TSAU: Close and Far

Written in response to: Write about a character who struggles to express their thanks.... view prompt

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Adventure Drama

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Matteo


I regret all decisions made up until this point.

One thing that I should mention is that I hate running. Like, a lot of running.

And thatโ€™s just what we need to do.

โ€œCAN WE SLOW DOWN?โ€

โ€œYou canโ€™t slow down when you have to save someone!โ€

I groan, my legs already hurting.

โ€œGee, for someone with magic powers you seem to have more stamina!โ€

โ€œI have no clue how you managed to rap all that!โ€

I stifle a laugh.

โ€œSeriously though, can we take a break?โ€

She sighs.

In the condition that weโ€™re in now, running pretty fast and the air breezing past us, I almost donโ€™t hear her words.

โ€œYou know, Iโ€™m only this energetic because I need to save my friend.โ€

I screech to a halt.

โ€œC-can you tell me more?โ€

She stops too, and faces me.

โ€œAh.โ€

โ€œYa donโ€™t have to.โ€

I shrug.

โ€œNo, I was just..thinking. It wouldโ€™ve come to this anyway.โ€

She brushes her hair out of the way.

โ€œWe were friends. Very good friends. We used to play a game. He called it Shadow-and-Seek. I was always the seeker, because we would go in a dark room and he would wrap himself in shadows. It was his power, you know. I would run around the room, trying to find the solid part, and when I bumped into him, we would both laugh, and he would help me up. And then repeat.โ€

She smiled slightly, remembering this.

โ€œWhat happened, then?โ€

She tenses at this.

I wince. Dealing with drama is not my thing.

โ€œWell, long story...kinda short, he craved more power. One day, someone...I donโ€™t know who, came to him with the offer. Iโ€™m guessing it was too good for him, and he accepted.โ€

She took a deep breath.

โ€œI know he isnโ€™t evil. I just know.โ€

Dang, this Grace sure has gone through some crap.

โ€œSo thatโ€™s why weโ€™re going to save him?โ€

โ€œExactly.โ€

This just got a whole lot more interesting.


Ernaline


I sit down at the table, ignoring the shocked looks.

Whatโ€™d you expect, a birthday cake?

AS IF!

โ€œOi, Whatโ€™s with the staring?โ€

They all eyed me. Typical, ainโ€™t it.

โ€œWhy are you sitting here? Arenโ€™t you a rookie, eh?โ€

I laugh.

โ€œMe, a rookie? Speak for yourself.โ€

The one who told me off flushed angry red.

โ€œWe are sitting here because we deserve it, girl. Run off to the farm you came from.โ€

โ€œExcuse me?โ€

I glare daggers at him.

โ€œIโ€™m a demon. A very capable one.โ€

โ€œOooooh, Iโ€™m SOOOO scared.โ€

โ€œYeah, Iโ€™m shaking in fEaR.โ€

Another one of the boys at the table snorts.

โ€œI bet you wouldnโ€™t last five minutes in a real battle.โ€

โ€œWant to find out?โ€

I angrily shout at him.

He cracks his knuckles.

โ€œNameโ€™s Trace, loser. And Iโ€™ll beat you into the ground!โ€

Regaining my composure, I smirk.

My sister has taught me a few things, even though sheโ€™s an angel. A fire angel, but whatever. She did give me my weapon.

I wonder if she would be mad at me now.

Trace has a stereotypical bad guy look, with the dyed neo blue hair, the cut pants, the leather jacket. And by the way heโ€™s laughing right now, he doesnโ€™t think I can beat him.

โ€œCome at me, little ms. Sweetie!โ€

Slowly, a sword forms on my hands. It has dark blue sapphires on it, with delicate carvings and a silver blade. Quite the opposite of my sisterโ€™s sword.

He rushes at me with his fists on fire, what a great tactic.

I sweep his legs and he falls to the floor.

I then hit him with the flat side of my sword. Iโ€™m not that mean, even though I am on the evil side.

He makes a rather weird sound.

I cackle in glee- this is the third time Iโ€™ve bested someone, boy or girl.

โ€œThere! Thatโ€™ll teach you.โ€

As I sit down again, I notice a boy from the table with white and blue hair staring at me.

Heโ€™s the only one that didnโ€™t make fun of me.

I donโ€™t want to break the only sibling tie I have left.


Lya


A cute girl joined us today.

