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Contemporary Drama Suspense

Through eye of local window



The Train become medium of all salesman ,deafmen, beggars,handicapped, to hvae possible earnings, they strive to and gives space to them to earn. to beg or to stealing to pickpocket, garbage picker also uses train to collect throwing drinking water every day they also collecting from garbage bags or train luggage compartment by selling to scrap shop give them daily earning or wage of the day

Ladies compartment also combed rushed by vegetable woman sales girl standing by the gate to sell by throwing or waving hand in air ladies cutlery goods shouting by mouth open till customer notice herself here more space for selling working woman who have no time to shopping in market becuz getting late to reach home so the prefer to purchase in train vegetable in afternoon getting rushed or crowded compartment getting jammed no space to move or out or in train when train become late for a minute it's very critical problem for us


Selling child toys also give response it also demand more in train our marketing speaking skill is very simple first thing w e had to choose compartment then supposing public is feeling better we surveying first and relax yourself what to speak before public if our speech get touch to public need then nobody can stop us to sell us in public ",first look is last impression it's small documentary film that in few minute you have to explain in public we already prepared or trained us in campus meeting so so whenever we presenting our product to our speech are ready to present first time i was nervous to present in public getting nervous for a day but friday i was giving us training in train even i was getting mistake when i was presenting that day i was become possible to sell only one piece but since that my senior said me or gave guru mantra that speak before public thinking that they are stupid and we smart salesman if u think like that u will achieve more and u never get afraid tattering in speaking .

When we start our company slogan not uses we alway say that; 'mumbai marketing are now new launching opening new product to sell and advertising of company has give in small amount to direct sell, to public if u purchase that product in shop or mall you have to give double rupees for same product; as this sentence w e pronouncing whole day .


Perfume salesman …...he was very talented person young man i think not married i learned from his selling skill his personality status and attitude he got that from train that carried away daily travelers and never ask for anything it gave us lots blind man who sell daily pass pocket and passbook stationary at clipboard but never beg before public give alms deafman married blind couples singing song and playing tabla string they all assemble daily one station.to lunch somebody fetching their lunch box sitting on bench or ground having lunch they take small day sleep for a hour and then started to work tii train last stop.midnight



Currier kaka…. I just call his like that he work hard servicing for two courier company he daily post hundred courier daily dueto walking all work his body become death skelton seen he living in slum area has family of two daughter and a son wife father mother he is butter earner nobody could help him he also living as on rent basis since ten year i don't know about him more but his life after work finish he visit daily to tadi madi center it is alcohol shop to have some drink to have relax body since day hard work his day hard work has no alternative of relax his body become decreased due to aged person but still he has to get up morning to work becuz he is head rainmaker two daughter haas education to complete to get them married after age of marriage


He is kaka daily meet me at parel Station this spot for all salesman field executive field worker labour beggar hunger kulee all type of comman man job service worker assemble at platform no4 there express train only pass by on this platform and sometime transport train luggage train passing daily but one or two train come to this platform in a day so this platform become restaurant to have lunch in silence place no disturbance so we all choose to have lunch or important meeting or calling customer use this place as communications place. I have more memory for this platform. i want to use this place in my novel. if i become writer i write my book here I feel very comfortable and relaxed mood and get airy place and cool i forget myself here. i even miss myself this platform not only platform animate us transforming us into memoir of my career which had been begun from here here i met many person from them i learnt everything they become star personality of my life


Here i met verification officer……. he work for just meagre salary being paid for the outdoor work to done daily paid field work walking daily make him very weary and he always look wrinkled face which seem scorching since last month

Everyone's coming to here to have relax into such like hot summer this place is very big gift for us he like his work he searching whole day address to loan applicant add an commercial ad he has to visit their add and confirmed to inform banker about his background if he really work for particular company or not his position in company designation his salary compare to bank statement if bank statement given fake it would be good news for his promotion but in company never give him promotion because get sudden angry was reason he could not promoted even he like his job work in his job seen many loan applicant for car home ar credit card but he never wished become one of applicant for loan


For that processing what had needed he was not eligible for all that proceed

He had his own world he wanted freedom free from lust of become rich lust for money he had seen many people how was tangled into that fuck nonsense business so called rattled day by day he didn't want to crush into wheel of lust other did what.

He just want love family .he believe in simplicity not follow world governed by hunger famine doomed into that deep grievances forever forced into greed business that no chances no hopes that help u from once u registered into name of humanity all business being carried by blind man that he believed so that behind man seem believe on him shunned it get lost ever u forced me to believe it was not that typed man

Believe means what you see what u sense what u hear it combined mixture make believe if one that is missing or absence it could not work


Station has narrow bridge to up down public so difficult to move one time both passenger departure arrival train up and down train in evening rush was more become harassment to everyone we have make attraction to such situation to adjust very well.station has his own in his history since it had been built secluded spot it occupied by begar and jobless person it become part of daily life

When he see opposite station skyscraper corporate building his dream make him Live into desired life ignite desire of more blazing desire since start marketing he speak motivational his thought filled with such positive thought he always says" if u want something in life u have work that direction then u become successful ;be god of owns life and be devotee of life


When, I was returning from work, caught in second class train compartment.the crowd at that time nearly,platform was fully empty seemed.it was 3pm afternoon.i just relaxed on the train seat near cornerside at main corridor compartment .at that time my eye caught scene of a couple who opposit me having in romance mood caressing each other and fingering each other and some melody conversation was going on.

I just turned my eyeball straight passenger and another scene caught my eye..it was different from first scene...it about a person who work hard it's called .. Hand Cart driver..who about 45 old crouching near footboard gate.his face looked wrinkle-free,also a mixture of sweat passing through his body.he wore chappal..strapped. He balancing his pose as usual and remove it,put it under his buttock and seat on it.then he drew handkerchief towel over by shoulder and dusting and cleaning work over body..that activity and procession was carry on till next station arrived.



October 09, 2020 14:09

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14:09 Oct 16, 2020

The story is rather gripping, and with some minor grammar improvements would have great potential.

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