The Presence in the House

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Thriller Horror Mystery

It was the kind of darkness that felt unnatural. Not the peaceful stillness of night, but a heavy, oppressive blackness that seemed to hang in the air, thick and suffocating. Claire had moved into the house just last week, a fresh start, they had called it. A new job, a new town, a new life. She was eager to leave behind the suffocating memories of her old apartment, the endless noise, and the sense of stagnation. This place was quiet, nestled at the edge of a small town, the house itself older than anything she had ever lived in. But Claire had always loved old houses.

Her first nights in the house had been spent unpacking, alone except for her cat, Jasper. The house creaked as old houses do, but that didn’t bother her. It had character. The beams of the floor groaned under her weight as she moved about, but the place felt solid. Safe, even.

Until tonight.

Claire sat in the living room, her eyes heavy as she flicked through a book. Jasper was curled up on the old armchair across from her, purring softly. The house was quiet, but not the peaceful quiet she had grown used to over the past few nights. Something was off.

It started with a sound. Faint at first, barely a whisper of noise that she thought she imagined. A soft creaking, like footsteps on the wooden floor. Claire looked up from her book, her eyes scanning the room. Nothing. Just the same dimly lit space, the faint yellow glow from the lamp casting shadows that danced across the walls. She chalked it up to the house settling, an old home shifting in the cool night air.

But then, the sound came again. Closer this time. Claire’s eyes drifted toward the hallway that led to the kitchen, where the shadows seemed darker. Deeper. She swallowed hard, telling herself that it was nothing. Just her imagination playing tricks on her.

Still, she couldn’t shake the feeling that someone—or something—was in the house.

"Jasper?" she called, her voice barely a whisper. The cat didn’t stir, his purring continuing undisturbed. If there was a presence, Jasper didn’t sense it. Or didn’t care.

Claire tried to focus on her book again, but the words blurred together. Her mind kept wandering to the hallway, the shadows that seemed to pulse with an unseen life. She closed the book with a sigh and decided to get up. A cup of tea would settle her nerves.

As she stood and moved toward the kitchen, the floor creaked beneath her feet, echoing through the stillness. The sound was louder now, the kind of creaking that sent a shiver down her spine. The hallway loomed in front of her, the kitchen just beyond, but the shadows seemed to swallow the light. She fumbled for the switch, flicking it on.

The light flickered once, twice, and then went out, leaving her standing in complete darkness.

Her breath caught in her throat.

The creaking sound started again. This time it was unmistakable. Footsteps. Slow, deliberate. Claire’s heart raced, her skin prickling with cold dread. She wasn’t alone. Something was in the house with her.

"Hello?" she called out, her voice trembling. "Is someone there?"

No response. Only the creaking footsteps, now closer, louder, as if someone—or something—was moving toward her in the darkness.

Her mind raced. She hadn’t locked the door. Had someone broken in? But how? She had been in the living room the whole time. There was no way someone could have entered without her noticing.

Unless… they had already been in the house.

The thought sent a jolt of terror through her. She backed up slowly, her eyes darting around the darkness, searching for any sign of movement. The footsteps stopped. Silence. But the air felt thick with a presence, something unseen watching her.

Her hand fumbled for her phone in her pocket. She needed to call someone, anyone, to come over. But as she unlocked the screen, the display flickered and then died. The battery was fully charged, she had checked just an hour ago.

Her heart pounded in her chest, the sound filling her ears. Something was wrong—terribly wrong.

The footsteps started again, closer now, and Claire felt a cold rush of air, like something had passed right by her, invisible but very much there. She gasped and turned toward the living room, where Jasper still slept peacefully, oblivious to the terror that had gripped her.

Suddenly, she felt it. A hand—cold and clammy—brushed against the back of her neck. She screamed and whipped around, but there was nothing there. Just darkness.

Her breathing was ragged, her mind spinning. She needed to get out. Now. Without thinking, she bolted for the front door, her legs moving faster than she thought possible. But as she reached the entryway, the door wouldn’t budge. It was stuck, as if something was holding it closed from the other side. She pulled and yanked, her fingers slipping on the cold metal knob, but it wouldn’t move.

She felt it again—the cold breath on her neck, the presence right behind her.

"Let me out!" she screamed, banging on the door with her fists, her voice shaking with fear. But the door remained locked, and the darkness seemed to press in around her.

Then, just as suddenly as it began, the feeling was gone. The house was silent again. The air no longer cold. The oppressive presence lifted.

Claire stood there, trembling, her heart still racing. Slowly, she turned back toward the living room. Everything seemed normal. The light in the hallway flickered back on, casting a soft glow across the floor. Jasper was awake now, sitting up in his chair, his eyes fixed on the doorway as if he had sensed something too.

For a moment, Claire wondered if she had imagined it all. The darkness, the footsteps, the cold touch. Maybe it was just her mind playing tricks on her, the stress of the move finally catching up with her. She took a deep breath and tried to steady her nerves.

But as she turned to leave the entryway, her eyes fell on the wall beside the door. There, faint but unmistakable, were scratch marks. Long, deep gouges carved into the wood as if something had tried to claw its way in—or out.

Claire’s blood ran cold.

The house was quiet, but she knew it wasn’t over. Whatever had been in the house wasn’t gone.

It was waiting.

And it would come back.

October 11, 2024 17:14

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