the sunset we watched that day

Submitted into Contest #99 in response to: Begin your story with somebody watching the sunrise, or sunset.... view prompt

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Drama Friendship Sad

this story begins a teen adult named Seline Aria von haiver watching a sunset with her friends Liza Green , Hannah Wibster they watch silently and inspirationally while seline is drawing a picture of the beautiful lake with a sunset background and they saw a young girl named Freya who will be the one to changed their lives so after that they talk to her......

"Freya do you like watching sunset"

"no I don't and do not talk to me you only met me this day!!!"

"i am just trying to be friends with you"

"friends I do not need them "

" please"

" no but I can be your friend if you will not be friends with that blonde girl "

" you mean liza "

"yes "

"so are you willing to sacrifice your friendship with Liza to be friends with me"

"but Liza is an Incomparable friend of mine " (she thought)

"if you become my friend you will be popular with girls and boys you will be able to buy everything you want so are you in or not"

"sure "

"good we are friends now and of course do not talk to Liza or Hannah it will ruin my reputation"

"do I have to bully them"

"of course Seline "

"well ok"

-then Seline talk to them one last time-

"from now on liza and hannah you are no longer my friends i only need freya as my friend "

"why?"

"whatever i do not need to explain myself to the two of you"

-with that Seline pushed liza and hannah at the lake-

"great job Seline"

"lets go home Freya it will be dark soon "

"ok see you Tomorrow "

"bye"

-next day-

at school

" hi liza did you see Seline"

"no i didn't I think she really abandoned us"

"how could you say that!!! "

"are you blind Hannah she chose Freya than us her supposedly best friends"

"but i know she will be our friends again"

" I don't think so "

" because she is influenced by Freya"

"YES"

"and you know how she likes to be popular and buy anything she wants her dreams just come true lets leave her be Hannah we cannot force her to be our friends again its impossible "

"i guess your right "

-then FREYA AND SELINE ARRIVE-

"what's up losers"

"good one Seline "

"leave us alone Seline we don't want to fight with you"

"why not "

"seline we still treasure the moments and memories we spent with you"

"I don't care about the moments we share in the past "

"seline just teach them a lesson"

" ok Freya "

-seline slap and punch Liza until she passed out -

" is that all you got weakling hahaha "

-then they left-

" are you ok Liza "

"no bring me to the hospital Hannah"

"alright "

-few minutes later (at the hospital)

"will she be alright Doctor"

"yes she will"

"thank you for treating my best friend doctor"

"your welcome "

(the doctor leaves the room)

" I cannot believe that Seline will do that"

"yeah me too I was so shocked "

"can we just stop being friends with her already Hannah I cannot take this anymore (she burst with tears )

"no what if Freya abandon her where will she go "

"didn't you see that her attitude and personality changed She is not the Seline we know "

"I know but I won't abandon her even she hurts me "

" do what you want but I am done being her friend"

"ok I understand "

several months later Seline and Freya still bullies Liza and Hannah nonstop until Liza 's body give up she passed away that's when Seline finally realize that her greedy attention and needs is wrong and what she did to Liza is unforgivable so she decided to end her friendship with Freya and also she surrender to the police and she was imprisoned for 10 years and she regret betraying Liza and Hannah just for popularity and money while Freya is also in prison in japan .

-days later (liza's funeral)

" I am so sorry Aunt if I cannot protect liza "(she cried )

"its ok dear I know you tried"

"but the only thing I know is at the very last moment of Liza's life she still hoped that Seline will be your friends again"

" yes i know aunt but i cannot face Seline yet "

" I know dear we are the same I also cannot face Seline because i may hurt her in jail "

" only thing I can say is condolence "

" thank you for being a friend of Seline until the end Hannah

"your welcome Aunt "

" I will go now "

"see you again my dear "

" bye Aunt "

-by the time all the guest and relatives leave Reyla (Liza's mom) cried and cried -

"why did you leave me Liza I cannot live without you " she said with a sob "

-meanwhile at the lake -

this was our favorite place Liza we have many memories here with Seline this was the place were we first met you two reached my hands and everyday we watched the sunset we laugh . we talked about school , families and our weaknesses and our inspiration I wonder if I am going to recreate our memories with Seline after 10 years I hope she will regret everything she did this sunset is the proof of our friendship and happiness the sunset is still beautiful and sparkling at the lake someday I will go back here again but for now this is goodbye until I see you again Seline and by that time my hate for her will be gone ....

-10 years later -

finally Seline was free and start a new life and Hannah is back from her journey they met at the lake where it is now sunset

" its been a long time Seline"

"yeah do you think she forgive me by now "

"yes I think so"

" I am really sorry for betraying the two of you "

" I already forgive you seline "

"lets start our friendship once again "

"sure "

" the sunset is really pretty "

" I agree "

life may not be perfect but the three of us in the past share happiness and struggles we support each other even I was drift at the wrong path the most important I change and learned I may not be able to bring Liza back to life but I know Were ever she is she happy to see me and Hannah be friends once again through this I always cherished my memories with Liza and Hannah deep in my heart this is the end of my story "the sunset we watched that day is our proof our beginning of hopes and change

the end

June 24, 2021 11:42

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