She said her name is Lilith, and that she wonโ€™t be much help and she canโ€™t kill the good people but sheโ€™ll try her best to do anything else.

That sounds a lot like me, to be honest. When I first joined, I told the leader that I canโ€™t help them lessen the numbers of the Light but I am good at interrogations.

Iโ€™m surprised Dragon accepted her into the team, but also glad. She seems very strong. And the fact that sheโ€™s very pretty.

โ€œLYARI! WE NEED YOU FOR ANOTHER STUPID ONE THAT WONโ€™T TALK!โ€

โ€œOKAY, Iโ€™m COMING! GEEZ!โ€

Ugh, not a momentโ€™s rest.

I run to where Prism is waiting. Galen is busy trying to weasel something out the good one, but they wonโ€™t talk.

โ€œAlright boys, outta the way.โ€

Galen nods.

I bend down to where the victim is lying.

โ€œSo you wonโ€™t talk, huh?โ€

The person- a girl, shakes her head.

โ€œI will keep the secrets until I die!โ€

โ€œPfft, not likely here.โ€

โ€œWh-what do you mean?โ€

I didnโ€™t answer. My mind was already breaking the weak defenses on her brain, worming into her memories.

She screamed and Galen clapped his hand over her mouth.

โ€œShut up if you know whatโ€™s good for you.โ€

โ€œWhat are we looking for?โ€

โ€œJust a code.โ€

I looked for a few seconds, then found it easily.

โ€œAlright, found it.โ€

Prism barely gave a nod.

โ€œWhatโ€™s it?โ€

โ€œNine-zero-nine-seven-three-five-two-zero.โ€

The prisoner gave a muffled wail.

Galen forcefully pushed her head forward.

She gasped and then fainted.

Prism half smiled.

โ€œAlright, we got it.โ€

Then he left the room.

Galen slightly shook his head at me then exited too.

I sighed. Boys. Enough said.

Leaving the unconscious girl there, I departed from the room.

Maybe Iโ€™ll get to chat with Lilith.

You canโ€™t run. You definitely canโ€™t hide.



ITS OUT hAHHAHAHAAHAHAHA SPEEDWRITER

November 24, 2021 03:00

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67 comments

TJ Squared
16:39 Nov 25, 2021

if you were to be any animal in a story, what would you be?

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TJ Squared
18:28 Nov 25, 2021

great thanks lol yesh definitely lol

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Lilliane Wei
19:14 Nov 24, 2021

YESSSS ANOTHER PART!! love this one as well celeste! the idea of shadow and seek is so original and i love the way ernaline was able to beat trace so easily XDD

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Lilliane Wei
20:49 Nov 25, 2021

LMAO beating up someone is necessary ๐Ÿ˜Œ

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22:06 Nov 30, 2021

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00:54 Nov 27, 2021

GAWD THESE ARE SO STINKIN GOOD I LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCH LIKE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO PrEtTyYyYyY -Brooke p.s. are one of these my characters? i honestly can't remember what I did. Is Ernaline mine or am I insane or- I FEEL LIKE I HAVE SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS

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o_O tyyyyyyyyyyy :DDDD -leste oh yeah, athena is yours, i haven't wrote her yet but im writing her rn >:))) also might have to make her evil because smdkiejofw

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00:57 Nov 27, 2021

ywwwwwwww :DDD -brooke oh yeahhhh lol also tysmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!! i want her evil hehe >:D

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00:59 Nov 27, 2021

hehehehe *omg yay! i don't care if it's a boy or girl, preferably boy but i mean if it's a girl idc bc i'm so happy I get a love interest if possible :DDDD*

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AYO LYA AND LILITH- AND POOR OLIVA- She really hAs gone through a lot of crap UR SUCH A SPEEDWRITER YOU WROTE THIS SO FAST I- CHDJOSIFNFNUCSUSJSM *pulls out chair* *sits patiently to wait for the next part*

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Jasey Lovegood
06:43 Nov 24, 2021

AYO ANOTHER BANGER OF A PART FOR THE SERIES~ Piece of feedback for ya this time Celeste [I winch. Dealing with drama is not my thing.] Dunno if you meant wince or not, but winch is actually a word so- Great job my friend, can't wait for the next part, you amazing speedwriter <3

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LMAO yEeS *screams and rushes to the story and bangs my head on wall in the process* tysm, it'll be out soon >:D <3

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Jasey Lovegood
22:05 Nov 24, 2021

<33

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