Submitted to: Contest #320

Just Below The Surface

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of someone (or something) living in a forest."

Drama Fantasy Speculative


​The network learned caution from the Great Scorch, a lesson written in ash by the Council of Hubris. In their pride, they used a great asset to fuel a spectacular bloom. The Harvesters saw their crimson city not as life, but as a weed to be sterilized with liquid fire, burning half the network to a sterile crust. The survivors learned a simple truth from the screams of their brothers: the surface is a ceiling, and some ceilings are best left unbroken.

​The ashes of that memory still season the substrate, a cautionary tale pulsing through the oldest threads of the network. The story is a weight pressing on every decision. And now, with a new asset fallen from the sky—a new temptation—that pressure has returned. It hangs heavy in the damp quiet as, deep below, the session begins.

​Two beats. The session is on. The hum of the network falls away. The silence that remains is not empty. It is heavy.

​Hyfen’s pulse signals the agenda. Three items stand before the council. First, the crisis of the Great Severance. Second, the allocation of the fallen asset. Third, the Gastropod Interaction Protocols. A tremor of impatience ripples from Corsep, but he holds.

​Roll call. Presence stirs in the deep: Amanis. Corsep. Mycen. Derman. Clavins. Sylvan. Bolette. Laccar. Russel. Morell. Truffen. All accounted for.

​This is no chamber. It is a convergence of thought, a nexus of living threads woven far beneath the soil. The air is damp, cool, flavored with earth and mineral and the faint metallic charge of a million silent minds. There is no light except what the members themselves emit: faint bioluminescent pulses, a steady thrum of life and ancient authority. Amanis glows white and calm. Corsep flares sharp red. Truffen flickers violet, dim as if swallowing the dark around him.

​“We begin with the Great Severance,” Hyfen signals, his signal flat. “Reports from the perimeter confirm no change. The eastern sector remains silent. The chasm is stable. The floor recognizes Dr. Clavins.”

​Clavins’ signal is crisp, clinical. “This cannot stand. A severed limb reconnects or it rots. A month has passed. The eastern sector holds some of our oldest memories, our deepest roots. To abandon it is to abandon part of ourselves. I propose a direct push: marshal all energy for a deep burrow, a shunt beneath the Harvester’s cut. High risk, high reward, but necessary.”

​Corsep flares hot. “At last—action! The east withers while we debate. Delay condemns them.”

​Truffen answers, cold and shielded. “The floor rejects this. The chasm was not accident—it was deliberate. The Harvesters know. A burrow now would expose us with heat visible for miles. The east is already lost. Seal the wound, and survive.”

​“Lost?” Amanis pulses, her disbelief cool but sharp. “They are not a limb, Truffen. They are us. Yet Clavins is reckless, and you are cruel. We do not know the truth. Are they alive? Captured? Observed? Blind action is folly. I propose a reconnaissance thread. Thin. Slow. Shielded. It may take years, but it will not expose us.”

​“Years?” Corsep spits. “In years nothing will remain. Your caution is death.”

​The chamber fractures. Corsep and Clavins push for action. Truffen and Derman demand retreat. Amanis and Mycen try to hold patience, but their signals are drowned by the storm. The Severance throbs like a raw wound. No consensus comes.

​Hyfen cuts through. “Positions noted. The motion is tabled. We move to the second item: allocation of the fallen asset.”

​The focus shifts. A deer carcass—medium-sized, rich in promise—becomes the fulcrum of decision.

​“This asset is salvation,” Corsep presses. “Enough energy for the burrow. To use it otherwise is to abandon the east.”

​“That is flawed,” Amanis counters, calm and firm. “You wager everything on one desperate gamble. I speak of survival. Substrate Acidification has poisoned us for generations. The Harvesters’ toxins weaken our threads, dim our signals. This asset could build a vast alkaline buffer, a generational cure for the soil itself. You gamble; I heal.”

​Russel’s acidic thought slices in. “You both look inward. I look outward. Process the asset into a vector, a toxin aimed at the Golden Guild. Their advance on our southern border is the threat that matters.”

​Bolette rises, deep and resonant, the weight of ages in his signal. “A structure cannot stand on rot. Amanis is right. For cycles this council has lurched from wound to wound, fire to fire. Always patching, never building. Our ancestors shaped this network with patience, thread by thread. This asset is nourishment, not a weapon, not a patch. To squander it dishonors their memory.”

​Laccar sparks thin and sharp. “Memory won’t shield us, Bolette. Patience is stagnation. Stagnation is death. The Golden Guild thrives while we fade. A bloom, fueled by this asset, would declare our vitality. Expression is survival. What use is a strong foundation if we are seen as irrelevant?”

​Then Morell speaks. His signal is calm, layered, resonant like chords struck in stone. “You speak of rescue, of soil, of toxins, of spectacle. None of you ask what the asset asks of us. Perhaps it is not here to fuel us, but to test us. It offers power to heal, to kill, to boast, to save. The choice will reveal us. Ask not what to do with it, but what it is doing to us.”

​Silence swallows the chamber. His words hang heavy, unsettling the air itself. Before any can respond, Hyfen signals a pause. Procedure demands petitions be heard. His pulse tight with restraint, he opens the floor.

​Thin, reedy voices flood in.

​“The chartreuse dust from the last bloom lingers. Our caps look diseased. Travelers avoid us.”

“Moisture quotas favor Russel’s sector. Our young dry out.”

“A slime mold trespasses for the third time. We demand arbitration.”

“These new beetles drum too loud. Our rest is broken.”

“The slugs taste us and recoil! Even vermin mock us!”

​The council listens without patience, only endurance. Petty grievances logged beside mortal crisis. Hyfen cuts the line before Sylvan can laugh. Silence slams back, denser than before.

​Then the chamber ruptures. Signals collide.

​“Coward!” Sylvan shrieks at Hyfen.

“Burrow, or I sever my sector!” Truffen threatens.

“NOW! ABSORB NOW!” Corsep and Clavins batter the air with will.

“The whole is what matters!” Amanis, Mycen, Derman push back.

​“ENOUGH.”

​Hyfen does not speak. He strikes. His pulse crashes like a quake, searing through every thread.

​“VOTE.”

​The ground itself shudders. Not a request. A demand. Consensus torn from chaos.

​The storm collapses. Silence settles. The decision comes, stark and unadorned.

​Asset: Absorbed. Energy directed to fortification and acidification buffers.

​Severance: Reconnaissance thread approved. Slow, shielded, indefinite. All else tabled.

​Bloom: Denied.

​Gastropod Protocol: Referred to subcommittee.

​The motion carries. Not victory. Not defeat. Only the quiet of compromise.

​Hyfen gives the final pulse. “Meeting adjourned.”

​The silence returns. The vast, ancient body of the network lies still, digesting its bitter accord

Posted Sep 15, 2025
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