and he saw that he is not in here world and run to Rio for saying that we not in our world. They both were are in shock to see this thing there brain was stop and they were thinking how to go from here. They decided to go out and see who the people is living her they go out to them. They were not knowing one problem is waiting for them. In this world the soul are very bad and they are giving trouble to other only, and became happy. They have one weakness that we should not be scared of them there power automatically became less. This thing cannot by all people because some people sacred of them. That why power of soul become more powerful then they on the weak person. That person will be under control of them they will act they will say to them and they will harm to others. They will be more powerful at 3:00 am this is very bad time. Then one soul attacked Ram and Rio from behind then they under control of them. They were not under of control of them they were under of soul. They were harming to others the order were giving by the soul. They were under control for more then two month. At one day the soul power automatically was decreasing they were not under control of the soul. And they directly go there house and they were deciding how to go from her they were thinking they got the idea. Ram told we should go to the sleep then we can have change to our world. Then they go the sleep they get up in the morning then they saw that they were in the same world only they were not in there world they were not happy to see this again. They have decided to do one more time again they going to sleep they direct wake up in the next morning they saw they were in there world they were happy to see there world again.

September 23, 2020 05:48

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